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1、月考月考 基础写作基础写作 评讲总结评讲总结 Studying GoalsLearn to combine sentences and write complex sentences in writing:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语借助名词短语做同位语2)借助介词短语做定语借助介词短语做定语3)借助介词短语做状语借助介词短语做状语4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句III. 用好从句用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、定语从句、名词性从句、状
2、语从句）和引导词写出规范的复合句：状语从句）和引导词写出规范的复合句： Combine the two sentences into one1. My history teacher is a beautiful woman.2. She has two big eyes and long hair.名词短语做同位语名词短语做同位语My history teacher , a beautiful woman , has two big eyes and long hair. with介词短语做定语介词短语做定语 My history teacher is a beautiful woman w
3、ith two big eyes and long hair. 定语从句定语从句My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair. Combine the two sentences into one1.Australia is located in the smallest continentOceania.2.Australia is the sixth largest country in the world.名词性短语做同位语名词性短语做同位语 Australia, the sixth
4、largest country in the world, is located in the smallest continent.非谓语动词做状语非谓语动词做状语Located in the smallest continentOceania, Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. Combine the two sentences into one1.Australia is made up of 6 states .2.Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities in the
5、 six states.定语从句定语从句 Australia is made up of 6 states, in which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities.Combine the two sentences into one1.Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers.2.Australia has a population of 20 million.Australia covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilomet
6、ers with a population of about 20 million. and引导的并列句引导的并列句Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers and it has a population of 20 million. Combine the two sentences into one1.Australia is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife.2.The tourists
7、from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery .状语从句状语从句Because Australia is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife, the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery.背景：草原上狼群和羊群之间背景：草原上狼群和羊群之间的故事的故事主要角色喜羊羊主要角色喜羊羊: :聪明伶俐，聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢，是羊族的小英雄乐观
8、勇敢，是羊族的小英雄主要角色灰太狼：带着一顶带主要角色灰太狼：带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子，它贪婪但无论补丁的黄帽子，它贪婪但无论怎样总抓不住羊怎样总抓不住羊评价：童趣但不幼稚，启智却评价：童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥不枯燥成绩：迄今推出了玩偶，图书，成绩：迄今推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品；获得很多奖游戏等相关产品；获得很多奖项项 写作要求写作要求 1.1.使用使用5 5个句子表达全部个句子表达全部的内容。的内容。2.2.句子结构准确，信息内句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。容完整，篇章结构连贯。写作内容：写作内容：Lets make preparations.Useful words a
9、nd expressions:以以为背景为背景草原草原主要角色主要角色羊族羊族乐观乐观童趣童趣启智启智迄今迄今推出推出奖项奖项相关的相关的be set in/ongrasslandsmain/leading charactergoat familyoptimistic/hold a positive attitude toward lifefunnyinspiringup to nowput forwardawardrelevantLets translate the simple sentences!. .Translate the following sentences:这个动画片以生活在
10、草原上的羊群和狼群为背这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景。景。故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。喜羊羊是主要角色之一。喜羊羊是主要角色之一。喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。 无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。 这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群
11、和狼群为背这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景。景。1.This cartoon series is set on the grasslands where the goats and wolves live.故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。2.The stories are funny but not childish, inspiring but not boring.喜羊羊是主要角色之一。喜羊羊是主要角色之一。One of the main characters is Pleasant Goat.喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。Pleas
12、ant Goat is a little hero in the goat family.喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。Pleasant Goat is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life.合并句子（同位语，定语从句）合并句子（同位语，定语从句）3.One of the main characters is Pleasant Goat , a little hero in the goat family, who is clever, brave and holds a positive
13、attitude toward his life. 贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。（with介词短介词短语做定语）语做定语） The greedy Big Big Wolf always wears a yellow hat with patches. 无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。 （状语从句）（状语从句）No matter how hard he tries ,he can never catch any goats.合并句子（非谓语动词做定语）合并句子（非谓语动词做定语）4.The greedy Big Big Wo
14、lf ,always wearing a yellow hat with patches, can never catch any goats, no matter how hard he tries.由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项，由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。 （状语从句）（状语从句）5.Because it has made a great success, up till now the cartoon company has won a lot of awards and put for
15、ward relevant products like toys, books and computer games.介词短语做状语介词短语做状语(because of)Because of the great success of Pleasant Goat and Big Big wolf, up till now the cartoon company has won a lot of awards and put forward relevant products like toys, books and computer games. This cartoon series is s
16、et on the grasslands where the goats and wolves live. The stories are funny but not childish, inspiring but not boring. One of the main characters is Pleasant Goat , a little hero in the goat family, who is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life. By contrast, the greedy Big Big
17、Wolf ，always wearing a yellow hat with patches, can never catch any goats, no matter how hard he tries. Because of the great success of Pleasant Goat and Big Big wolf, up till now the cartoon company has won a lot of awards and put forward relevant products like toys, books and computer games.Apprec
18、iationAppreciate some compositions of your classmates, and try to find out some complex sentences.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语借助名词短语做同位语2)借助介词短语做定语借助介词短语做定语3)借助介词短语做状语借助介词短语做状语4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句III. 用好从句用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）定语从句、名词性从句、状语从
19、句）和引导词，写出规范的复合句：和引导词，写出规范的复合句： Homework用用5个规范的句子写一则日记，个规范的句子写一则日记，内容如下：内容如下： 我又一次考试不及格，回家遭到父亲的责我又一次考试不及格，回家遭到父亲的责骂。他说我过度沉溺于电脑游戏骂。他说我过度沉溺于电脑游戏.我心情很我心情很沮丧，不知道该干什么，独自一人在外边沮丧，不知道该干什么，独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛。突然抬起头，看见树上漫无目的地闲逛。突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢，鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。只有一个鸟巢，鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切都是为了我好
20、。我知道我以后我该怎么做都是为了我好。我知道我以后我该怎么做了。了。我又一次考试不及格。我又一次考试不及格。 回家回家 遭到父亲的责骂（遭到父亲的责骂（scold）。）。他说我沉溺于他说我沉溺于(be addicted to)电脑游戏。电脑游戏。我心情很沮丧。我心情很沮丧。 (depressed)不知道该干什么。不知道该干什么。独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛(wander)。突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢(nest)。鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切都是
21、为了我好。切都是为了我好。我知道我以后我该怎么做了。我知道我以后我该怎么做了。1.I failed in the exam again. 2.I came back home.3.My father scolded me .4.because I was addicted to playing computer games. 5.I was depressed.6.I didnt know what to do.7. I wandered out aimlessly.8.I looked up and saw a nest in the tree.9.The mother bird was f
22、eeding her baby10. At this time I realized that what my father did was for me.11.I knew what I should do in future.Having failed in the exam again, I was scolded by my father when I came back home. He said that it was just because I was addicted to playing the computer games that I failed again and again. Not knowing what to do, I wandered out aimlessly. Just at that time I caught sight of a tree, with a nest in it, where a mother bird was feeding her baby. Only then did I realize whatever my father did was for me and I knew what I should do in future.
