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1、综合介绍及便条写作综合介绍及便条写作2012年年11月月英语专业四级写作英语专业四级写作Brief Introduction of TEM4Requirements:1.Number of word of the essay:about 200 words and 35minutes 2.Marking: clear central idea; good organization; few or no mistakes of grammar and word; neatness of the paper 测试形式v本部分分为主观试题,在主观答题卷2上作答。分两节:SectionA和Sectio
2、nB.vSectionA:Composition15%35分钟v本节是命题作文,文章体裁主要属于说明文议论文或记叙文的范围vSectionB:Note-Writing10%10分钟v本节是写便条.测试范例2：2012年TEM-4写作部分vPARTVIWRITING【45MIN】vSECTIONACOMPOSITION35MINvTheDragonBoatFestival(端午节)isoneoftheimportantnationalfestivalsinChinaWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingto
3、pic：vTheDragonBoatFestivalvFirst,youshouldtellwhatyouknowaboutthefestivalvSecond,youshoulddescribehowyouorotherpeopleusuallyobservethefestivalvMarkswillbeawardedforcontent,organization，languageandappropriatenessFailuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarksvSECTIONBNOTE-WRITING10MINvWriteonAN
4、SWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:vThewintervacationwasover，andyoucamebackbytrainyesterday.Yourfriend(MichaelorLucy)wenttotherailwaystationtomeetyouandhelpedcleaningyourdorm.Now,writehim/heranote,expressingyourgratitudeandofferingyourhelpinreturnvMarkswillbeawardedforc
5、ontentorganization,languageandappropriateness.测试范例2：2011年TEM-4写作部分vPARTVIWRITING45MINvSECTIONACOMPOSITION35MINvRecentlygovernmentagenciesinsomebigcitieshavebeenstudyingthepossibilityofputtinga“pollutiontax”onprivatecars.Theamountoftaxprivatecarownerswouldhavetopaywoulddependontheemissionlevels,i.e.e
6、ngineorvehiclesize.Thishascausedquiteastiramongthepublic.Someregarditasaneffectivewaytocontrolthenumberofcarsandreducepollutioninthecity.Butothersdontthinkso.Whatisyouropinion?vWrite on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:vShouldPrivateCarOwnersbeTaxedforPollut
7、ion?vYou are to write in three parts.vIn the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.vIn the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.vIn the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.vMarks will be awarded for content, organi
8、zation, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.vSECTIONBNOTE-WRITING10MINvWrite on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:vDuringthesummervacationyouwouldliketoinviteyourbestfriendtoyourhometown.Writeano
9、tetohim/her,extendingyourinvitationandtellinghim/herhowtogettoyourhometown.vMarks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness.( (一一) )写作题的性质写作题的性质 写作是人们表达的一种重要手段，我们称之为写作是人们表达的一种重要手段，我们称之为comprehensive test的综合测试，体现的是学生综合的综合测试，体现的是学生综合运用语言的能力。因为它不仅考核考生对词汇的掌握、运用语言的能力。因为它不仅考核
10、考生对词汇的掌握、对语法的应用对语法的应用 ，同时也考查了学生的表达能力、思维的，同时也考查了学生的表达能力、思维的逻辑性和条理性。我们知道，学习英语需掌握四种技能：逻辑性和条理性。我们知道，学习英语需掌握四种技能：听、说、读、写。听和读是语言的听、说、读、写。听和读是语言的input(输入输入)过程，过程，因而对于听力和阅读的测试是考查学习者的被动英文技因而对于听力和阅读的测试是考查学习者的被动英文技能；说和写是语言的能；说和写是语言的output(输出输出)过程，对于口语和写过程，对于口语和写作的测试则是考查学习者的主动英文技能。学习者的被作的测试则是考查学习者的主动英文技能。学习者的被动
11、英文水平往往高于主动英文水平，因此听力理解材料动英文水平往往高于主动英文水平，因此听力理解材料的难度往往大于口语的内容，阅读理解材料的难度往往的难度往往大于口语的内容，阅读理解材料的难度往往要大于写作。由此可见，在经要大于写作。由此可见，在经 过两年基础专业课的学习过两年基础专业课的学习后，学习者应该将重点放在把被动英文水平转化成主动后，学习者应该将重点放在把被动英文水平转化成主动英文水平上英文水平上 。一旦我们的大脑有了大量的语言输出之后，。一旦我们的大脑有了大量的语言输出之后，就能达到出口成章、下笔有神的境界。就能达到出口成章、下笔有神的境界。( (二二) )英语专业四级写作要求英语专业四
12、级写作要求 (1)能根据各种不同的听读材料笔头回答问题，复述内容写摘要、能根据各种不同的听读材料笔头回答问题，复述内容写摘要、写提纲和记笔记。写提纲和记笔记。(2)能根据题目列出写作提纲，在一小时内写出能根据题目列出写作提纲，在一小时内写出200250词的词的短文。短文。以上均要求做到内容完整、条理清楚，语法基本正确，语以上均要求做到内容完整、条理清楚，语法基本正确，语言通顺恰当。言通顺恰当。(3)能写一般的书信、通知、便条、请帖，填写简单的表格，格能写一般的书信、通知、便条、请帖，填写简单的表格，格式正确，语言得体。式正确，语言得体。写作课培养学生初步写作能力，包括提纲、文章摘要、短写作课培
