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1、how-to-polish-your-how-to-polish-your-writingwriting写作技巧写作技巧 Part One: General introduction to writing了解了解NMET书面表达的评分标准和要求书面表达的评分标准和要求 按按5个档次给分个档次给分, 写一篇写一篇100个单词左右的书面材个单词左右的书面材料。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等料。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等; 提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲、短文等。提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲、短文等。书面表达的要求是书面表达的要求是:1. 覆盖所有的语言要点。覆盖所有的语言
2、要点。 内容要点可用不同方内容要点可用不同方 式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。2. 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得值得 注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具具有较强的语言运用能力。有较强的语言运用能力。 写作要领写作要领1、 细读提示细读提示明白写什么，日记、信函、明白写什么，日记、信函、报导或叙事描写报导或叙事描写2 、写全要点、写全要点了解核心内容，非重要情了解核心内容，非重要情节
3、，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次。节，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次。表格类原则上一个不能少表格类原则上一个不能少3 、层次分明、层次分明为使短文令人感到赏心悦为使短文令人感到赏心悦目分成目分成2甚至甚至3段为好段为好4、承上启下、承上启下简而言之是连接词、过渡句简而言之是连接词、过渡句他们是组成文章粘和剂，上下沟通的纽带他们是组成文章粘和剂，上下沟通的纽带5、 繁简有度繁简有度文章总有详写与略写，尤文章总有详写与略写，尤其是图画类短文，其是图画类短文，学会筛选是非常必要的，学会筛选是非常必要的，如其不然，事无巨细全部点到，不仅使文章如其不然，事无巨细全部点到，不仅使文章成了流水帐，而
4、且空耗了时间还使文章显得成了流水帐，而且空耗了时间还使文章显得冗赘若再因超长而被扣分岂不得不偿失？！冗赘若再因超长而被扣分岂不得不偿失？！6、亮点突出、亮点突出较高级词汇和较复杂的语法较高级词汇和较复杂的语法结构的合理适时使用，这最能影响或打动改结构的合理适时使用，这最能影响或打动改卷教师，是求得高档次及该档次高端分值的卷教师，是求得高档次及该档次高端分值的保证保证7、书写认真、书写认真不求文字隽秀力保规范工整，不求文字隽秀力保规范工整，这是留下好印象的起码条件这是留下好印象的起码条件8、卷面干净、卷面干净事先打草稿然后誊改是使文事先打草稿然后誊改是使文章通畅的关键章通畅的关键 Part Tw
5、o: Polish your writing 一、句一、句 式式 变变 化化 改变句子的开头方式改变句子的开头方式.不要一味地用主语开头不要一味地用主语开头,适当使用状适当使用状语或其他形式提前语或其他形式提前1).We met at the school gate and went together early in the morning.2) We all know that internet will help us a lot if we use it properly.Early in the morning, we met in the school gate and went
6、together.As is known to us all/As we all know, internet will help us a lot if we use it properly We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories ;some played chess.Having had a short rest,we began to play happily, singing and dancing. Some told stories, whil
7、e others played chess.巧用习语巧用习语-增加文采增加文采巧用一些介词短语巧用一些介词短语,名词短语名词短语,形容词短语形容词短语 使文采不同凡响使文采不同凡响1).Many houses are being built. 2).When I thought of the coming holiday, I just couldnt help smiling . 3).When the man got on the bus ,he was tired and hungry.Many houses are under construction.At the thought o
8、f the coming holiday, I just Tired and hungry, the man got on the bus.洋味十足-才是好文章I dont want to live with a stranger in a hotel room. She shouted loudly , “Ive succeeded!” I dont want to share a hotel room with a stranger.She shouted at the top of her voice, “I ve made it!”二、连 接 词高考写作中常用的连接词高考写作中常用的连
9、接词: 表并列补充关系的表并列补充关系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition to 表转折对比关系的表转折对比关系的: but, however, yet, instead, nevertheless, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, unlike, on one handon the other hand, someothers.高考写作中常用的连接词高考写作中常用的连接词:表因果关系的表因果关系的: since, as, becaus
10、e (of), so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that 表条件关系的表条件关系的: if, on condition (that), as long as, unless, or else 表特定的顺序关系表特定的顺序关系: above all, first of all, first, firstly, secondly, the next, finally, in the end, at last高考写作中常用的连接词高考写作中常用的连接词:表时间关系的表时间关系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as,
11、 afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, in the meantime, at the same time, at last, suddenly, all of a sudden 表换一种方式表达表换一种方式表达: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way高考写作中常用的连接词高考写作中常用的连接词:表进行举例说明表进行举例说明: for instance, for example, like, such as 表陈述事实表陈述事实: in fact,
12、actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表总结表总结: on the whole, in short, all in all, in a word, in conclusion, in summaryImprove the following sentences:1.China joined the WTO. That ended its many years of talks.2. Time goes fast. Mr. Smith came to our school for two years. China joined
13、the WTO, thus ending its many years of talks. How time flies! It is two years since Mr. Smith came to our school.3. Tourism opens our minds, enables us to know more about the outside world. It also helps further friendship. But it has also given rise to a number of problems. Tourism opens our minds,
14、 enables us to know more about the outside world. In addition, it helps further friendship. Nevertheless, it has given rise to a number of problems as well.Enjoy the following passages and pick out the shining points of them: What a fine Sunday! I was planning to play football with Xiao Ming, but wh
15、ile I was going out, I found my mother was washing clothes. Mum was busy working and doing housework after work day and night without complaining. She was so tired. Thinking about this, I decided to help do the washing. I began to feel tired after washing for several minutes. And Xiao Ming came to a
16、sk me to go out for football at that moment. I nearly gave up washing. But I persuaded myself to go on finally. Mum came back, only to find all the clothes were hanging on the line. She smiled. What a fine Sunday! I was planning to play football with Xiao Ming, but while I was going out, I found my
17、mother was washing clothes. Mum was busy working and doing housework after work day and night without complaining. She was so tired. Thinking about this, I decided to help do the washing. I began to feel tired after washing for several minutes. And Xiao Ming came to ask me to go out for football at
18、that moment. I nearly gave up washing. But I persuaded myself to go on finally. Mum came back, only to find all the clothes were hanging on the line. She smiled. ( 25分）分）Dear Bob, Its very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now Id like to tell you something about my h
19、ometown Jiangcheng. The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses, and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, t
20、here are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in future. Your
21、s, Xiaohua Dear Bob, Its very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng. The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly
22、 in the past ten years. New factories, houses, and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in future. Yours, Xiaohua Thanks for your attending our class!结束结束
