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1、高考英语书面表达写作指导高考英语书面表达写作指导之之漫漫 画画 作作 文文( (议论类议论类) )20102010届届Tasks:1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing2010年江苏省高考说明：年江苏省高考说明：writing漫画类漫画类2010年江苏省高考说明：年江苏省高考说明：writing示例示例2010年江苏省高考说
2、明：年江苏省高考说明：writing议论类议论类2010?之之英语漫画作文英语漫画作文( (议论类议论类) )攻攻略略Group work （1）:1. share your essay with your group members 2. raise the difficulties you had when writing itDifficulties?1. 读图读图2. 解意解意3. 谋篇谋篇读图读图1. 漫画的漫画的题目题目 眼睛眼睛2. 漫画的漫画的画面画面 细节细节3. 漫画的漫画的文字文字 观点观点4. 漫画的漫画的夸张夸张 寓意寓意读图读图题目题目 画面画面 文字文字 夸张夸张
3、 读图读图The underwear ( shorts for men and panties for ladies) is a funny way to look at how desperate parents get - trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not - and maybe underwear isnt a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of the materials on the Internet!夸张夸张Lets p
4、ractise!题目题目 画面画面 文字文字 夸张夸张 解意解意1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度辨明褒贬，找准角度 夸奖褒扬夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？批评讽喻？ 解意解意. 联系生活，明晰主旨联系生活，明晰主旨 Imagination! 解意解意注意注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！切记要认真阅读！Lets practise!Lets practise! The picture shows some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor country
5、side, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are sometimes forced to leave their studies because their families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, the situation is totally different in the cities. Almost all the children in the cities can have regular education.
6、 But they have their own problems. What they face is the endless homework, which puts so much pressure on them that some students dont want to continue their studies. 谋篇谋篇3 parts:1) describe the picture2) interpret its meaning3) give your opinions about the phenomenonPart 1 Describe the pictureThe p
7、icture is talking about/showsThe picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.In the picture, there are/is (are) doingThe picture above is about Lets look at the picture above/first.Lets practise!Describe the picture The picture is talking about a story about ne
8、ighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” when they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them says, “I moved here 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please?” The other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you?”Lets
9、 practise!Describe the picture We can see in the picture that a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure. When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key univers
10、ity.Part 2 Interpret the pictureIt seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection ofThe picture indicate that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon thatThis is a satirical (讽刺的讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind
11、of common phenomenon amongPart 3 Give your opinionsI think/believe thatAs far as Im concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,shouldIt is better/advisable toI consider it necessaryOnly in this way can.2/3musthave toDo/DontGroup work （2）:Join your group and rewrite the essay together, using the e
12、xpressions youve learned.Polish up your article!1. To use linking words if necessary2. To use complicated structures if possible 1. To use linking words表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also.表示转折关系表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while表示对比关系表示
13、对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand.表示因果关系表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系 besides, whats more, in addition, wor
14、se still, above all表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如例如), in other words, and so on表示结论表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion1. To use linking words(五三五三)2. To use complicated structuresPeople suggest that the conference be put off. It is su
15、ggested that the conference be put off. She walked out of the room and many students followed her.Followed by many students, she walked out of the room To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things. What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things. 被动语态被动语态非谓语动词非谓语动词 从句从句The co
16、uple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.倒装倒装So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.强调句强调句It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. Many lives were saved b
17、ecause there were the efforts of firefighters.虚拟语气虚拟语气But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.My version: For most of the parents, its no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Lets look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a
18、computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children-hardware, software and underwear.It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someones underwear, but it
19、 describes vividly parents distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their childrens security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids
20、from getting on line “the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”!From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the In
21、ternet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Inte
22、rnet be made safer for the children. 再叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1. 保证三要素保证三要素体裁体裁、时态时态、人称人称正确正确体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称你不是父母！你不是父母！人称混乱！人称混乱！再叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1. 保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误1)1)误解图意误解图意 大忌！大忌！2) 2) 企图幽默企图幽默 可笑！可笑！3)3)不明寓意不明寓意 白写！白写！ 4)4)中心不明中心不明 混乱！混乱！ 再
23、叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1. 保证三要素体裁、人称、时态正确保证三要素体裁、人称、时态正确体裁：议论文人称：第三人称时态：一般现在时. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误. 控制字数（没话说控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）太啰唆）. 搞一精辟的结尾！搞一精辟的结尾！Too Too shortshort! !Too Too longlong! !不要动不动就不要动不动就study hardstudy hard! !Enjoy this excellent ending!In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our
24、 society. Its time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the world will become the se
25、a of love.”Enjoy this excellent ending!From my point of view, reducing the childrens heavy burden requires efforts from the schools, the society as well as the parents. Education that breaks the rules of childrens development in body and mind is bound to fail. Thus, parents together with teachers sh
26、ould become active supporters of all-around character education and work closely with each other in guiding the students towards a balanced development. 一篇一篇好好的英语漫画作文的英语漫画作文仔细仔细审题审题准确准确立义立义规范规范行文行文整洁整洁书写书写Not good!Worse!Neat! 一篇一篇好好的英语漫画作文的英语漫画作文仔细仔细审题审题准确准确立义立义规范规范行文行文整洁整洁书写书写Lets try it!下图描绘的是目前很多
27、孩下图描绘的是目前很多孩子们的苦恼。请你根据对子们的苦恼。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法。表你的看法。In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please dont force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect! Enjoy this excellent ending!Lets try it!下图描绘的是中国当前教育中存在的问题。请你根据对下面这下图描绘的是中国当前教育中存在的问题。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法。因并发表你的看法。
