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1、 写作写作切忌：切忌： 零敲碎打式， 到三角式， 灵感迟来式， 自我感觉良好式步骤：步骤： 仔细审题仔细审题 内容要点内容要点 时态语态时态语态 仔细检查仔细检查 1开篇达意 2行文连贯 3避生就熟 4材料积累一开篇达意开篇达意二行文连贯行文连贯 连接词连接词1时间 2递进 3因果 4转折 5比较 6进一步说明 7总结 复合句复合句 分词分词 同位语同位语 不定式不定式 被动语态被动语态1 时间：时间： while, when, as 当当的时候的时候 soon after, after, after that, then 然后然后 before 在在之前之前 just then 在在那时那时
2、 as soon as 一一就就 occasionally 有时候有时候 after a while 过了一会儿过了一会儿 the next moment 紧接着紧接着 a few minutes later 几分钟以后几分钟以后2递进递进: first of all 首先首先 next 其次其次 besides 此外此外3因果因果: because so as a result thus 因而因而 therefore因此，所以因此，所以4转折转折: but although, though yet however otherwise, or 否则否则 in spite of ， despit
3、e不管不管 unexpectedly 没想到没想到 instead of 而不是，反而而不是，反而5比较比较 like 象象 ，正如，正如 unlike 不象，不同于不象，不同于 compared with 与相比与相比 on the contrary 相反相反 on the other hand 在另一方面在另一方面6进一步说明进一步说明 in other words 换句话说换句话说 namely 也就是也就是 that is to say 也就是说也就是说 such as 比如比如 for example, for instance 例如例如7总结总结 in a word 总之总之 in
4、 general 一般来说一般来说 in short 简而言之简而言之 after all 毕竟毕竟 generally speaking 概括地说概括地说同位语同位语 不定式不定式 被动语态被动语态1.同位语同位语 William Shakespeare, the famous English 2. playwright , wrote thirty-seven plays all his life.2 不定式不定式 All the students are expected to be present on time.3被动语态被动语态 Houses are cleaned, couple
5、ts对联 are pasted on the door, and colorful lanterns are hung at the gates. 三常见错误三常见错误1小时候，我非常喜欢游泳。When I was very small, I very liked swimming. FWhen I was a little kid, I liked swimming very much.2在所有的学科中，我的物理最强In all of the courses, my physics is very strong. FOf all of the courses, I do best in ph
6、ysics.3英语晚会的时间是下午六点，地点在305室The time of the English party is at 6 oclock in the evening and the place is Room 305. FThe English party will be held in Room 305 at 6 in the evening.4明天约有50名美国学生要到我校参观.There are about 50 American students will come to our school to have a visit. FAbout 50 American studen
7、ts will come to our school to have a visit.5看到如此美丽的景色，他惊呆了。Seeing such a beautiful scene, his heart missed a beat.FSeeing such a beautiful scene, he was amazed at it.When he saw such a beautiful scene, his heart missed a beat.6 做锻炼对身体有好处。Doing exercise will be well for your body. FDoing exercise wil
8、l be good for your health.7 这件毛皮外套太贵了。The price of this fur coat is so expensive. FThe price of the fur coat is too high.8 他们到悉尼已经三天了。他们到悉尼已经三天了。They have arrived in Sydney three days ago. FThey arrived in Sydney three days ago.They have been in Sydney for three days.9 在棒球赛中，我校棒球队击败了另一支队伍。In the bas
9、eball game, our team won the team from another school. FIn the baseball team, we beat the team from another school.10 手提包里有一个钱包，一本我十年来收集的邮票和装有一些重要材料的大信封。Inside the suitcase have a wallet, a book of my ten years collects stamps and inside hold many important materials large envelope. FIn the suitcase
10、 there is a wallet, a book of stamps, which I have collected for the past ten years, and a large envelope with some important materials inside.11去年夏天，我和我的父母去海边度假。Last summer I and my parents went on holiday by the sea. FLast summer, my parents and I went on holiday by the sea.四避生就熟四避生就熟1他把妈妈热恼了，妈妈让他
