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1、Usain BoltBorn 8,21, 1986 Jamaica,1.96 meters ,hard-working, love ,determined,In 2008, at the Beijing Olympic Games, broke In 2009, in the World Championship ,Now,Usain Bolt Usain Bolt was born on August 21st, 1986 in Jamaica. He is 1.96 meters tall and he is hard-working, full of love and determine
2、d.In 2008, at the Beijing Olympic Games he broke the 100-meter and 200-meter world records. In 2009, in the World Championship he broke his own world records for the 100-meter and 200-meter races again. Now he is working hard to realize his dream to break more world records.审题的步骤审题的步骤、文体文体主体时态主体时态人称
3、人称信息点整合信息点整合不要打草稿，但应有提纲不要打草稿，但应有提纲人物介绍人物介绍三段论三段论1.主题段主题段 -开头段开头段Birthday , birthplace and family background2.拓展段拓展段-中间段中间段Appearance, qualities, interest /hobbies, education ,big events in ones life3.总结段总结段-结尾段结尾段 evaluation对人物做出综合性的评价。对人物做出综合性的评价。人物简介的一般人物简介的一般步骤步骤：Give the right order( )教教育育：educa
4、tion ( )外外貌貌性格性格appearance ,character( )生生平平big events in his or her life ( in order of time )( )评评估估evaluation( )概概况况age, sex, birth-place, background概况概况,外貌外貌,教育教育,生平生平,评估评估 A. 概况概况 :译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一国最伟大的医生之一.1) Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941 and he is one of th
5、e greatest doctors in China.1) Zhong Nanshan ,born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips可以用分词短语可以用分词短语,同位语结构同位语结构,使文章简洁使文章简洁,通顺通顺1.A. 概况概况 :语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips可以用分词短语可以用分词短语
6、,同位语结构同位语结构,使文章简洁使文章简洁,通顺通顺 译：费孝通，我国著名的社会学家和社会活动译：费孝通，我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家，年月日生于一富裕家庭家，年月日生于一富裕家庭年月日因病逝于北京年月日因病逝于北京Born in a well-off family on November 2,1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese Sociologist and active social worker, passed away for illness in Beijing on April 24, 2005 .B.外貌外貌,性格性格:译：我的历史老师是
7、个漂亮女人，她长着译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发两只大眼睛，留着长发.My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair.My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.巧用巧用with做定语做定语C. 教育经历教育经历：可以用非谓语动词可以用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼使文章精炼After she had graduated from the English department
8、 of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.Having graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.1.在中山大学英语系毕业后在中山大学英语系毕业后,她继续学习她继续学习,获得了博士学位获得了博士学位.D生平：生平：可以用复合句倒装可以用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句非限
9、定定语从句等，润色文章等，润色文章Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.1.他对科学极有兴趣他对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋也有音乐天赋.2. 他创了一个新的游泳记录他创了一个新的游泳记录,为中国队赢得了一为中国队赢得了一 块金牌块金牌.E评估评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组Lishizhen m
10、ade great contributions to Medical literature.Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people speak highly of him and all respect him .1. 雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的榜样雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,我们都我们都很敬重他很敬重他.2. 李时珍为医学做出了巨大的贡献李时珍为医学做出了巨大的贡献.话题词汇，词组，句型：话题词汇，词组，句型：外貌：外貌：good-looking相貌英俊的，相貌英俊的，funning-looking外表可笑的，外表可笑的， ugl