13、养学生初步写作能力，包括提纲、文章摘要、短文以及最简单的常用应用文。文以及最简单的常用应用文。( (三三) )考试大纲对英语专业写作的要求和规定考试大纲对英语专业写作的要求和规定 (1)测试目的：按照英语专业基础阶段英语教学大纲的要求，学生测试目的：按照英语专业基础阶段英语教学大纲的要求，学生在基础阶在基础阶 段末期的英语写作能力。段末期的英语写作能力。(2)题型：主观试题，分为题型：主观试题，分为Section A和和Section B两个部分。两个部分。Section A: Composition写作文写作文Section B: Note-writing写便条写便条(3)测试要求：测试要求
14、：a)作文。要求根据所给的题目和列出的写作提作文。要求根据所给的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲也附有写作提纲) 写一篇写一篇200词左右的短词左右的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言语言 通顺恰当。作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间通顺恰当。作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间为为35分钟分钟,计分计分15分，比重分，比重15%。b)便条。要求根据提示写大约便条。要求根据提示写大约5060词的便条、通知、请帖词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求做
15、到格式正确，语言等。要求做到格式正确，语言 得体。考试时间为得体。考试时间为10分钟。计分分钟。计分10分分,比重比重10%.(1)文章内容切题、丰富，文章通顺，表达清楚。文章内容切题、丰富，文章通顺，表达清楚。(2)行文流畅。行文流畅。(3)组织严密，逻辑性强。组织严密，逻辑性强。(4)句型多样化，句法结构正确。句型多样化，句法结构正确。(5)用词得体、恰当、丰富。用词得体、恰当、丰富。(6)语法正确。语法正确。(7)拼写及标点正确，书写整洁。拼写及标点正确，书写整洁。( (四四) )英语专业四级写作作文的评分标准英语专业四级写作作文的评分标准Personal interests:Hobbi
16、es; life style; fashion; travelingTeenagers problems:Generation gap; smoking; ideal; occupation and career;conceptions etc. Ranges of topics（五）、作文命题所涉及的内容（五）、作文命题所涉及的内容Ranges of topics Social issues:employments; environment; energy; media; traffic; marriage; fake commodities; crime; etc. School life
17、:Method of studying; classroom activities; sports; personal relationship; lectures; militant training,etc.New technologies:Commuter; cloning; space science; traffic tools; sea resources;Four kinds of writingDescription1.detailed description, unmodified description 2.direct description and indirect d
18、escription 3. Description of person, of scene, of object,of place,Narrationaccording to the sequence of the time ,start from the beginning of the story or start from the end of the story, or start from the middle of the story by using flash back(Making clear of the time ,the place,and the characters
19、 who are involved in the story) Exposition comparison and contrast; division and classification; cause and effect; illustration/exemplification; definition Argumentation Argument(idea, attitude, opinion)must be true,clear and keep the same from the beginning to the end. Evidence(facts and theory)mus
20、t be powerful and reasonable.Process of reasoning must be logically clear.(analogy, deduction and induction)1）Date：便条日期：便条日期2）Salutation：称呼：称呼3）Body：正文：正文4）Signature：署名：署名 Basic components of note-writing便条写作分析便条写作分析特点：特点： 1.文内语言尽量通俗口语化，简单扼要，直文内语言尽量通俗口语化，简单扼要，直截了当，无需使用客套语言。截了当，无需使用客套语言。2.便条虽简单，但中心务必
21、突出，更要注明便条虽简单，但中心务必突出，更要注明活动的时间及地点。活动的时间及地点。 3. 便条不需邮寄，不用信封。通常请人代为便条不需邮寄，不用信封。通常请人代为转交。有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。转交。有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。 Characteristics of note-writing专业四级多便条的要求专业四级多便条的要求专业四级多便条的要求如下：专业四级多便条的要求如下：10分钟内写一个分钟内写一个50-60字的便条，总分为字的便条，总分为10分，分，6分为及格线。分为及格线。一一 便条必须包括以下几个基本要素便条必须包括以下几个基本要素1）Date：便条日期：便条日期2）Sa
22、lutation：称呼：称呼3）Body：正文：正文4）Signature：署名：署名二、评分标准二、评分标准1.格式：（占格式：（占2分）：包括日期、称呼和结尾三部分分）：包括日期、称呼和结尾三部分 日期（日期（DATE），位置在右上角或左上角。），位置在右上角或左上角。正确：正确：April16th,2011April16,2011April16thApril1616/4/2011 4/16/2011Abbreviationsareusuallyused,Jan.,Feb.,Mar.,Apr.,May,June(Jun.),July(Jul.),Aug.,Sept.,Oct.,Nov.,a
