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1、Section Writing读后续写读后续写题型剖析作为一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式,读后续写旨在考查考生的综合语言运用能力。其所提供的语料以记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主。读后续写除了要求考生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外,还注重考查学生在内容构思和情节衔接方面的能力。从考查形式上看,试卷提供一段语言材料,要求考生依据该材料的内容、所给段落开头语和所标示的关键词进行续写,完成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。1.原文材料350词以内,所续写文章150词左右。2.原文多是情节丰富的记叙文,偶有少量的议论文。3.原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语,所续写短文应使用5个以上。4.续写部
2、分分为两段,每段开头语已经给出。5.续写部分分两大类别:(1)半开放性质:必须依据文章的语境和逻辑推理续写。(2)完全开放性质:可以依据文章的思路,自己发挥。写作原则1.立足原文,合理拓展段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似,在某种程度上引导考生的思路向哪方面发展,所续写部分不能脱离各自的段落开头语另起炉灶,而是要在其基础上进行拓展发挥。不能随心所欲地写,而是要在所给段落开头和所标示关键词的帮助下完成续写。在构思时要抓住故事的叙事线索,依据原文的写作思路续写文章,并适当发散思维。2.读写并重,精确理解续写所给语言材料多是记叙文,情节曲折跌宕,线索性和逻辑性较强。需要考生在写作前对给定材料精确理解
3、,这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题,就这方面而言,读后续写有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的推断,如:What would happen next?此外,续写部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的,因此考生在写作时可根据自己对上文材料的理解,对文章的结尾做出不同的诠释。写作步骤1.仔细审题,明确续写要求。2.速读全文,确定文章线索。每篇文章都有独特的写作思路。通过速读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索,如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,抓住文中的关键词(时间、地点、人物、事件等)。这样有利于我们“顺藤摸瓜(结尾)”。3.剖析原文,揣摩续写思路。后续情节一般为故事的高潮或延续,是原作者声音的延续、态度的延
4、伸,因此在写作时要根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路,结合续写段段首的提示语,最终确定续写段落的思路,同时结合文章中标有下划线的关键词语,确定续写段落的内容。同时还要寻求前文与续写段段首句之间的内在联系,站在作者的角度,设计并发展情节,想象要合理,情节要连贯。4.再读文章,提炼精华。所选材料都是语言地道、正能量足的文章,因此,在写作时要注意精神元素的提炼,比如:2017年6月浙江卷的素材,我们可以从“乐于助人、珍爱生命、学会合作、心存感激”等方面提炼,把事物美好的一面展示出来。5.拟定草稿,修改润色。利用自己已有的知识和经验,在继承原作者风格和语言的基础之上,准确、地道地拟定
5、草稿。同时还要注意提高关联词与过渡语的使用率,增强整句表现力。注意修改草稿中的错误,标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语(5个以上)。需要说明的是,如果所给短文为议论文,那么议论文中的段落首句多为主题句,观点鲜明。续写时,要围绕段落分论点确定论证方法,如正反对比、例证等。注意事项1.词数要求:150词左右。2.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。3.内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。4.应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。5.上下文的连贯性。阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。A vacation with my motherI had an inter
6、esting childhood:It was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of my motherloving,sweet,and yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend
7、a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends.Who knew if wed ever see them again?Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suit
8、cases,books,games, camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving w
9、hile Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go,and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids?” “What?!Oh,Gosh.I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strang
10、e city,but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I becam
11、e nervous.To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps,Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2
12、.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Para 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. 参考范文Para 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought
13、 with us. Mom insisted that we must make full use of it since we had brought it.David and I looked at Dad,hoping he could stop her crazy idea.To our great disappointment,he agreed.We spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and set up our tent before the night fell.It was the first time
14、that I had thought Mom could be wise as I was admiring our stunning tent.“Oh,I forgot the pillows!” What a misconception!Despite the ache of my neck,we had some great nights.Para 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.The bright blue sky,the limitless green gras
15、s,the group of sheep,the setting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me spellbound.Not only did we see the picturesque scenery,we also managed to consider Moms scandals as a kind of fun.I really love my mom.To our relief,we arrived at grandparents place and went back to our home with all of four people.It was so fortunate to see my friends again.