11、去刷掉所有的盘子。他把妈妈热恼了，妈妈让他去刷掉所有的盘子。 Having annoyed his mother, he was told to wash all The plates.Because he made his mother rather angry, he was told to wash all the plates.2我们足球教练告诉我们在赛场上要服从他的指挥。我们足球教练告诉我们在赛场上要服从他的指挥。 Our football coach told us to obey his instructionsduring a match.Our football coach
12、told us that we should do what he told us during a match.五五 材料积累材料积累1精彩句子精彩句子 优秀段落优秀段落 典型范文典型范文 克鲁索赶紧回家，一边做一遍回头看 Crusoe hurried home, looking behind as he went. 我们一起去书店，一边走一边愉快地交谈 We went to the bookstore together, talking happily as we walked.2随意学习法随意学习法: 他在地上打了个滚，站了起来。He rolled on the ground and s
13、tood up. He rolled on the ground and gained his feet. He rolled on the ground and rose to his feet. 写作训练成篇写作训练成篇记叙文记叙文： 看图写话，文字提示， 改写和缩写， 人物经历说明文说明文： 事物， 地点， 图表及其他应用文应用文： 书信格式， 书信类别， 便条， 通知， 日记 ， 指路议论文议论文： 发言稿， 表明观点 记叙文记叙文 一看图写话看图写话 记叙文六要素：时间，地点，事件，原因，结果，人物 组词成句，组句成文组词成句，组句成文二文字提示文字提示 短文要包含全部提示，切忌逐字
14、逐句翻译切忌逐字逐句翻译，围绕题意， 添加必要的叙述和描写三 改写和缩写改写和缩写四人物经历人物经历 说明文说明文(事物事物,地点地点,图表及其他图表及其他)一事物一事物 1客观客观 2简练简练 3全面全面 4常用一般现在时常用一般现在时二地点二地点：空间顺序：空间顺序 1学校设施：学校设施： the school gate classroom building laboratory building2表方位表方位 on the left of on the right of near3表位于某处表位于某处 lie, be located, stand三三 图表及其他图表及其他：叙述类，说明类
15、，议论类 应用文应用文一书信格式书信格式 信封 书信：信头，称谓信头，称谓 ，正文，正文， 结束语和谦称，结束语和谦称， 签名签名二 书信类别书信类别 ： 普通信 ， 请求信， 邀请信， 感谢信， 应聘信1普通信：开头语： 结束语：2请求信：3邀请信：4感谢信：5应聘信：三 便条便条： 简单扼要，简单扼要， 语气比较随便，日期语气比较随便，日期 称呼称呼 署名署名四通知通知1书面： 正中正中Notice，右下角写发通知的人，单位，右下角写发通知的人，单位， 日期在左下角，语言简练，准确。日期在左下角，语言简练，准确。2口头套语：Ladies and gentleman, May I have
16、your attention please?五 日记日记：一般用过去时 1 星期 日期 天气情况 Thursday March 4, Fine 2发生的事情， 写一点事情六 指路指路 1会看交通图 2说清向左（右）转，第几路口，乘那路车，找何参照物 3通常用祈使句 4时态常用一般现在时 5常用词语：说明距离远近：It is only fifteen minutes walk.Its very far from here. Youd better take a bus.告诉别人怎样坐车The bus stop was on the other side of the road.It will t
17、ake you thirty minutes to get there by bus.往前走 go down the street walk along this road沿着光明大街往前走 go along Bright Road过桥 go across the bridge怎么转弯 take the first turning on your right turn right at the first crossing turn left at the cinema找参照物It is between the park and library.Theres a hotel opposite
18、to the shopping center.Theres a bank across the street.议论文议论文一发言稿一发言稿 Ladies and gentleman , may I have your attention? Warmly welcome to visit our school.二表明观点二表明观点 as we know, Its known that Its true that, but in my opinion Dear Mr. Wood, Hows everything _ you? I_tell you that there is going to be
19、 a 10,000-meter race on the afternoon of May 15, _ . The race will start at 2:00. Well run along the Peoples Street to the traffic lights _turn right. Go on running until we reach the post office and turn right _ . After _ the second turning on the right, go on along the river _ return to the school
20、. Ten students of each class are asked to _ the race. Teachers are welcomed, too. Well be very glad if you could come. If you join us, be sure to get to our school playground before 1:30 that afternoon. _ tell me whether you will come or not, will you? My phone number is 63541234. Yours sincerely, L