23、ndDec.v称呼（称呼（HEADING），位置在日期下面一行左侧。），位置在日期下面一行左侧。正确：正确：(Dear)Mike:(,) 结尾（结尾（ENDING）：）：正确：正确：Truly/Sincerelyyours,Yourstruly/sincerely,Yours,Sincerely,Mike,Hilda（若在一行扣（若在一行扣1分）分）YoursSincerely（两个单词的首字母都大写扣（两个单词的首字母都大写扣1分）分）若名字没写或人名若名字没写或人名XXX（或（或Mike/Hilda）扣）扣1分。分。格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若不符合，扣格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若
24、不符合，扣1分。分。凡不符合上述正确格式或表达均要扣凡不符合上述正确格式或表达均要扣1分。最多扣扣分。最多扣扣2分。分。2.内容：（占内容：（占3分）一般包括三部分内容分）一般包括三部分内容写便条的原因写便条的原因要告诉的事情要告诉的事情有关的建议、希望或要求等有关的建议、希望或要求等Note:少一点扣一分，最多扣少一点扣一分，最多扣3分；需用自己正确的语言分；需用自己正确的语言表达，若完全抄提示扣一分表达，若完全抄提示扣一分3.语法：（占语法：（占4分）要求语法、词汇正确分）要求语法、词汇正确Note:眼中语法、句法错误扣眼中语法、句法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误分，一个句子或同类错误扣扣
25、1分，拼写等小错误两个扣分，拼写等小错误两个扣1分，最多扣分，最多扣4分分4.语言得体性：（占语言得体性：（占1分）分）总分在总分在8分及以上时可分及以上时可考虑加此分考虑加此分5.便条总字数（包括三部分格式在内）要求在便条总字数（包括三部分格式在内）要求在50-60字；不到字；不到40或超过或超过80词扣词扣1分。分。便条真题1999（慰问）（慰问）YouvelearnedthatyourfriendJimmyisillthesedays.Writehimanoteexpressingyourconcern,askingafterhishealthandgivingyourbestwishe
26、s.2000（建议）（建议）Youhavereadonthenoticeboardthattheuniversitylibraryislookingforapart-timelibraryassistantwhocanworkatweekends.Youthinkthatyourclassmate,George,isasuitablepersonforthisvacancy.Writehimanote,tellinghimwhatyouknowaboutthevacancyandtryingtopersuadehimtogoforaninterview.2001（道歉）Yesterdayyou
27、failedtoturnupfortheappointmentwithyourteacher,ProfessorWang.Writehimanoteofapologyandmakearequestforanothermeeting.Youshouldalsosuggestthetimefortherequestedmeeting.2002（询问）Youhaveheardyourfriend,Jack,wishestosellhiswalkman.Writehimanoteexpressingyourinterestinit,askinghimaboutitsconditionandofferi
28、ngapriceforit.2003（拒绝邀请）YourfriendClarehasinvitedyoutoherhouse-warmingpartythisweekend.However,youwillbeawaythen.Writeheranotepolitelydecliningherinvitationandexpressingyourbestwishestoher.2004（表示同情）Yourfriend,Jane,hasfailedinthefinalexam,andisfeelingveryunhappyaboutit.Writeanotetocomfortherandgiveh
29、ersomeencouragement.2005（邀请）Youhavegottwoticketstoaconcertgivenbyafamouspopband/orchestra.Writeanotetoyourfriend,Hilda/Mike,describingbrieflywhatitisandinvitingher/himtocomewithyou.2006（询问）Youhavegottoknowthatyouclassmate,Michael,isorganizingaweekendexcursionfortheclass.Andyouarethinkingofjoiningthe
30、trip,writehimanoteexpressingyourinterestintheexcursionandaskingforinformationontwodetailsrelatedtotheexcursion.2007（拒绝邀请）Yourclassmate,Jimmy,isheadoftheuniversitysswimmingclub.Hehasinvitedyoutojointheclub,butyoulikesomeothersport.Writehimanote,declininghisinvitationandexplainingwhy.2008（推荐）Jane,your
31、classmate,isthinkingofsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper.Andyouwouldliketorecommendonetoher.Writeanote,tellingherwhichnewspaperitisanddescribingtwofeaturesofthepaper.2009（推荐）Lily,yourroommate,islookingforapart-timejobinthecomingsummervacation.YousawanadforaprivateEnglishtutorforaschoolboy.Writ
32、eheranote,tellingherwhatthejobisandstronglyrecommendingittoher.2010（建议）Yourgoodfriend,John,isthinkingoforganizinganend-of-the-termparty.Writehimanotetellinghimthatyoulikehisideaandoffertohelphim.Youhavetobespecificabouthowyouhelphim.2007（拒绝邀请）（拒绝邀请）WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedont
33、hefollowingsituation:Yourclassmate,Jimmy,isheadoftheuniversitysswimmingclub.Hehasinvitedyoutojointheclub,butyoulikesomeothersport.Writehimanote,declininghisinvitationandexplainingwhy.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.April22nd,2007DearJimmy,Itsverykindofyoutoinvitem
34、etojointheuniversitysswimmingclub.Iammostgratefultobeasked.However,Ivealreadyjoinedabasketballclub.YouknowIlikeplayingbasketballverymuch.ImafraidIdonothaveenoughtimetotakepartintwosports.IamverysorryforthatandreallyregretthatIwouldmisssuchanexcellentchanceofenjoyingswimmingwithyou.Goodlucktoyourclub
