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1、高中高中英语书面表达英语书面表达English Composition WritingChenMeiLongchangLongchangNO.7MiddleSchoolNO.7MiddleSchool【写作指导写作指导】 半开放式作文是近年高考英语学科书面表达的半开放式作文是近年高考英语学科书面表达的一个趋势。所谓一个趋势。所谓“半开放半开放”是指试题是指试题给出部分要点，给出部分要点，考生自己再增加一些要点考生自己再增加一些要点。考生考生不仅要精确地表达不仅要精确地表达所给信息，更加重要的是在自由发挥部分，不可以所给信息，更加重要的是在自由发挥部分，不可以随意发挥，要有自己独到的见解，要言之
2、有物，言随意发挥，要有自己独到的见解，要言之有物，言之有理，充分体现出思维的广度和深度。之有理，充分体现出思维的广度和深度。Whatsthecharacter(特点）ofthecompositioninthepastfewyears?2010.2010.四川卷四川卷四川卷四川卷假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。要点准备一篇英文发言稿。1.过去对成年的向往；过去对成年的向往；2.现在的感受和认识；现在的感受和认识；3.将来的目标及措施。将来的目标及措施。参考词汇：责任参考
3、词汇：责任responsibility注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）Goodmorning,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Thoughtsonbecomingagrown-up.”_Thankyouforyourlistening.Mainideas向往向往感受和认识感受和认识目标和措施目标和措施Tense（时态）（时态） pastnowfutureDetails?Weshouldad
4、dupsomedetailstomakeupthiscomposition.Accordingtothefollowingquestions,thinkoutsomeusefulwordsandphraseswhichcanbeused.1、Hopeforthefuture:Doyouhopetobeanadult?Doyouhaveanyideasaboutyourfuture?Whatarethey?Whatdoyouhopetodo?Whatdoyouthinkaboutyourfuture?2、Feelingandunderstandingatpresent:Whatareyourfe
5、eling?Whatcanyouenjoy?Whatcanyouface?3、Goalandactioninthefuture:Whatdoyouwanttodoforyourparents?Whatdoyouwanttodoforyourcountry?Howcanyourealizeyourgoal?properexpressionswhichcanbeusedineachpoint过去对成年的向往过去对成年的向往inmymindgrowupwhatever-clause现在的感受和认识现在的感受和认识asitturnsoutenjoyfreedomresponsibility将来的目标和
6、措施将来的目标和措施lookaftermakecontributionstodoallIcantogetthroughbeadmittedtoPleasemakesentencesusingthefollowingexpressionsCombinethewordsorphrasesabovetomakesentences1、Asachild,Ihaveanideainmymind.2、Icouldgrowupassoonaspossible.3、IcouldhavewhateverIwanted.4、IcoulddowhateverIliked.5、Asitturnsout,manythin
7、gshavechanged.inmymind.growupwhateverasitturnsout6、Icanenjoymorefreedom.7、Ihavemoreresponsibilities.8、Ihopetolookaftermyparents.9、Ihopetomakecontributionstosociety.10、ImustdoallIcantogetthroughthecollegeentranceexamination.11、Icanbeadmittedtoagooduniversity.enjoymorefreedomresponsibilitieslookafterm
8、akecontributionstodoallIcantogetthroughbeadmittedtocombinethesentencesaboveintoacompositionGoodmorning,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Thoughtsonbecomingagrown-up.”Asachild,Ihaveanideainmymind.Icouldgrowupassoonaspossible.IcouldhavewhateverIwanted.IcoulddowhateverIliked.Asitturnsout,manythingshav
9、echanged.Icanenjoymorefreedom.Ihavemoreresponsibilities.Ihopetolookaftermyparents.Ihopetomakecontributionstosociety.ImustdoallIcantogetthroughthecollegeentranceexamination.Icanbeadmittedtoagooduniversity.Thankyouforyourlistening.AIsthiscompositionagoodone?Conclusion:Thiscompositionislackoflinkingwor
10、ds.Goodmorning,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Thoughtsonbecomingagrown-up.”Asachild,theresanideainmymindthatIcouldgrowupassoonaspossiblesothatIcouldhavewhateverIwantedanddowhateverIliked.NowImagrown-up,however,asitturnsout,manythingshavechanged.Foronething,Icanenjoymorefreedom;foranother,Irealiz
11、ebeingagrownupnotonlymeansthis,butalsomoreresponsibilities.InthefutureIhopetolookaftermyparentsandmakecontributionstosocietytomakemylifemoremeaningful.Toreachthegoal,ImustdoallIcantogetthroughthecollegeentranceexaminationandbeadmittedtoagooduniversity.(114words)Thankyouforyourlistening.Conclusion:Wo
12、rdsareenough.Itcontainsallpoints.Itsfullofadvancedexpressionsandlinkingwords.BGoodwritingisnecessaryComparetwopassagesandtellwhichisbetter四川高考书面表达评分原则四川高考书面表达评分原则v1总分总分35分，按分，按5个档次给分。个档次给分。v2根据内容和语言确定档次。根据内容和语言确定档次。v3词数词数100左右。左右。v4要点、词汇和语法已及连贯性。要点、词汇和语法已及连贯性。v5拼写与标点的准确性。拼写与标点的准确性。v6书写较差，分数降低一个档次。书写
13、较差，分数降低一个档次。Howtowriteacomposition？F i v e s t e p s1、审题、审题文字信息文字信息图画信息图画信息题材题材(记叙文，说明文、议论文、应用记叙文，说明文、议论文、应用文）、人称、时态、要点。文）、人称、时态、要点。2、以词及点：用单词或短语写出每句话的细、以词及点：用单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。节要点。3、联词成句：将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。、联词成句：将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。4 联句成文：联句成文：注意：注意：主语和谓语（主语和谓语（语态、时态、主谓一致）语态、时态、主谓一致）高级表达（从句、非谓语、常见句型高级表达（从句、非谓语、
14、常见句型短语等）短语等）语篇衔接语篇衔接开头与结尾开头与结尾5、规范书写、规范书写Homework：2011四川高考书面表达（满分四川高考书面表达（满分35分）分）最近，某中学生英文报开设了最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-classActivities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1.你校开展课外活动的你校开展课外活动的情况情况；2.你参加过的课外你参加过的课外活动活动及给你带来的及给你带来的益处益处3.为同学选择课外活动提出为同学选择课外活动提出建议建议4.为学校开展课外活动提出为学校开展课外活动提出建议建议注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名文中不得提及人名、校名及地名3.稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）After-classActivitiesNowadays,after-classactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools
