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1、2018 年初中年度家长学校的工作总结年度家长学校工作总结年初中年度家长学校的工作总结年度家长学校工作总结姓名姓名:XXX 部门部门: XX部部YOUR LOGO Your company name2 0 X X初年度家长学校工作总结初年度家长学校工作总结初年度家长学校工作总结初年度家长学校工作总结近年来近年来,我校家长学校工作在县教育局关工委的正确指导下我校家长学校工作在县教育局关工委的正确指导下,在学校党总支的领导下在学校党总支的领导下,以科学发展观为指南以科学发展观为指南,充分发挥学校在家庭教育的优质作用充分发挥学校在家庭教育的优质作用,利用学校主阵地和主课利用学校主阵地和主课堂堂,努力
2、开创家庭教育新局面。我校坚持努力开创家庭教育新局面。我校坚持“学校工作以人为本学校工作以人为本,学生教育以德为准学生教育以德为准,家家庭教育以同向为目标庭教育以同向为目标”的原则。在家长学校工作的原则。在家长学校工作,摒弃摒弃“封闭、保守、灌输、强制封闭、保守、灌输、强制”的说教式的说教式,采取采取“开放、民主、主体、创新、生活化、个性化开放、民主、主体、创新、生活化、个性化”的新模式。在目标上的新模式。在目标上尊重个体差异尊重个体差异,内容上重视民主法制精神教育、心理健康教育和环境道德教育内容上重视民主法制精神教育、心理健康教育和环境道德教育,方法方法上注重更新家庭教育观念上注重更新家庭教育
3、观念,构建民主平等的亲子关系构建民主平等的亲子关系,尊重学生家长尊重学生家长,着重培养家长着重培养家长的育人能力。从目标、内容、途径、方法上加大改革的力度的育人能力。从目标、内容、途径、方法上加大改革的力度,构建构建“抓自主教育、抓自主教育、促尊重教育、突体验教育促尊重教育、突体验教育”的整体的家庭教育体系的整体的家庭教育体系,教家长学会培养孩子独立、自教家长学会培养孩子独立、自主、健全的个性和自我管理能力主、健全的个性和自我管理能力,充分尊重和信任孩子充分尊重和信任孩子,同时还经常开展家庭教育的同时还经常开展家庭教育的体验活动体验活动,使家长、学生愉悦地获取知识使家长、学生愉悦地获取知识,并
4、通过角色体验并通过角色体验一、评分标准 1. 本题总分为25分，按五个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 5. 拼写标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程序予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 二、各档次的给分范围和要求： 第五档：(2125分)能写明全部要点；语言基本
5、无误；行文连贯，表达清楚。 第四档：(1620分)能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。 第三档：(1115分)能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。 第二档：(610分)能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达。 第一档：(15分)只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子可懂。 1. 审题；审题；（把握关键、重点）（把握关键、重点）2. 进行构思；进行构思；（紧扣主题，列出提纲）（紧扣主题，列出提纲）3. 扩展成文；扩展成文；（运用好词、好句）（运用好词、好句）4. 注意逻辑；注意逻辑；（过渡词；上下文连贯）（过渡词；上下文连贯）5. 检查修改；检
6、查修改；（注意标点，大小写，格式等）（注意标点，大小写，格式等）写作技巧指写作技巧指导导(Guidance on writing skills)1. 审题审题 (Understanding of the topic)审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想中心思想、主题主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。 Jim is addicted to surfing the Internet. He wants to give up but doesnt know how. He has written to you to ask for advice. Please write
7、him a letter back to give him advice.Im very sorry that you are addicted to surfing the Internet. and find it hard to give it up.How to Spend a Meaningful National Holiday？学校将开展“英语角”活动来丰富学生的英语知识，现向学生征集关于“英语角”活动内容的建议。请你就此给校长写一封建议信。狭狭义: knowledge learnt in class;广广义: everything related to English: kno
8、wledge about English culture, custom; the way English people think, etc.2. 构思构思 (Structure design)审好题、立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。Para1. Purpose of writing;Para2. Your suggestions; (the activities you want to advise)Para3. Conclusion and expectation;Here/The following are my
9、 advice for English Corner. I would be grateful if you can take/consider my advice. I do hope you can find my suggestions useful/helpful.3. 扩扩展成文展成文 (Content development)根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的方式包括：顺序法顺序法、举例法举例法、比较法、对比法比较法、对比法、说说明法明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。学校将开展“英语角”活动
10、来丰富学生的英语知识，现向学生征集关于“英语角”活动内容的建议。请你就此给校长写一封建议信。1）确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题、不跑题。2）要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。3）用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。3. 扩扩展成文展成文 (Content development)1）在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。英语中存在着极为丰富的同义词，准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。同时要灵活运
11、用各种句式，如强调句、省略句、主从复合句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。2）使用不同长度的句子。如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话，通过分句和合句或用两句、三句来表达，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。3）改变句子的开头方式，不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首，或用分词等。3. 扩扩展成文展成文 (Content development)4. 注意注意逻辑逻辑 (Logical connection)根据句子或者上下文之间的逻辑关系，选用合适的连接词来自然过渡。陈述述观点点: In my opinion.; From my point of view; As far as
