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1、A. structureB. connectivesC. word choiceA wonderfulessayD. sentence varietyHow to write wellWhat sentence patterns do you know?Sentence Varietyemphatic structureV-ing, p.p, to do sthinversionclauses: noun clauses, attributive clauseit sentencesNon- finite Verbs in writing非非谓语动词谓语动词在写作中的在写作中的应应用用1. M
2、aking our city greener is everyones duty. 2. The government is determined to continue the green program.3. I find my hometown changed so much. 4. Having fresh air, trees can reduce air pollution.5. Every effort to make the program makes a difference. 5.5.定语定语2.2. 宾语宾语4.4. 状语状语3.3.宾补宾补1.1. 主语主语找出非谓语动
3、词，并判断成分找出非谓语动词，并判断成分非谓语动词复习回顾非谓语动词复习回顾 1. Seeing from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful . 2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing. 3. Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook. Correction写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误1、状语动作行为者与主
4、句主语不一致、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致Seeing from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .Seen from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .Correction写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误2、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing. In my opinion, climbing mountain is an enjo
5、yable thing.写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误3、主动、被动含义混淆、主动、被动含义混淆 A team calling itself the supper cook.3. Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook. A team called the supper cook.Fun time!Pick a picture and finish the task play musicmakehappyThat they play music makes themhappy.
6、Playing music make a sentence using nonfinite verbs_ by the reporter from CCTV,the man said he was very happy. (interview) Interviewed Finish the sentence using nonfinite verbse.g. Having finished my homework, I went on to help my parents.listen to / burst out laughingHaving listened to the song cal
7、led “Gangnam style”, we burst out laughing.Follow the example and make a sentence.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子1.因为因为在这国家又没有朋友在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。找到工作是不可能的。用连词用连词becauseBecause she has no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构Having no friend in the country
8、, she found it impossible to find a job.2.这本这本用简易英语写成的用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂书很容易读懂用定语从句用定语从句 The book, is easy to understand.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构 The book , is easy to understand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子which was written in simple English, written in simple English,3. Moyan stood there and was surrounded by many r
9、eporters. Moyan stood there surrounded by many reporters.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Al
10、so, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular amon
11、g students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. 用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Also, some students who work hard
12、at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams用非谓语结构美化段落用非谓语结构美化段落 Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their
13、lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非谓语结构美化后的文章用非谓语结构美化后的文章Assessment Write a composition and hand it in.Title: Our Spring Outing高考临近，为了放松放松我们紧张的情
14、绪，我们班高考临近，为了放松放松我们紧张的情绪，我们班经过讨论决定去春游。请就此事谈谈你这次春游的经过讨论决定去春游。请就此事谈谈你这次春游的主要活动和感受。主要活动和感受。(不少于不少于130词）词） Exchange and discuss your partners composition, following the criteria. Criteria（标准）（标准） Content（内容）（内容） Language（语言）（语言） Coherence（连贯）（连贯）Pair workOur Spring Outing National College Entrance Examin
15、ation is coming. To relax ourselves, our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. Having a barbecue is our choice. The next day, we set off early in the morning.We climbed the mountain, talking and laughing . When we arrived, we began to barbecue. Having had a big dinner, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view. We were tired but happy.