11、y-looking丑陋的，丑陋的， ordinary-looking外貌平平的，外貌平平的， white-haired白头发的，白头发的，near/far-sighted 近近/远视的，远视的， charming有魅力的有魅力的, 时尚的时尚的fashionable, 苗条苗条slim性格气质：性格气质：kind-hearted好心的，好心的， warm-hearted 热心的，热心的，absent-minded 心不在焉的，心不在焉的，bad-tempered 坏脾气的，坏脾气的，a strong will很强的意志力，很强的意志力，naughty 淘气的，淘气的，smart/bright
12、聪明的，聪明的， wise睿智的，睿智的，diligent 勤奋的，勤奋的，humorous 幽默的，幽默的， attractive 有魅力的，有魅力的，talkative能说会道的，能说会道的，confident 有信心的，有信心的，independent 独立的，独立的，patient 有耐心的有耐心的 生日、出生地、年龄生日、出生地、年龄, (who was) born in , is a, a , is a with a height of and a weight of家庭背景：家庭背景： was born in/ into a poor/rich family 出生在贫穷的出生在贫
13、穷的/富裕的家庭富裕的家庭as a child of years old, he 还是个还是个岁的孩子时岁的孩子时spend his childhood in 在在度过了他的童年度过了他的童年live a happy/hard life 生活很幸福生活很幸福/艰苦艰苦教育背景：教育背景：be admitted to university考取考取大学大学graduate from department of university从从某大学某系毕业某大学某系毕业receive/get a doctors degree 获取博士学位获取博士学位主要事迹：主要事迹：serve as做某种工作做某种工作
14、devote oneself /ones effort to/ be devoted to 一生致力于一生致力于concentrate /apply oneself to 专注于专注于make up ones mind to do/be determined to do决心做决心做have a gift for / be gifted in 有有的天赋的天赋成就：成就：1.one of the best/most important 最好的最好的/重要的重要的之一之一2. set a example to为为树立榜样树立榜样3. be honoured as被授予被授予； win the pr
15、ize 获得获得荣誉荣誉4. make great contribution to 为为作出巨大贡献作出巨大贡献根据下表内容写一篇根据下表内容写一篇120词词左右的英语短左右的英语短文介绍美国总统奥巴马。文介绍美国总统奥巴马。提示：提示：1.文体文体2.分段分段3.时态时态4.人称人称5.信息点整合信息点整合姓名姓名Barack Obama出生时间出生时间 1961年年8月月4日日出生地点出生地点 Honolulu, Hawaii家庭家庭父亲是肯尼亚黑人，父亲是肯尼亚黑人， 母亲是美国白人母亲是美国白人梦想梦想当总统当总统教育教育1988年考入（年考入（ Harvard Law School)
16、, 1991年博士学院年博士学院职业职业毕业后当律师，毕业后当律师， 大学讲师，后来一直从大学讲师，后来一直从政。政。 2008年年11月月4日，日， 在大选（在大选（ 他他（the general election)中击败（中击败（ John McCain), 成为首位黑人总统成为首位黑人总统评价评价Obama的成功极大地激励了非裔美国人。的成功极大地激励了非裔美国人。 subject 主主 语语 predicate 谓谓 语语 object 宾宾 语语 attribute 定定 语语 adverbial 状状 语语 complement 补补 语语 predicative 表表 语语 ap
17、positive 同同 位位 语语C clause 从从 句句Short forms 缩略语缩略语P. S. O.Att Advcom pre appBarack Obama , the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother, was born in Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4th, 1961. S. P.appAdvWhen he was only a small a boy, he dreamt of becoming the President of the United S
18、tates.= In his childhood,/ As a small boy, he had a great dream that he would become the President of the United States. S. P.O.Adv.cIn 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School , where he gained his doctors degree in 1991.=In 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School and he gained his docto
19、rs degree in 1991 there. S. P.AdvAtt cAfter graduation, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics.=After he graduated from Harvard, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics. S. P.O.P.AdvOn November 4, 2008, Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election an
20、d became the first African- American President of the United States.=On November 4, 2008, Barack Obama won the general election defeating John McCain and became the first African- American President of the United States.P. S. O.P.AdvAdvThe success of Obama inspires African-American greatly. His achi
21、evements show that anyone can succeed as long as he works hard. S. P.O. S. P.Oc.Adv.cStudent times No 6 B3著名歌手丛飞的爱心事迹传遍全国，深入到每个人的心著名歌手丛飞的爱心事迹传遍全国，深入到每个人的心中。现在请你根据下面的写作内容和写作要求，写一篇中。现在请你根据下面的写作内容和写作要求，写一篇短文，介绍丛飞的感人事迹。短文，介绍丛飞的感人事迹。写作内容写作内容生平生平1. 1969年生于辽宁省盘锦市年生于辽宁省盘锦市. 1992年毕业于沈阳音年毕业于沈阳音乐学院。乐学院。 2、2006