35、.Yours,Mike22April,2007DearJimmy,Thankyouforyourinvitingmetoparticipatingintheuniversitysswimmingclub.ButIregrettotellyouthatImnotabletojoinyou,sinceIfoundmyselfmoreinterestedinthebasketballclub.Ihopeyouwillnotbeangrytome.Yours,MikeApril22,2007DearJimmy,Sorry!Icouldnttakepartinyouruniversityswimming
36、club,becauseImorelikefootball.Ihavetodeclineyourinvitation.Whatapity!Iamsureyouwillnotbeangryatme,becauseyouarealwaysmybestfriend.Sorryagain!Yours,TomHello,Jimmy:ImshytotellyouIlikeothersport.SoIdonttakepartinyouclub.Youmayask:Why?Notbecauseotherreasons,Iinterestedmoreinpingponganditismorecheaper.It
37、hink,exceptme,morepeoplewillsupportyou.Tony便条写作八大类型板块1.约会一般包含三方面内容：v约会的事由v建议约会的时间和地点v期待对方做出回复，并可表示感谢SamplevWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:vYouhavemanyproblemsaboutyourcurrentwork,soyouwanttoseeyourfriend,Jane,forheradvice.Writeheranote,makinganappointmentto
38、seehertomorrow.Donotsignyourownname,using“Rain”instead.vMarkswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriatenessJuly12DearJane,IwonderifIcouldseeyouinyourofficetomorrow,at10:00a.m.Ihavemanyproblemstotalkoverwithyouonmycurrentwork.Itmakesmeverypuzzled.SoIhopeyoucouldgivemesomegoodadvice.Pl
39、easegivemeacallandletmeknowwhetheritisOK,orwhenyouareconvenient.Yours,RainClassJob:Note-Writing(10MIN)vWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:vYouwanttodiscussyourpaperwithyoursupervisorProfessorWangtosolvetheproblemsduringthepaperresearch.Writehimanote,makinganapp
40、ointmenttoseehimtomorrow.Donotsignyourownname,using“Nick”instead.vMarkswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriatenessJuly12DearProfessorWang,Duringtheresearch,Ihavefoundsomeproblems.Iwannasolvetheseproblemsfirst,andthengoonmyresearch.Idliketotalkthemaboutwithyouatyourofficetomorrowaf
41、ternoon.Pleaseringmeifyoufindthetimeisnotconvenientforyou.Yours,Nick2.道歉一般包含三方面内容：v说明为何事而致歉v解释造成过失或不能履约的原因v再次致歉或提出解决方案SamplevWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:vYouareWangMing.Youhaveborrowedabookfromyourfriend,LiuHui.Unfortunately,ourdaughterbrokeit.Writeheran
42、ote,makinganapologyandexplainingwhy.vMarkswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriatenessJuly12DearLiuHui,Iamterriblysorrytotellyouthatthebookyouhavelentmewasbrokenbymydaughter.Iintendedtoreturnittoday,butwhenIcamebackhome,Ifounditbrokenbymylittledaughter.Iwillgetanewcopyforyou.Forthi
43、sirrecoverableloss,Iamtoblame.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologies.Yours,WangMingClassJob:Note-Writing(10MIN)vWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:vYouareChenBo.YoullattendanEnglishcompetitiononbehalfofyourclass.Butsuddenlyyourvoiceisinabadcondition.WritetoMrs.Liandtel
44、lheryourquittingthecompetition.Writeheranote,makinganapologyandexplainingwhy.vMarkswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriatenessJuly12DearMrs.Li,ImreallysorrytohavetotellyouthatIshallnotbeabletoattendtheEnglishcompetition,becausemyvoiceisinabadcondition.ThenIrecommendWangLitotakemyp
45、lace.SheisgoodatoralEnglish.IdohopeIcanattendthiscompetition,butthedoctortoldmethatIshouldhavearest.Myregrets.Yourssincerely,ChenBo3.邀请邀请一般包含三方面内容：一般包含三方面内容：v邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点v与该活动有关的注意事项与该活动有关的注意事项v期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢SamplevWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsba
46、sedonthefollowingsituation:vYouareLiMing,themonitorofyourclass.SupposeyourclassisgoingtohaveameetingtodiscusshowtolearnEnglishwell.WriteanotetoinviteProfessorChentoattendthemeeting.Tellhimtheexacttimeandplace.vMarkswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriatenessJuly12DearProfessorChen
47、,Weshallgreatlyappreciateitifyoucanattendourclassmeeting.WelldiscusshowtoimproveourEnglishinRoom201ofteachingbuildingNo.1at7:00p.m.ofJuly16.allofusdohopeyoucancomeandgiveussomevaluableadvice.Wearelookingforwardtoseeingyou.Sincerelyyours,LiMingClassJob:Note-Writing(10MIN)vWriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanote
48、ofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:vYou,WangMing,havejustreceivedanotefromyourfriend,LiWei,invitingyoutohisbirthdaypartyonthecomingSunday.Nowwritetoinformhimofyouracceptanceoftheinvitation.vMarkswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriatenessJuly12DearLiWei,Iwanttoexpressmy
49、heartfeltcongratulationtoyouonyourcoming20thbirthday.IamverypleasedtoaccepttheinvitationtoyourbirthdaypartyonthecomingSunday,July19.Iwillarriveatyourhomeat5:00p.m.thatday.Imlookingforwardtomeetingyou.Yours,WangMing英语专业四级英语专业四级便条便条写作分析写作分析与总结与总结 便条：便条：便条：便条： 写便条写便条写便条写便条（note-writingnote-writingnote-
50、writingnote-writing）。）。）。）。 该部分的考试要求考生能根据提示写该部分的考试要求考生能根据提示写50-6050-60个单词个单词的便条、通知、请帖等。能做到格式正确，语言得体。的便条、通知、请帖等。能做到格式正确，语言得体。考试时间考试时间1010分钟。计分分钟。计分1010，比重，比重10%10%。 每年在该部分失分的主要原因是：每年在该部分失分的主要原因是： 1 1）没有正确书写便条格式；）没有正确书写便条格式； 2 2）遗漏或错误表达重要的信息点；）遗漏或错误表达重要的信息点； 3 3）语言风格把握不够准确。）语言风格把握不够准确。 1 1、应试技巧、应试技巧、应
51、试技巧、应试技巧 1 1 1 1）合理安排时间。）合理安排时间。）合理安排时间。）合理安排时间。 建议审题和构思建议审题和构思建议审题和构思建议审题和构思（不一定列提纲）（不一定列提纲）（不一定列提纲）（不一定列提纲）2-32-3分钟，分钟，分钟，分钟， 写作写作写作写作5-65-6分钟，分钟，分钟，分钟， 检查错误检查错误检查错误检查错误2-32-3分钟。分钟。分钟。分钟。 2 2 2 2）细读考试说明。）细读考试说明。）细读考试说明。）细读考试说明。 切勿遗漏或错误表达重要信息点。切勿遗漏或错误表达重要信息点。切勿遗漏或错误表达重要信息点。切勿遗漏或错误表达重要信息点。 200120012
52、0012001年的考题：年的考题：年的考题：年的考题： Write on your Answer Sheet One a note of Write on your Answer Sheet One a note of Write on your Answer Sheet One a note of Write on your Answer Sheet One a note of about 50-60 words based on the following about 50-60 words based on the following about 50-60 words based on
53、 the following about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Yesterday you failed to turn up for situation: Yesterday you failed to turn up for situation: Yesterday you failed to turn up for situation: Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor the appoint
54、ment with your teacher, Professor the appointment with your teacher, Professor the appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a Wang. Write him a note of apology and mak
55、e a request for another meeting. You should also request for another meeting. You should also request for another meeting. You should also request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting.suggest the time for the requested meeting.suggest the time for the reque
56、sted meeting.suggest the time for the requested meeting. 信息点：信息点：信息点：信息点： 1 1、写给、写给、写给、写给Professor WangProfessor Wang 2 2、因无法赴约而道歉、因无法赴约而道歉、因无法赴约而道歉、因无法赴约而道歉 3 3、另约他见面、另约他见面、另约他见面、另约他见面 4 4、再次见面的时间、再次见面的时间、再次见面的时间、再次见面的时间SamplevApril,20vProfessorWang,vIamsorryforfailingtoturnupyesterday.Itisbecauset
57、hatIwascaughtbyanunexpectedcoldandgotahighfever.Iwanttoexpressmyapologyagainformakingyouwaitingforme.Whatismore,IhopethatIwouldgetanotherchancetomeetyouwhenyouareconvenient.AreyoufreethisFriday?Ifyouareavailablethatday,pleaseinformme.Thanksalot!vYourstudent,vTom 2 2 2 2、训练方法、训练方法、训练方法、训练方法（十六字口诀）（十六