21、i Mingwitham writingwhether it rain or notand thenagaintakingand finallytake part inRing me up and First, the Med-autumn comes in a beautiful season. Autumn is a time of harvest and everybody feels happy. Second, the Day is a time of family reunion. All the family members get together to share their
22、 happiness. Third the delicious moon cakes are also a reason for my favor of the Day.The beautiful moon tale also adds some fun to this Day. We can enjoy the round moon at the same time having the moon cakes. 记叙文常用词和短语记叙文常用词和短语描述动作：描述动作：wander in the street 在街上走着在街上走着be busy doing sth 忙于做某事忙于做某事 cat
23、ch sight of 看见看见take notice of 注意到注意到take view of 看见看见 burst into through the door 冲出门外冲出门外knock into sb. 撞到某人撞到某人 have sth. with sb. 某人带上某物某人带上某物hearseefind sb. doing sth. 听见听见/看见某人做某事看见某人做某事help sb. with sth.=help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事帮助某人做某事stop sb. from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事阻止某人做某事speakthink highly o
24、f sb. 称赞某人称赞某人 tell sb. about sth. 告诉某人关于某事告诉某人关于某事beget lost 迷路迷路take (send) sb. To 送某人去送某人去have an outing 外出旅行（散布）外出旅行（散布）keep (sb.) doing sth. 不停地做不停地做get something ready 准备好准备好 cant help doing sth. 禁不住做某事禁不住做某事 pass by 路过路过 描述事情描述事情: 想到了一个好主意想到了一个好主意 a good idea comes to ones mind下定决心做某事下定决心做某事
25、make up ones mind to do sth.为做过的事而后悔为做过的事而后悔 regret for what sb. has done过的愉快过的愉快 have a good time=enjoy oneself使人感到担忧（吃惊使人感到担忧（吃惊/高兴高兴/恐惧）恐惧） make sb. worriedsurprisedhappyfrightened做某事觉得乐在其中做某事觉得乐在其中 have fun (in ) doing sth. 问某人发生了什么事问某人发生了什么事 ask ab. what has happenedcome back safe and sound 安全地
26、回来安全地回来leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象给某人留下深刻印象It seems impossible for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说，做某事好像不可能对某人来说，做某事好像不可能realize that 意识到意识到used to do sth. 过去常常过去常常 be used to do sth. 习惯于习惯于 连接作用连接作用 there waswere sothat so that tooto on ones way home from school on ones way to schoolfactory notun
27、til as soon as 连接作用连接作用 suddenly luckily immediately at once at once at last it was the first time that with ones help=with the help of sb. 说明文说明文(事物事物,地点地点,图表及其他图表及其他)一事物一事物 1客观客观 2简练简练 3全面全面 4常用一般现在时常用一般现在时二地点二地点：空间顺序：空间顺序 1学校设施：学校设施： the school gate classroom building laboratory building library
28、sports ground basketball courts dining hall school clinic administration offices教导处教导处 a tennis court swimming pool2表方位表方位 on the left of on the right of near between in the middle of in the center of across behind in the back of in front of在前面 in the front of在前部3表位于某处表位于某处 lie, be located, stand三三
29、图表及其他图表及其他：叙述类，说明类，议论类四说明文常用词汇1介绍地点介绍地点 lie locate stand cover an area of have an area of aboutsquare kilometers be almost equal to sth. on the coast of in the part of make up组成 have a total land area of make up be set upbe built be covered with contain 包含 next to in the early 1980s be started aim t
30、o do sth.目的在于 in front of into the eastwestnorthsouth of in the middle of on its left stands ( a lot of research) work has been carried out in recent years make sure at the foot of the hill great changes have taken place2介绍事物介绍事物 have a history of years in doing sth. It remains in good condition情况良好
