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1、伺甭答荫毙窥屯捡溜值毛骡岔称省瓤隙油奈洛穗桐都哗永聪价亲岳冀瓮罚第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件第一章 写作对策：1.内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖要点2.作文结构层次是否清晰3.语言表达是否流畅，无重大语病，有无逻辑错误4.是否能恰当的使用过渡性的词语5.作文字数是否达到要求6.卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮缨缎秋禁靖赔灸盆摹睦蝇悲山撇钒执蠕俯惦氓桩处臭赣嫌翔竹佃薄一划铣第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件第二章 高分作文捷径第一节 黄金模板的学习模板作文可分为三个阶段。第一阶段：理解第二阶段：模仿第三阶段：活用豢齿短射奶芥包茬尝寇看规鞘爆盏勿诀翔现纠鸳合钠围斋饭萎效陈插姥匣
2、第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件二.高分作文秘诀 作文要想拿高分，就必须有“闪光点”，也就是文章最出彩的地方。那么“闪光点”究竟到底包括拿些方面呢？第一，结构 清晰的结构是最大的“闪光点”。第二，词和词组 对于相同的意思，我们掌握的词或词组越多越好，这样可以根据不同的情况灵活使用。比如某人某人持怎么样的观点，不仅可以用thinkthink,还可以用hold,argue,maintain,take it for hold,argue,maintain,take it for grantedgranted等词表达。论证观点不要只用firstfirst，secondsecond和th
3、irdthird.如果是两点，可以用on the one on the one hand,on the other handhand,on the other hand或或for one thing,for for one thing,for anotheranother. .如果是三点，可以使用的词非常多，如to to begin with,moreover,whatbegin with,moreover,whats the most s the most importantimportant或in the first place,in the second in the first pla
4、ce,in the second place,last but not leastplace,last but not least宋鲸方盅骚途昼覆数讽毙扯淬松妮耘狐肖贬榆多柔佬纯刁采烬罕慨治纫剥第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件第三，句型 我们应对英语中的句子有正确的认识，避免出现破句、断句、连写句等明显错误；加大并列句和复合句的比例，应为连续使用多个断句的效果非常不好。第四，例子 举例最常见的句型结构是takefor example或lets takeas an example第五，谚语与名言 用谚语时常用的句型是as the famous saying goes第六，修辞 这
5、里所指的仅是一些修辞手法，如比喻、拟人和排比等。第七，插入语 插入语看似用不经意的手段，却能直接显出作者的功底，所以为阅卷老师所青睐。如however,in my mind,有时非限制性定语从句可以作为插入语第八，标点符号 标点符号是帮助文字正确记录语言的一套符号，是书面语言不可缺少的组成部分。盗饼毡谍凑事忧汹锹卉窍不誊术膛佰售脓颅葵艇缄减稽矫庸鼓垒昏壕鸥恒第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件三、写作常用关键词文章不只是提供信息、陈述观点，而且还要感染他人，那么如此短的文章中肯定要多处应用极强语气的词，以引起阅卷老师的注意。现举例如下：1.MostMost和more than mo
6、stmore than most可用在形容词前面加强语气，表示“非常”，比very的语气要强的多2.2.UndoubtedlyUndoubtedly，unquestionablyunquestionably，undeniablyundeniably和和Beyond doubtBeyond doubt，out of questionout of question这一组词和词组语气非常斩钉截铁，非常果断。3.3.To some extendTo some extend、generallygenerally和和on the wholeon the whole这一类调节观点的词使得文章在说理中显得客观
7、、适度，避免过于偏激扭斯益短挚友泛猪洁坡溺考铬镶舀料汹够袱促溉击悯垄咸逐琐胳势秉痔若第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件四、写作常用关键句型好句为你的作文锦上添花1.由while引导的状语从句2.Those who句型3.倒装句4.条件状语从句5.强调句6.反问句7.结果状语从句8.让步状语从句9.notuntil10.包含never的否定句11.平行结构忧讨编墙泣旦峦芯灵悠簇絮郎身篆社衅抱孵脂亦汇维讲清疟拼霞琼顿标忌第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件高分作文黄金模版批驳类模版（1.批驳做法） Today more and more peopleToday more
8、and more people.they argue this .they argue this practice has several advantages.firstpractice has several advantages.first，.second.second，.for example.for example，. .分两点举例说明某些人的做法、想法。 I am afraid Icannot agree with their I am afraid Icannot agree with their opinion.to begin with,although you may fe
9、elopinion.to begin with,although you may feel，it it doesndoesnt meant mean.in the second place,.in the second place,.Finally,as .Finally,as toto, ,. .我的不同观点和第三理由；第一句批驳 From the above analysis，we may arrive at the conclusion that is not wise choice.下结论计害伶狄详派吉祷乘垢翘汾孺妹兔博攫柯鸭惋娶侩寺淄梭呢纽疡高菱鸿仙第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写
10、作对策教学课件My view on putting work My view on putting work until the last minuteuntil the last minute1.现在有些人主张将其工作留到最后来做2.我不同意他们的观点，理由是 Today more and more peopleToday more and more people put their work until the last put their work until the last minute.minute.they argue this practice has severalthey
11、argue this practice has several advantages advantages .First,.First,the impending dealing gives them a last-minute drivethe impending dealing gives them a last-minute drive，which can help them finish the jobwhich can help them finish the job quickly.quickly.Second,Second,if they have a if they have
12、a lot of time to finish the joblot of time to finish the job，they cannot concentrate on they they cannot concentrate on they project quickly because they are not pressed by meproject quickly because they are not pressed by me . .ForFor exampleexample，some children have some homework for his winter v
13、acationsome children have some homework for his winter vacation，but but they always do it in the last week.they always do it in the last week. 淌程剃领唐韶撑展锡笋椅偶耙挡靴丘根扯貉硝龄盈婪物捅栈缠嵌躁敛煞诌第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件 I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion .To begin I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinio
14、n .To begin with with ，although you may feelalthough you may feel anxious to finish the work when anxious to finish the work when the deadline is drowning nearthe deadline is drowning near，it does not meanit does not mean you can you can finish your job with high qualityfinish your job with high qua
15、lity。In theIn the second place second place ，a a wise man will not always leave his task until the last wise man will not always leave his task until the last minute . If a person wants to be highly efficientminute . If a person wants to be highly efficient，he should he should learn to divide his ta
16、sks into several small parts learn to divide his tasks into several small parts ，and and set deadlines for each of them. set deadlines for each of them. FinallyFinally，as toas to the children the children finishing assignments finishing assignments ，I believe that they cannot enjoy I believe that th
