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1、提纲类记叙文 提纲类作文是近几年高考英语书面表达的热点题型。 命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强。 此类作文写作时要注意以下三个方面： 1. 提纲作文的特点： 提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块， 以条目的形式列出， 请考生据此进行写作。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。 2. 思维空间灵活、 开放： 为了提高文章档次， 考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现

2、考生的英语思维能力。 3. 提纲作文的写作一般分为四个步骤： (1) 审题，明确文体形式； (2) 构思，根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构； (3) 写作完稿，根据构思的词语和句型结构，按照合理的顺序和语言要求，连句成文； (4) 注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样。 Writing 1.（2012 江苏卷） 生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报 “Happy Teens”专栏投稿。 一、认真审题，攫取要点： 生活中冲突时有发生（开头句已经给出） ； 苏华和李江打

3、篮球时因为碰撞发生争执，导致关系紧张； 他们俩遇事不够冷静。 二、理顺要点，挖掘要点： “分析发生冲突的原因”和“谈谈避免冲突的做法”需要我们去想象挖掘要点； 在“简要描述事情的经过”时，我们要增加合理的细节。 三、灵活表达，化解难点： 1.简要描述事情的经过： Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. Yesterday afternoon there was a basketball game. During the basketball game, Su Hua and Li Jiang tried to catch the b

4、all and knocked down each other. They started shouting at each other. A horrible quarrel happened. It contributed to the tension between them. Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. While playing basketball yesterday afternoon, Su Hua, trying to catch the ball, knocked down Li Jiang. The

5、n they started shouting at each other and a horrible quarrel happened, which contributed to the tension between them. （合并成语段） Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then

6、they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel. 2.分析发生冲突的原因： Su Hua and Li Jiang were not calm enough. Both of them attacked at each other by mean things. They cared too much about whether they would win or lose. They didnt realize that such a thing was common in such a clo

7、se game. In my opinion, both Su Hua and Li Jiang were to blame. Because they were not calm enough and both attacked at each other by words. They cared too much about whether they would win or lose. But,as we all know, something like blocking, pushing and bumping is common in such a tough game. （合并成语

8、段） To be honest, it was Sus fault but Li was also to blamethey were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. 3. 谈谈避免冲突的做法： To avoid such conflicts, we should

9、be friendly to one another, which is important to enjoy a peaceful life. It is also a virtue to forgive each other especially in such a competitive and stressful society. We should not blame each other but communicate more. Whats more, we must learn to how to handle such conflicts if we stood in the

10、 opposite side. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves

11、in others place. （合并成语段） 四、逻辑清晰，过渡自然-连接成篇： Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. Yesterday afternoon there was a basketball game, during which Su Hua and Li Jiang tried to catch the ball and knocked down each other. Then they started shouting at each other. As a result, a horrible quarr

12、el happened, which contributed to the tension between them. In my opinion, both Su Hua and Li Jiang were to blame. Because they were not calm enough and both attacked at each other by mean things. They cared too much about whether they would win or lose. But, as we all know, such a thing is common i

13、n such a close game. To avoid such conflicts, we should be friendly to one another, which is important to enjoy a peaceful life. It is also a virtue to forgive each other especially in such a competitive and stressful society. We should not blame each other but communicate more. Whats more, we must

14、learn to how to handle such conflicts if we stood in the opposite side.(161 words) 【范 文】 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, an

15、d it turned into a horrible quarrel. To be honest, it was Sus fault but Li was also to blamethey were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. To avoid such c

16、onflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place. Dont be self-c

17、entered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.(150 words) Writing 2. (2008 年深圳一模) 假设你参加了你校组织的“关爱生命 携手艾滋儿童”的活动。 写作内容 请你写一篇英文日记，叙述活动情况, 内容包括： 时间：2007 年 12 月 1 日 星期六 8：30 启程 集合地点：校门口 车程：一个半小时自行车车程 目 的 地：红十字会医院 活动内容：亲切交谈、牵手跳舞、赠送礼物、拍照留念、共进午餐后返回 感受： 写作要求 只能使用 5 个句子

18、表达全部内容。注意: 日记的开头已写好。 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。 December 1st 2007 Saturday Fine _ 例题导写 认真审题。因为是日记, 所以用第一人称; 叙述已发生的事应该用一般过去时, 感受则用一般过去时或者一般现在时都可以。 信息重组。第一个句子为总起, 描述自己何时何地参加了何种活动。由于是记叙事件, 接下去可以按照时间发展顺序进行信息点的划分。 第二句是出发时间, 出发地点和路程。 活动的内容比较多, 可以用两句话分别表述。最后一句就是活动的感受。 词汇整理: 翻译或完成下列词汇或短语。 1. 组织活动：organize

19、an activity 2. 志愿者：volunteer 3. 红十字会医院：the Red Cross Hospital 4. 同亲切交谈： have close chats with sb. 5. 牵手跳舞： dance happily together 6. 赠送礼物： present gifts 7. 拍照：take photos 1. 难句翻译： 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。 (1) 8: 30 启程, 在校门口集中, 开始车程。We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip. (2) 花了一个

20、半小时自行车车程。It took us about one hour and a half. 合并: We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half. 2. 翻译句子: 请根据括号中的提示将下列中文句子翻译成英文。 (1) 我觉得, 帮助那些急切渴望我们帮助和关心的小孩, 是我们应有的职责。(feel it+ 名词+ to do, give a hand to sb., be in need of/desire for/be

