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1、写作写作题目：题目： Should Students Take a Mobile Phone to School?Should Students Bring a Mobile Phone to School？Writing Topic？ Learning aim Write about some ideas on bringing mobile phone to schoolShare your own opinion and reason Xiaoze - A studentMiss Gao -A MotherInterviewShould Students Bring a Mobile P
2、hone to School？who?A teacher- Miss Cao 3 different people3 different opinions Should Students Bring a Mobile Phone to School？whoideareasonteacherdisagreesThe students often 1. with phones during the class.They spend too much time 2. on the phone rather than do homework. 3. agreesIt is esay for the p
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4、？whoideareasonteacherdisagreesThe students often 1. with phones during the class.They spend too much time 2. on the phone rather than do homework. 3. agreesIt is esay for the parents to4 . with children. Students can use phones to5. at once when they get hurt by accident. student depends It is good
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6、ppreciate beautiful sentences表示条理顺序的过渡词表示条理顺序的过渡词 firstly., secondly, first of all, besides1.Interview your group mates.2.Report their ideas and say out your own ideas. Beginning :用一句话去过渡到图表内容。用一句话去过渡到图表内容。 Body:图表内容图表内容 (1.老师看法老师看法 2.母亲看法母亲看法) Ending:说明个人看法说明个人看法,并号召大家并号召大家 2.确定文章体裁确定文章体裁人称和时态人称和时态
7、中心主题句中心主题句过渡词过渡词结尾句结尾句1.拟提纲拟提纲3. 注意标点符号、大小写；保持书写工整清楚。注意标点符号、大小写；保持书写工整清楚。如今，越来越多的中学生拥有手机如今，越来越多的中学生拥有手机, 就学生是否可带就学生是否可带手机来学校，你校在社会上做了调查，请你根据以下手机来学校，你校在社会上做了调查，请你根据以下图表内容，用英语写一份调查报告。图表内容，用英语写一份调查报告。writing要求： 1.语言准确得当，语句连贯，符合逻辑，内容包括表格所有内容,可适当发挥想象。2. 词数在80个左右。作文的标题，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。whoideareasons老师不同意上课发
8、信息，玩游戏，考试作弊，。父母同意家长易于与孩子联系，意外受伤时方便求助我认为 自拟自我检测，精自我检测，精 益益 求求 精精修正角度：修正角度：人称、时态、字数、标点符号、字母大小写、要点句子完整、词法语法我欣赏，我快乐我欣赏，我快乐请交换习作互相欣赏，用请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔红笔划出对方的亮点划出对方的亮点,并对并对不足进行适当修改。不足进行适当修改。评分评分以满分以满分15分分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。为标准，给同伴的习作打分。点评点评由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构 分析分析-细细 节点评节点评)欣赏角度欣赏角度： 1.写作基本要求写作基本要求:人称
9、人称, 时态；时态； 2. 要点齐全；要点齐全； 3. 结构结构: 开头，正文，结尾；开头，正文，结尾； 4. 好词好句。好词好句。 集体赏析，共同进步集体赏析，共同进步Task 3Everything has his advantages and disadvantages.Use it in the right way. Everything has his advantages and disadvantages.Use the mobile phone in the right way. Check and rewrite 二次修正二次修正 重写作文重写作文 ListeningRead
10、ing material Is it good for students to bring phones to school? It has been discussed all over the country. Here are some of their opinions:Miss Cao (a teacher from No.2 Middle School)As a teacher, I dont agree that the students should bring a mobile phone to school. Firstly, They often send message
11、s with phones during the class or sometimes when they are having a test! Secondly, many students are so interested in playing games that they spend too much time playing games on the phone rather than do their homework. Miss Gao (A boys Mother)As a mother, I think it is necessary for students to bri
12、ng a mobile phone to school. First of all, its easy for the parents to get in touch with them and know what they are doing. Besides, they can use phones to ask for help at once when they get hurt by accident. They dont need to wait for help until the teacher es.Xiaoze (A fifteen-year-old junior stud
13、ent) Both of the teachers and parents are right. I understand their worry about us. If we use mobile phones to help our study or to make it easy to talk with our parents, I think it is good to take one to school. However, using them to cheat in exams or to play too many games is too bad. So good or bad, depend on ourselves.
