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1、 高分作文标志高分作文标志1：高考：高考100词左右；四级词左右；四级120-150字；字；六级六级150180字；字；2、是否长短句交叉；、是否长短句交叉；3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；写好一篇作文的注意事项 1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而
2、用而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后年六月六级作文的最后一段：一段：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者
3、助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。后，两边分别加上逗号。如如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。分别加上逗号。比如说：比如说：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等等等)比如上面例子中，比如上面例子
4、中，applicable代替代替proper,approaches代替代替ways,implement代替代替carryout,sharpenonescompetitiveedge代替代替enhanceonescompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力提高某物竞争力)ComputerandIBySimmyIneverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfi
5、ngooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.veryexcitingsb.beinterestedinsth.searchalotofThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechno
6、logy,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!moreandmorepopular“与与一致一致Withdevelopment(floodinto/swarminto)替换替换enterintonowsb.beinterestedinsth.moreandmorepeopleThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed精彩句型，
7、用来描精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；述在某个时期发生了什么事情；Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型说某事是毫不夸张的经典句型说某事是毫不夸张的Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,orde
8、liveringemail.Forastart替换替换TobeginwithWecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法用了插入语的写作手法ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩用了非常精彩的被动的被动Additionally替换替换Inaddition/BesidesDeliver 替换替换 sendThereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,e
9、speciallythegrowingviolence,*,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.这个句子有三个精彩之处，这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有这个句型，还有however作为插入语作为插入语functioninthedisserviceof替换替换doharmtoEmerging代替代替appearing(fading代替代替disappearing)Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词网民，属于精彩用词
10、Asaclassicproverbgoes,nogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeoplelives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof使用插入使用插入语语Fruits(而且而且fruits用的非常形象，用的非常形象，merits/virtues)替替换换advan
11、tage(defects替换替换disadvantage)Everycoinhastwosidesimportant/good等等apartofbadeffects/influencesaspect各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！作文怎么会不得高分呢！1.individuals,characters,folks代代(people,persons)2:positive,favorable,rosy(美好的美好的)，promising(有希望的有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,out
12、standing代替代替good3:dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的有害的)代代替替bad如果如果bad做表语，可以有做表语，可以有belessimpressive代替代替eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarel
13、essimpressive.4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,many,ifnotmost)代替代替many.注：用注：用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，一定要小心，many后后一定要有词。一定要有词。Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat.同理同理用用most,ifnotall,代替代替most.5:asliceof,quietafew,several代替代替some6:harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,it
14、iswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替替think(因为是书面语，所以要加因为是书面语，所以要加that)Asknotwhatyourcountrycandoforyou;askwhatyoucandoforyourcountry.7:affair,business,matter代替代替thing8:shared代代common9.reaphugefruits代替代替getmuchbenefit)10:formypart,frommyownperspective代替代替inmyopinion11:Increasing(ly),g
15、rowing代替代替moreandmore(注注意没有意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.12.littleifanything,或或littleornothing代替代替hardly13.beneficialrewarding代替代替helpfulbebeneficialof14.shopp
16、er,client,consumer,purchaser,代替代替customer15.exceedingly,extremely代替代替very16.hardlyunnecessary,hardlyinevitable.代替代替necessary,evitable17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替代替sbtakeinterestin18.captureonesattention代替代替attractonesattention.19.facet,demension,sphere代代aspect20.beindicati
17、veof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代代indicate,suggest,fear21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替代替cause.22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替代替.reasonsforsth23.desire代替代替want.24.pourattentionto代替代替payattentionto25.bearinmindthat代替代替remember26.enjoy,possess代替代替have(注意注意process是过程的是过程的意思意思)27.interaction代替代替communication28.frownonsth代替代替beagainst,disagreewithsth29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample代替代替forexample30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,代替代替nearlyimpossible