58、字口诀）（十六字口诀）（十六字口诀） 强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。 1 1 1 1）格式：）格式：）格式：）格式： 时间、称谓、落款的标准书写。时间、称谓、落款的标准书写。时间、称谓、落款的标准书写。时间、称谓、落款的标准书写。 If you donIf you dont knowt knowthe namethe name不知对方姓名不知对方姓名Dear Sir/ Madam,Dear Sir/ Madam,Dear schoolmates,Dear schoo
59、lmates,Yours faithfully,Yours faithfully,David SmithDavid Smith（写全名）（写全名）If you know the If you know the surname of the surname of the person but he/she is person but he/she is not a closenot a close friendfriend认识但不熟悉认识但不熟悉Dear Mr. Smith,Dear Mr. Smith,Dear Professor Dear Professor Wang,Wang,Dear D
60、r. Brown,Dear Dr. Brown,Yours sincerely,Yours sincerely,David SmithDavid Smith（写全名）（写全名）If the person is a If the person is a friend or a relativefriend or a relative近亲或好友近亲或好友Dear Allen,Dear Allen,Dear Tim,Dear Tim,Best regards/Best Best regards/Best wishes/Love/Yours,wishes/Love/Yours,David David
61、（写名不写姓）（写名不写姓） 2 2 2 2、训练方法、训练方法、训练方法、训练方法（十六字口诀）（十六字口诀）（十六字口诀）（十六字口诀） 强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。 2 2 2 2）内容：）内容：）内容：）内容： 分析便条的目的和要点，避免信息遗失；分析便条的目的和要点，避免信息遗失；分析便条的目的和要点，避免信息遗失；分析便条的目的和要点，避免信息遗失； 扩展要点，写出相关信息；扩展要点，写出相关信息；扩展要点，写出相关信息；扩展要点，写出相关信息； 注意
62、特殊要求。注意特殊要求。注意特殊要求。注意特殊要求。 3 3 3 3）根据不同对象，便条使用语言的风格完全不同。）根据不同对象，便条使用语言的风格完全不同。）根据不同对象，便条使用语言的风格完全不同。）根据不同对象，便条使用语言的风格完全不同。 casualcasualcasualcasual； formal.formal.formal.formal. 2 2 2 2、训练方法、训练方法、训练方法、训练方法（十六字口诀）（十六字口诀）（十六字口诀）（十六字口诀） 强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。强化格式；明确目的；语言风格；因人而异。强化格式；明
63、确目的；语言风格；因人而异。 文体内容正式 FormalFormal非正式 CasualCasual致歉致歉（apologyapology）I Im terribly sorry, m terribly sorry, butbutI am afraid I I am afraid I I must apologize aboutI must apologize aboutI Im very sorry m very sorry butbutI am sorry aboutI am sorry about抱怨投诉抱怨投诉（complaintcomplaint）I must complain ab
64、outI must complain aboutI am not satisfied I am not satisfied withwithI feel something should I feel something should be done aboutbe done aboutCould youCould youCan youCan youI Id like you tod like you to提出请求提出请求（requestrequest）Could you pleaseCould you please? ?Would it be possible toWould it be p
65、ossible toI would be grateful if you I would be grateful if you couldcouldWould you mind doingWould you mind doingI wonder if you couldI wonder if you could Could youCould youCan youCan youI Id like you tod like you to提出建议提出建议（making making suggestionsuggestion）I Id like to suggest thatd like to sug
66、gest thatMay I suggest thatMay I suggest thatCould you pleaseCould you pleaseHow aboutHow aboutWhat aboutWhat aboutWhy donWhy dont wet weLetLets s致谢致谢（thanksthanks）I would like to express my I would like to express my sincere gratitude to yousincere gratitude to youI hope to show my heartfelt I hope
67、 to show my heartfelt thanks to youthanks to youThank you very Thank you very much.much.I owe you once.I owe you once. 1. 1. 1. 1. Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about 5
68、0-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation: Your friend Claire has invited you to her Your friend Claire has invited you to her Your friend Claire has invited you t
69、o her Your friend Claire has invited you to her house-warming party this weekend. However, you house-warming party this weekend. However, you house-warming party this weekend. However, you house-warming party this weekend. However, you will be away then. Write her a note politely will be away then.