31、 easy to operate容易操作 both at home and abroad国内外 provide free repair service ( repair service is free） 提供免费维修服务 be made up of +n. consist of由组成3介绍人物外貌介绍人物外貌: 形容面部特征:bony,broad,egg-shaped,oval,long,narrow形容眼部特征：sleepy, wear glasses, large, small形容鼻子特征：straight,a bit flat, a bit upturned, short straigh
32、t,high, long形容嘴特征：upturned, round , thick, thin, big形容头发特征：curly, wavy, bald straight, long, short, thick, thin4人物经历和性格人物经历和性格 Let me introduceto you be born be meters in height be pounds in weight work as in ones spare time graduate from in ones childhood be fond of be interested in like geography
33、( maths, English) best, at the age of be in charge of负责负责 from then on be busy with sth.be busy doing sth. be careless about sth. be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事 make sb. angry get on well with sb. with ones help be strict with sb. 对某人要求严格 make progress in 在方面取得进步 fail in be regarded as 被当作 be good at=
34、do well in be poor at=be weak in succeed in sth.doing sth. learnby heart 应用文应用文一书信格式 信封 书信：信头，称谓 ，正文， 结束语和谦称， 签名二 书信类别 ： 普通信 ， 请求信， 邀请信， 感谢信， 应聘信1普通信：开头语： 结束语：2请求信：3邀请信：4感谢信：5应聘信：三 便条： 简单扼要， 语气比较随便，日期 称呼 署名四通知1书面：2口头套语：1普通信：开头语： I have just heard from you. What a surprise it was to hear from you!You
35、 will be glad to hear thatI just cant wait to write to tell youIm sorry to tell you 结束语：I shall be looking forward to hearing from you soon.Do write to us when you have time.3邀请信邀请信：Can you come for?Would you like to?We would like to invite you toI wonder if you could come and join us.We do hope tha
36、t you can come to our party.4感谢信感谢信：Thank you for the wonderfulI really appreciate your help.Thank you so much for doingfor me.四四通知通知1书面书面： 正中正中Notice，右下角写发通知的人，单位，右下角写发通知的人，单位， 日期在左下角，语言简练，准确。日期在左下角，语言简练，准确。2口头套语口头套语 Ladies and gentleman, May I have your attention please? Attention, boys and girls.
37、五 日记日记：一般用过去时 1 星期 日期 天气情况 Thursday March 4, Fine 2发生的事情， 写一点事情六 指路1会看交通图 2说清向左（右）转，第几路口，乘那路车，找何参照物3通常用祈使句4时态常用一般现在时5常用词语：说明距离远近：It is only fifteen minutes walk.Its very far from here. Youd better take a bus.告诉别人怎样坐车The bus stop was on the other side of the road.It will take you thirty minutes to ge
38、t there by bus.往前走 go down the street walk along this road沿着光明大街往前走 go along Bright Road过桥 go across the bridge怎么转弯 take the first turning on your right turn right at the first crossing turn left at the cinema找参照物It is between the park and library.Theres a hotel opposite to the shopping center.There
39、s a bank across the street. 议论文议论文一发言稿一发言稿 Ladies and gentleman , may I have your attention? Warmly welcome to visit our school. Lets give our warmest welcome to our American friends. get acquainted with和熟悉了 wish sb. a pleasant journey.二表明观点二表明观点 as we know, Its known that Its true that, but in my o
40、pinion step by step逐渐地 gain a lot of knowledge about learn from benefit from受益于 do sb. good with great effort make full use of time break away from the bad habit 除掉恶习 be enrolled by a university 被大学录取 meet the demands of 满足需求 the one-child policy 独生子女政策 place many children in a superior position in their families share ones burn 分享某人的负担 have a strong sense of honour and responsibility 有很强的荣誉感和责任心 lend a helpful hand follow ones advice keep sth. in mind