12、Im concerned.; As for me.; 转折关系折关系: but; while; however; yet; rather than; on the contrary; nevertheless.选择关系关系: or; either.or.; 因果关系因果关系: for.; because(of); since; as; as a result of; due to.; thanks to.; owe.to.;并列关系并列关系: not only. but also.; and; both.and.; neither. nor.; as well as. 列列举关系关系: for
13、 example; for instance; such as; like.; 目的关系目的关系: for the purpose of.; so as to (so that); in order to (in order that);让步关系步关系: even if/ though; although; though; 对比关系比关系: on the one hand,. on the other hand.; . while .;条件关系条件关系: if; unless; as long as.;递进关系关系: furthermore; moreover; whats more; bes
14、ides; in addition,.; apart from that,.;归纳关系关系:In a word; All in all; In short; To sum up; In conclusion; In general; On the whole; 4. 注意注意逻辑逻辑 (Logical connection)4. 注意注意逻辑逻辑 (Logical connection)1. It is hard to learn English well. I wont give up learning it. Even if it is hard to learn English well
15、, I wont give it up.2. He spent his holiday studying. I spent my holiday doing exercise. He spent holiday studying while I (spent holiday) doing exercise.3. I dont know what had happened to them. I dont care about what had happened to them. I neither know nor care about what had happened to them.5.
16、检查检查修改修改 (Check and correct)要留时间通读全文，修改可能出现的错误。检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适，是否有语法错误，主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯，是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等，还有就是注意卷面整洁。学校将开展“英语角”活动来丰富学生的英语知识，现向学生征集关于“英语角”活动内容的建议。请你就此给校长写一封建议信。Para1. Purpose of writing;Para2. Your suggestions; (the activiti
17、es you want to advise)Para3. Conclusion and expectation;Para1. Purpose of writing得知我们学校将要开设“英语角”来帮助学生丰富英语知识，我很高兴。Im glad to learn that our school is going to set up an English Corner to enrich students knowledge of English;Im glad to hear that an English Corner is going to be set up in our school to
18、 help students have a good command of English knowledge.作为学生，我想要提供自己的建议。As a student, Id like to give/offer my advice.Para2. Your suggestions首先，在我看来，没有比让学生读一些英语原著(original English books)更有帮助的了。First of all, as far as I am concerned, nothing can be more helpful than reading original Englihs books.正是在
19、这些原著中，我们才能了解英语人民思考和表达的方式。It is from original English books that we can understand the way native English people think and express.Para2. Your suggestions此外，看一些英语电影也不失为一个好主意。Apart from that, watching some English movies never fails to be a good idea.你看的越多，你会对英语文化和习俗更清楚。The more you watch, the better
20、you will know about/master Englihs culture and customs.Para2. Your suggestions最后，为什么不给学生提供与外国人交流的机会呢？Finally, why not offer students the chance to communicate with foreigners.通过和他们分享想法和感受，学生会开拓思维，增强兴趣，因为在不了解英语的情况下学英语是没有乐趣的。Students will open their mind and their interest will be strengthened/improve
21、d through sharing thoughts and feelings with them, because its no pleasure learning English without knowing it.Para3. Conclusion and expectation我确实希望我的建议能够有用且学生能够从中受益。期待着“英语角”的成功。I do hope you will find my suggestions useful/helpful and students will benefit a lot. Look forward to the success of Eng
22、lish Corner.Dear headmaster, Im glad to learn that our school is going to set up an English Corner to enrich students knowledge of English. As a student, Id like to offer my advice. First of all, As far as I am concerned, nothing can be more helpful than reading original Englihs books. It is from or
23、iginal English books that we can understand the way native English people think and express. Apart from that, watching some English movies never fails to be a good idea. The more you watch, the better you will know about Englihs culture and customs. Finally, why not offer students the chance to comm