70、Write her a note politely will be away then. Write her a note politely will be away then. Write her a note politely declining her invitation and expressing your declining her invitation and expressing your declining her invitation and expressing your declining her invitation and expressing your best
71、 wishes to her.best wishes to her.best wishes to her.best wishes to her. Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.org
72、anization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.参考范文参考范文参考范文参考范文1 1 1 1 May 10thMay 10thMay 10thMay 10thDear Clare,Dear Clare,Dear Clare,Dear Clare, Thank you very much for inviting me to the Thank you very much for inviting me to the Thank you very much for inviting
73、 me to the Thank you very much for inviting me to thehouse-warming party you are going to give thishouse-warming party you are going to give thishouse-warming party you are going to give thishouse-warming party you are going to give thisweekend. But I am so sorry that I cannot turn upweekend. But I
74、am so sorry that I cannot turn upweekend. But I am so sorry that I cannot turn upweekend. But I am so sorry that I cannot turn upat the party because I will be on a business tripat the party because I will be on a business tripat the party because I will be on a business tripat the party because I w
75、ill be on a business tripto Shanghai then.to Shanghai then.to Shanghai then.to Shanghai then. I do appreciate your inviting me and hopeI do appreciate your inviting me and hopeI do appreciate your inviting me and hopeI do appreciate your inviting me and hopethat I can visit your new house in the nea
76、rthat I can visit your new house in the nearthat I can visit your new house in the nearthat I can visit your new house in the nearfuture, and your life will be sweeter and more future, and your life will be sweeter and more future, and your life will be sweeter and more future, and your life will be
77、 sweeter and more pleasant in the new house.pleasant in the new house.pleasant in the new house.pleasant in the new house. Yours, Yours, Yours, Yours, Rocky Rocky Rocky Rocky 2. 2. 2. 2. Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a n
78、ote of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation: You have heard that your friend, Jack, You have heard that your
79、friend, Jack, You have heard that your friend, Jack, You have heard that your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in
80、it, asking him expressing your interest in it, asking him expressing your interest in it, asking him expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for about its condition and offering a price for about its condition and offering a price for about its condition a
81、nd offering a price for it.it.it.it. Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriatene
82、ss.organization, grammar and appropriateness.参考范文参考范文参考范文参考范文2 2 2 2 May 10thMay 10thMay 10thMay 10thDear Jack,Dear Jack,Dear Jack,Dear Jack, I I I I ve heard that you wish to sell your ve heard that you wish to sell your ve heard that you wish to sell your ve heard that you wish to sell your walkma
83、n.walkman.walkman.walkman.I want to buy it if possible because my walkman I want to buy it if possible because my walkman I want to buy it if possible because my walkman I want to buy it if possible because my walkman was lost two weeks ago and I need one to help me was lost two weeks ago and I need
84、 one to help me was lost two weeks ago and I need one to help me was lost two weeks ago and I need one to help me study English now.study English now.study English now.study English now. Could you please let me know the present Could you please let me know the present Could you please let me know th
85、e present Could you please let me know the present conditions of your walkman? And then I will offerconditions of your walkman? And then I will offerconditions of your walkman? And then I will offerconditions of your walkman? And then I will offeryou a reasonable price. Hope the deal can be doneyou
86、a reasonable price. Hope the deal can be doneyou a reasonable price. Hope the deal can be doneyou a reasonable price. Hope the deal can be donebetween us.between us.between us.between us. Yours ever, Yours ever, Yours ever, Yours ever, Rocky Rocky Rocky Rocky 3. 3. 3. 3. Write on Answer Sheet Two a
87、note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the
88、following situation: Yesterday you failed to turn up for the Yesterday you failed to turn up for the Yesterday you failed to turn up for the Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. appointment with your tea
89、cher, Professor Wang. appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request Write him a note of apology and make a request Write him a note of apology and make a request Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also sugges
90、t for another meeting. You should also suggest for another meeting. You should also suggest for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting.the time for the requested meeting.the time for the requested meeting.the time for the requested meeting. Marks will be awarded
91、for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.参考范文参考范文3 3 Ma
92、y 10thMay 10thDear Professor Wang,Dear Professor Wang, I Im terribly sorry for missing the appointmentm terribly sorry for missing the appointmentwith you. But I have to tell you that I got involvedwith you. But I have to tell you that I got involved in a road accident on my way to your office that
93、morning in a road accident on my way to your office that morning and my right leg was slightly injured.and my right leg was slightly injured. I know you I know youre pretty occupied these days, but Ire pretty occupied these days, but Iwonder if you could arrange for another appointment withwonder if
94、 you could arrange for another appointment withme now that I badly need your help with my thesis. Wouldme now that I badly need your help with my thesis. WouldThis Tuesday afternoon be convenient for you? IfThis Tuesday afternoon be convenient for you? Ifpossible, I will go to your office at three p
95、.m. I lookpossible, I will go to your office at three p.m. I lookforward to your early reply.forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Yours sincerely, Wu Xiaoming Wu Xiaoming 4. 4. 4. 4. Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Tw
96、o a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation: YouYouYouYouve read on the notice board that the ve read on
97、 the notice board that the ve read on the notice board that the ve read on the notice board that the university library is looking for a part-time university library is looking for a part-time university library is looking for a part-time university library is looking for a part-time library assista
98、nt who can work at weekends. library assistant who can work at weekends. library assistant who can work at weekends. library assistant who can work at weekends. You think that your classmate, George, is a You think that your classmate, George, is a You think that your classmate, George, is a You thi