21、dying for) I feel it our responsibility to give a hand to those children who are greatly in need of our help and care. (2) 我觉得这次活动很有意义, 我学会了怎样与人沟通, 并意识到帮助他人的重要性和感受到与之带来的乐趣。(meaningful, communicate with.) I find the activity meaningful, for I have leant how to communicate with others, realized the im

22、portance of helping others and enjoyed the fun brought by my active participation. 【范文】 December 1st 2007 Saturday Fine Today is the World Aids Day, so our school organized an activity called “Take care of our lives, hand in hand with Aids children”. At 8:30 a.m., we volunteers gathered at the schoo

23、l gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half. Soon after we got to the Red Cross Hospital, where most Aids children are staying, we began to have close chats with them to see how their life is going, and then we danced happily together. Having got to know them so well, w

24、e presented our gifts, took lots of photos and ate lunch together before we came back. I feel very great to see the Aids children so happy when they are not ignored and taken good care of. Writing 3. 假设你参加了深圳大运会的志愿者活动, 回来以后感触良多。请你根据以下信息, 写一篇英文日记, 叙述活动情况。 写作内容 时间 8 月 12 日8 月 23 日 总体情况 (1)招募了 127 万来自国

25、内外的志愿者 (2)2500 名志愿者来自深圳各大学 (3)这 2500 名志愿者为住在运动村的五万多人服务 个人工作 (1)在器械部门工作 (2)把器械搬去运动场地和搬回去 (3)工作时间为早上 6：3011：00 (4)因工作需要, 从 6：30 自愿工作到 17:30 感受 辛苦，但是值得 写作要求 只能使用 5 个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。 参考词汇： 深圳大运会 Shenzhen Universiade 运动村 Village 运动场地 court 【范文】 August 24th 2011 Wednesday Fine I foun

26、d it a great honor to work as a volunteer in the Shenzhen Universiade from August 12th to 23rd. Shenzhen recruited more than 1.27 million people from home and abroad to provide services, including about 2500 volunteers from universities in Shenzhen who were providing services to the 50, 000 people s

27、taying in the Village. I worked in the equipment department, responsible for moving all the equipment to the court and then carry it back. I was required to work from 6:30 a.m. to 11:00 a.m., but I volunteered to work all the day from 6:30 in the morning to 19:30 in the evening because of the job re

28、quirement. It was very tiring and I felt exhausted but it was worth it, because I was proud to have done what I could for this great event. 精华点评 这是一篇关于活动感受的日记类写作。在内容方面, 考生在写作中应该注重情感态度的表达， 使日记更具有真实感, 如范文中的第一句“I found it a great honor to work.” 和最后“because I was proud to have done what I could for thi

29、s great event 都表达了作者的情感态度。 在词汇运用方面，考生可以有意识地使用高中所学到的一些词汇或短语来代替初中所学的词汇, 如表达“来自世界各地”, 范文使用了 from home and abroad 而不是 all over the world; 表示疲倦，范文使用了 exhausted 而不是用 tired。 在句型方面，考生要熟练地运用非谓语动词作伴随状语和定语从句等复合句，使文章的句式更多样化，如范文的第二句就使用了 including 作伴随状语，以及在伴随状语中带有一个 who 引导的定语从句。 Writing 4. 假设你们班同学听说你和家人上周末去了广州南沙参

30、观沙雕后都对此很感兴趣， 邀请你在课堂上介绍这次参观活动。请你根据以下内容, 写一篇短文, 向你的同班同学讲述此次旅游经历及感受。 写作内容 沙展介绍 1. 南沙区政府主办 2. 宏伟、壮观 3. 最大的沙雕高达 7 米，长达 12 米 活动经过 1. 早上 9 点出发，10 点到达 2. 欣赏沙雕 3. 中午吃海鲜 4. 下午去湿地公园赏鸟 感受 1. 广州发展快 2. 担忧游客过多会破坏环境 写作要求 1. 只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容； 2. 文章开头已给出, 不计入总句数。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 Last weekend, I enjoyed a w

31、onderful trip to Nansha with my family. _ _. 【范文】 Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family. We set out at 9:00 a.m. and arrived at 10 a.m. On arriving, we couldnt wait to enjoy the exhibition of sand statues there, which was hosted by the local government of Nansha. The stat

32、ues were very grand and fantastic, with the largest one as high as 7 meters and as long as 12 meters. Then, we had delicious seafood for lunch, after which we went to watch birds in the Nansha Wetland Park. It is an unforgettable trip and we are all happy because Guangzhou has been developing fast,

33、but I am a little worried that too many tourists may destroy the ecological balance of Nansha. 精华点评 文章是描述一次旅游活动， 如果考生简单按照表格内容顺序写作， 就显得不自然。因此考生可以根据时间顺序写作来调整表格内容。作文的主线是活动过程，沙雕展览的介绍可以穿插其中，最后是作者的感受。 由于写作的内容比较多， 考生在写作过程中要注意过渡和从句的使用。 如第二句的 On arriving.和第四句的.， after which. 这两个句型提高了文章的连贯性。在语言运用方面，考生可以运用有感情色彩的词汇和句子，避免平铺直叙， 如文章中使用了 we couldnt wait to enjoy 和 it is an unforgettable trip 等句子。