24、unicate with foreigners.Students will open their mind and their interest will be improved through sharing thoughts and feelings with them, because its no pleasure learning English without knowing it. I do hope you will find my suggestions useful and students will benefit a lot. Look forward to the s
25、uccess of English Corner.Yours faithfully, 最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点如下： 1. 每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解； 2. 你谈到了自己的梦想； 3. 如何实现自己的梦想。注意：1.词数:120左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。要想拿高分，作文要想拿高分，作文须须走心走心中心突出，主题明确；中心突出，主题明确；层次清楚，条理清晰；层次清楚，条理清晰； 表达力强，传情达意；表达力强，传情达意；语句通顺，句型多变；语句通顺，句型多变；过渡自然，衔接紧凑；过渡自然，衔接紧凑
26、；标点正确，大小无误；标点正确，大小无误；字迹清楚，卷面整洁。字迹清楚，卷面整洁。归纳归纳（Summary）现在手机在中学生生活中越来越普遍。因此，班级就“高中生要不要在学校使用手机”这一话题进行了激烈的讨论。有同学认为学校应该允许学生带手机，; 有同学则认为不应该使用手机，；你的观点，。Part1. Drscription of the phenomenon;Part2. Advantages and disadvantages;Part3. Your opinions;Proverbs1. Many a little makes a mickle. 积少成多2. Practice make
27、s perfect. 熟能生巧3. No success in life merely happens.人生中没有什么成功是纯粹偶然得来的 4. Rome is not built in one day.冰冻三尺，非一日之寒 5. Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师 6. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。7. Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. 如果你全神贯注，没有事情是不可能的。8. Where there is a will, t
28、here is a way. 有志者事竟成 9. When the going gets tough, the tough gets going. 艰难之路，勇者行。10. Dont let yesterday use up too much of today. 不要让昨天耗费今天太多 修 辞I think learning English is like drinking a coffee. First it is a bit bitter and then sweet all the time. Treat English learning as a big challenge for y
29、ourself.It is very important to make notes in English class.As we all know, English is not improved in one day, so we have to be patient.As for the importance of learning English, different people have/hold different ideas. We must insist on learning English.Learning English well is based on a wide
30、vocabulary, so it is very important for us to enrich our vocabulary through all kinds of ways. After class, you can listen to as many English songs as you can. In this way, you will improve your listening skill. Some students may think that learning English is not useful, because we are Chinese and
31、we hardly have chance to travel in English speaking countries.You should change your attitude towards English study.In my opinion, it is very important to learn English well, because English may play an important role in our future life.I can well remember that there was a time when I had troubles (
32、in) learning English.Even if you suffer from troubles, you cant give up/ give in to them.The more you ask, the more you will get.Dear friends, I would like to share my experience in Learning English with you here. Actually, in my opinion/as far as Im concerned, learning English is like drinking coff
33、ee. First it tastes a little bitter and then sweet all the time. In order to learn English well, I take every opportunity/chance to practice English. As we all know, practice makes perfect. Sometimes I did get lost on the way. I would feel tired about learning English. When this happened, I would te
34、ll myself Rome is not built in one day. I must insist on learning. Of course, a wide vocabulary is the base for learning English well. As for how to enrich/enlarge my vocabulary, I try to make good use of the words Ive learned as frequently as possible. I advise you to do some reading and listen to English radio programs after class to improve your English listening. Besides, keeping a diary in English does great good to your writing. I hope you will find my advice useful. Thats all. Thank you!
