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1、基基础写作之地点介写作之地点介绍 When you want to describe a place, what aspects will you write about?Possible subjects：1.1.介绍地理位置（介绍地理位置（locationlocation）be located inbe situated inlie in坐落于坐落于脚下脚下/顶部顶部stands at the foot of/ on the top of 常用词语 1. 日本在中国的东方。 2. 这房子朝南。 3.新教学坐落在学校的中央。Japan is/lies to the east of China
2、.The house faces (to) the south.The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.Located in the east of Asia, China is one of largest countries in the world. 4.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。2.介绍人口（介绍人口（Population）has a population of, （a city）with a population of北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）Beiji
3、ng, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.3.介绍面积（介绍面积（Area）has/covers an area ofsquare kilometers（a city） with an area ofsquare kilometers(1)它是个面积为它是个面积为100多平方公里城镇。多平方公里城镇。Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers.(2) 这座城市占地面积达这座城市占地面积达7,400 平方公里，平方公里
4、，人口大约是人口大约是4 million。Covering an area of 7,400 square kilometers, this city has a population of about 4 million. 4.介绍历史（介绍历史（History）历史悠久史悠久has a history of yearswith a long history of years(1)它是一个具有它是一个具有5000年悠久历史的现代化城年悠久历史的现代化城市。市。It is a modern city with a long history of 5000 years.(2) 广州，拥有一千三百
5、万人口的一座城市，广州，拥有一千三百万人口的一座城市，有有2200多年的历史。多年的历史。GZ, a city with a population of 13 million, has a history of more than 2200 years. 5.介绍交通（介绍交通（Transportation）take a bus, a train or a plane togo to by bus/train/plane坐汽车、火车、飞机到交通便利交通便利has convenient transportation（a city） with convenient transportation b
6、oth on land and water经济迅速发展经济迅速发展economy has been developing rapidly多次进入全国经济十强城市多次进入全国经济十强城市has been listed among the top ten strongest cities in economy several times6、介绍经济（、介绍经济（economy）7. 名胜古迹名胜古迹有很多名胜古迹：有很多名胜古迹：places of interest/ historical spots承德是全国承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一，也是个历史文化名城之一，也是44个风景名胜之一。个风景
7、名胜之一。Chengde City is not only one of the well-known 24 historical and cultural cities but also one of the 44 major scenic spots in China. 其它表达方式：其它表达方式：(1)发生了很大变化发生了很大变化great changes have taken place(2)特色鲜明的地方文化特色鲜明的地方文化distinct local culture(3) 它自然资源很丰富，如有煤和它自然资源很丰富，如有煤和金矿。金矿。It is rich in natural
8、resources such as coal and gold. (4) 气候宜人气候宜人 pleasant climate 气候温和气候温和 mild climate (5) be famouse for 因因而闻名而闻名南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖 Antarctica, is the coldest continent in the world.Antarctica, is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达which is covered with coldt
9、hick ice and deep snow all（the) year round,the coldest continent in the world,* 语法，句法高分法，句法高分tips 夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来就很大。It hardly ever rain in summer _it rains heavily. 2.运用非谓语动词和with结构优化句子表达我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港My hometown,_ is located in Guangdong Province of China.but whenever it does,neighboring Hong Kong,
10、使用状语从句优化句子表达基础写作-情景说明西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其贫困。解放(liberation)后人们的生活在各方面都发生了很大的变化。人口人口约约10万万面积面积约约126平方公里平方公里地理概括地理概括 坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条大河，新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校大河，新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校教育状况教育状况解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学，现在有上学，现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；上学；生活状况生活状况 人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳人们工作之余，可以逛商
11、店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等舞、参加体育活动等title if necessary(标题）tense and voice （时态和语态）person （人称）style （文章题材）the important points （要点要全）1.How to analyze the directions (审题)? Great Changes in Xishan Town一般现在、一般过去、现在完成时第三人称应用文List the important points out :解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。西山镇的人口约西山镇的人口约10万；万；Great c
12、hanges have taken place in peoples life since liberation.Xishan town has a population of about 100，000. 或或The population of Xishan town is about 100,000. 它的面积约它的面积约126126平方公里平方公里It covers/has an area of about 126 square kilometers.The size of it is about 126 square kilometers.坐落在粤北一座山脚下，面临一条大河坐落在粤北一
13、座山脚下，面临一条大河Xishan town is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong Province and faces a big river.Xishan town is located /stands at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river. 新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校Many factories, shops, hospitals and sc
14、hools have been built/ set up.解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等Now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families.After work people go shopping, see films, go dancing and have spor
15、ts.用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句子结构将个句子组织成连贯的短文子结构将个句子组织成连贯的短文1.Xishan town is a small town, _ is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.whichLets try!2.Xishan town has a population of about 100,000 _ covers
16、 an area of about 126 square kilometers.Xishan town, _ an area of about 126 square kilometers, has a population of .Xishan town covers an area of about 126 square kilometers_100,000 . andcoveringwith a population of多种表达法灵活表达3.Before liberation, people there lived a hard life _ since liberation great
17、 changes have taken place_ many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built. butand nowLets share!One possible version :1.Xishan town is a small town, which is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river. It has a population of about
18、 100,000 and covers an area of about 126 square kilometers. Before liberation, people there lived a hard life but great changes have taken place since liberation and now many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built. The school education has also improved, for example , before liberat
19、ion there was only one school for children from wealthy families, but now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school. After work people go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports .澳大利亚位于最小的大洲澳大利亚位于最小的大洲(continent)大洋洲大洋洲(Oceania),是世界第六大国家。是世界第六大国家。它是一个干旱气候为主的国家，它是一个干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿
20、海地区有充足的只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量雨量(rainfall)。它由六个州组。它由六个州组成，其中墨尔本成，其中墨尔本(Melbourne)和悉尼和悉尼(Sydney)是最大的两个是最大的两个城市。另外，它还以明媚的阳城市。另外，它还以明媚的阳光，数不清的牛羊和奇特的野光，数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名。世界各地的生动植物而著名。世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美游客来到这里体验它独特的美景。景。总面积：总面积：7，686，850km2 人人口：约：口：约：2，000万万 写作要求写作要求 1.1.只能使用只能使用5 5个句子表达个句子表达全部的内容。全部的内容。2.2.介绍必须
21、包括所有内容介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成要点，但不要逐条译成英语。英语。3.3.要有标题要有标题。 写作内容：写作内容：Homework1.Australia, is the sixth largest country in the world has a population ofAustralia, the sixth largest country in the world, has a population of Australia is located in the smallest continent-Oceania, has a population of Austr
22、alia Located in the smallest continentOceania, Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. It covers a total area of7,686,850square kilometers with a population of about 20 million. It is a mainly dry country and only a few coastal areas have plenty of rainfall. Whats more , It is made up of 6 states, among which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities. Besides ,it is famous for its bright sunshine, unique wildlife,countless sheep and cattle, so tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery.