99、nk that your classmate, George, is a suitable person for this vacancy. Write him a suitable person for this vacancy. Write him a suitable person for this vacancy. Write him a suitable person for this vacancy. Write him a note, telling him what you know about the note, telling him what you know about
100、 the note, telling him what you know about the note, telling him what you know about the vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for an interview.an interview.an in
101、terview.an interview. Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and organization, grammar and organization, grammar and organization, grammar and appropriateness.appropriateness.参考
102、范文参考范文参考范文参考范文4 4 4 4 May 10thMay 10thDear George,Dear George, I have learned from the notice board that the I have learned from the notice board that the university is looking for a part-time library assistanceuniversity is looking for a part-time library assistancewho can work at weekends. I know
103、you are looking for a who can work at weekends. I know you are looking for a part-time job these days. I think you are the suitable part-time job these days. I think you are the suitable person for this vacancy, for you are free at weekends and person for this vacancy, for you are free at weekends a
104、nd it pays well and most importantly, the job gives you a it pays well and most importantly, the job gives you a free access to the reading room, which is a good chance free access to the reading room, which is a good chance to improve yourself. So why not go for an interview?to improve yourself. So
105、 why not go for an interview? Good luck!Good luck! Yours truly, Yours truly, Rocky Rocky 5. 5. 5. 5. Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about 50-60 words based on the follow
106、ing situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation: YouYouYouYouve learned that your friend Jimmy is ve learned that your friend Jimmy is ve learned that your friend Jimmy is ve learned that your friend
107、 Jimmy is ill these days. Write him a note expressing ill these days. Write him a note expressing ill these days. Write him a note expressing ill these days. Write him a note expressing your concern, asking about his health and your concern, asking about his health and your concern, asking about his
108、 health and your concern, asking about his health and giving your best wishes.giving your best wishes.giving your best wishes.giving your best wishes. Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, organizat
109、ion, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness. 参考范文参考范文参考范文参考范文5 5 5 5 May 10thMay 10thMay 10thMay 10th Dear Jimmy, Dear Jimmy, Dear Jimmy, Dear Jimmy, I am sorry to hear that you are ill
110、 these days. I I am sorry to hear that you are ill these days. I I am sorry to hear that you are ill these days. I I am sorry to hear that you are ill these days. I can easily imagine the pain you are having now, for I can easily imagine the pain you are having now, for I can easily imagine the pain
111、 you are having now, for I can easily imagine the pain you are having now, for I got to know that you are down with a bad flu. Are you got to know that you are down with a bad flu. Are you got to know that you are down with a bad flu. Are you got to know that you are down with a bad flu. Are you fee
112、ling better now? I really want to see you today, but feeling better now? I really want to see you today, but feeling better now? I really want to see you today, but feeling better now? I really want to see you today, but you know we will have the mid-term examination this you know we will have the m
113、id-term examination this you know we will have the mid-term examination this you know we will have the mid-term examination this afternoon. Anyway, I will try to come to you tomorrow afternoon. Anyway, I will try to come to you tomorrow afternoon. Anyway, I will try to come to you tomorrow afternoon
114、. Anyway, I will try to come to you tomorrow morning. I hope you will recover by then. Please take morning. I hope you will recover by then. Please take morning. I hope you will recover by then. Please take morning. I hope you will recover by then. Please take good care of yourself.good care of your
115、self.good care of yourself.good care of yourself. Yours ever, Yours ever, Yours ever, Yours ever, Rocky Rocky Rocky Rocky 6. 6. 6. 6. Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of abou
116、t 50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation:50-60 words based on the following situation: You are Mark or Sally. You have got a You are Mark or Sally. You have got a You are Mark or Sally. You have got a You
117、 are Mark or Sally. You have got a ticket to a computer fair, but you now find ticket to a computer fair, but you now find ticket to a computer fair, but you now find ticket to a computer fair, but you now find that you are unable to go. Write a note to that you are unable to go. Write a note to tha
118、t you are unable to go. Write a note to that you are unable to go. Write a note to your friend, George, explaining why you are your friend, George, explaining why you are your friend, George, explaining why you are your friend, George, explaining why you are sending the enclosed ticket to him and te
119、lling sending the enclosed ticket to him and telling sending the enclosed ticket to him and telling sending the enclosed ticket to him and telling him briefly how to get there.him briefly how to get there.him briefly how to get there.him briefly how to get there. Marks will be awarded for content, M
120、arks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness.organization, grammar and appropriateness. 参考范文参考范文参考范文参考范文6 6 6 6 May
121、 10thMay 10thMay 10thMay 10th Dear George, Dear George, Dear George, Dear George, I have got a ticket to a computer fair but I won I have got a ticket to a computer fair but I won I have got a ticket to a computer fair but I won I have got a ticket to a computer fair but I won t t t t be able to go
122、there this afternoon, for I have an be able to go there this afternoon, for I have an be able to go there this afternoon, for I have an be able to go there this afternoon, for I have an important appointment with Professor Malone, my important appointment with Professor Malone, my important appointm
123、ent with Professor Malone, my important appointment with Professor Malone, my academic advisor. I know you are always keen on playing academic advisor. I know you are always keen on playing academic advisor. I know you are always keen on playing academic advisor. I know you are always keen on playin
124、g on the computer, so I decided to send this ticket to on the computer, so I decided to send this ticket to on the computer, so I decided to send this ticket to on the computer, so I decided to send this ticket to you. I think you will like it. Please find the ticket you. I think you will like it. P
125、lease find the ticket you. I think you will like it. Please find the ticket you. I think you will like it. Please find the ticket enclosed.enclosed.enclosed.enclosed. May you a good day! May you a good day! May you a good day! May you a good day! Yours ever, Yours ever, Yours ever, Yours ever, MarkMark Thank you !