22、年年4月月20日病逝于深圳。日病逝于深圳。 主要事迹主要事迹 1、从、从1994年年8月开始资助贫困儿童，坚持月开始资助贫困儿童，坚持11年之久，共年之久，共捐献捐献300 多万，多达多万，多达178名贫困儿童受助。名贫困儿童受助。2、生前立下遗嘱、生前立下遗嘱捐献眼角膜。捐献眼角膜。荣誉荣誉 一生获得许多荣誉，其中包括获得一生获得许多荣誉，其中包括获得“2005感动中国感动中国年度人物年度人物”的称号的称号写作要求写作要求 必须使用必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容个句子介绍全部所给的内容.参考词汇：捐献眼角膜参考词汇：捐献眼角膜donate cornea沈阳音乐学院沈阳音乐学院Shenya
23、ng Conservatory of Music2005感动中国年度人物感动中国年度人物2005CCTV Moving China Award Cong Feis spirit lives on Cong Fei, born in Panjin, Liaoning Province in 1969, graduated from Shenyang Conservatory of Music in 1992. From August 1994, he began his 11-year cause of aiding poor children in mountainous areas, don
24、ated more than 8 million yuan and aided up to 178 poor children. In his life, he got many honors, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award. Before his death, he made a will - to donate his corneas. Cong Fei passed away on April 20, 2006, but his spirit will live on.主要问题1.人名表达法2.地名表达法3.Choose
25、-chose-chosen4.时态5.Article6.In order to his country7.His many novels假如你叫李明，你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国假如你叫李明，你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容如下内容如下:（1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人（2）为了国家，弃医从文。）为了国家，弃医从文。（3）著名的作家）著名的作家,思想家思想家,而且还是中国现代文学而且还是中国现代文学的开创者的开创者.（4）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如）小说被译
26、成多种文字，并被制成电影，如阿阿Q正传正传、祝福祝福这两部影片。这两部影片。（5）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。参考词汇参考词汇:阿阿Q正传正传:The True Story of AH Q 祝福祝福：The New Years Sacrifice注意注意:介绍必须包括所有内容要点介绍必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成但不要逐条译成英语英语.写作要求写作要求只能使用只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。文章个句子表达全部内容。文章首尾已给出，不算字数。首尾已给出，不算字数。评分标准评分标准句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性.D
27、ear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. _. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li MingDear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese l
28、iterature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine because he thought he could change society more through writing. Not only was Lu Xun a well-known Chinese writer, thinker, and translator, but
29、also he was the father of modern Chinese literature. His novels have been translated into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice. Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks. Since you ar
30、e learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will benefit a lot. Yours, Li Ming 请根据以下资料说明，使用5个规范句子描述全部所给信息内容。姓名李华头发颜色黑色学校育才中学全家人口3人地址中国广州育才路138号父母职业教师出生年月 1989年10月1日爱好集邮和硬币身高180cm掌握外语情况 英语写作内容及要求1、标题：Something about Li Hua2、必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容。3、将5个句子组成连贯的短文。Something about Li Hua Lih
31、ua, a student from Yucai Middle School, who is 180cm tall with black hair was born on Oct 1st 1989. His family, which is at 138, Yucai Road, Guangzhou, China, has get three people. Both his parents are teachers. Lihua has two hobbies, which are collecting stamps and coins. His knows English well and can speak perfect English.