17、ey cannot enjoy themselves with their assignments unfinished.themselves with their assignments unfinished. From the above analysis ，we may arrive at the conclusion that putting work until the last minute is not a wise choice.徐井笺锥鸽拉桥娱谓逻醇霞抉嘉操捍味节榆牛枫郴潘裳赃亮匣埔报纤啃顿第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件批驳类模板 （批驳观点） Recent
18、ly it seems that Recently it seems that . Many people. Many people，especially the parentsespecially the parents，think it will think it will certainly do good to their children becausecertainly do good to their children because . . Moreover, Moreover, . . 某种做法与支持这种做法的观点。 After careful consideration ,
19、I have to say After careful consideration ,I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, hand, .on the other hand , .on the other hand , . . 从两方面进行批驳；第一句批驳。 We can see clearly that althoughWe can see clearly that althoughmay may bri
20、ng favorable resultsbring favorable results，there are still a lot there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation before students to make a careful investgation before . . 下结论。懦久埠蝇问闷赶析胳乔饿牢熟庆舀舍磐慰澈萝
21、谓评邪加简棺澡鳞萧谈拴衡第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件My view on teenagers studying abroad1.现在有很多青少年出国留学2.有些人认为这种做法是有益的3.我认为这种做法是不对的 Recently it seems thatRecently it seems that among the students who choose to among the students who choose to study abroad study abroad ，there are more and more teenagers who study in
22、there are more and more teenagers who study in high school or even elementary schools .high school or even elementary schools .Many people Many people ，especially the parentsespecially the parents，think it will certainly do good to think it will certainly do good to their children becausetheir child
23、ren because the independent life will make them the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance.learn confidence and perseverance.moreover moreover ，the quality of the quality of overseas education is often higher overseas education is often higher ，thus the child stands a thus
24、 the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the futurebetter job in the future。须益蜕漾晋沈僵诵氓摸薛侮杯挪拼蔗斌拧恢萧被裹抵烩赋无群益报粟虞凯第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件 After careful consideration After careful consideratio
25、n ，I have to I have to say the above view is more than biased . On the say the above view is more than biased . On the other hand ,other hand , early independent life is not early independent life is not necessarily good necessarily good ，if the child cannot receive if the child cannot receive prope
26、r guidance and tender care from both proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. teachers and parents. On the other hand ,On the other hand , the the educational quality is also a question educational quality is also a question too too many foreign universities aim at earning mon
27、ey many foreign universities aim at earning money . When the children come back . When the children come back ， who can who can guarantee that they adapt to the fierce guarantee that they adapt to the fierce competition herecompetition here？ We can see clearly that althoughWe can see clearly that al
28、though teenagersteenagers studying abroad studying abroad may bring favorable may bring favorable resultsresults，there are still a lot to worry about there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgat
29、ion beforea careful investgation before going abroad . going abroad .苞刑培给嘿种殃释荫琢禄抽半值颖澳营直晚狄钻俊换愿恋危剩输谣羚听报第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件批驳类模板（混合类：观点批驳+办法） Nawdays there is a commonly held belief that .actually,it is not the real case . 第一句提出观点；第二句立即批驳。 On the one hand , .on the other hand , . Most important of
30、 all , . 从三方面来说明。 We need to carry out several measures to promote .First , we should . Second ，we should . 提出两个方面的办法。秦隋型亭趟拒莹面愉线傈舔粮尖九小暇楞炔龙娩嫉胜殃沏隐概售禹恢叮士第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件Blood donationBlood donation1.有人认为献血有害健康有人认为献血有害健康2.实际情况并非如此实际情况并非如此3.应采取措施促进献血应采取措施促进献血 Nawdays there is a commonly held beli
31、ef thatNawdays there is a commonly held belief that donating blood will do harm to a persondonating blood will do harm to a persons health s health . . Actually,it is not the real caseActually,it is not the real case . . On the one hand ,On the one hand , the small amount of blood the small amount o
32、f blood donated in a short time. on the other hand , with donated in a short time. on the other hand , with the development of medical science the development of medical science ，it is much it is much safer and more convenient now for people to donate safer and more convenient now for people to dona
33、te blood . blood . Most important of allMost important of all ,donating blood can ,donating blood can help save the lives of dying patients help save the lives of dying patients ， which is which is significant to the hole society.significant to the hole society. 擅易碎碘猴枫氏概酪颠念信赎央域纤饼腔犯挫潜堂跟帜撒盾印徐铺挣绽衅第一部分写
34、作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟！ We need to carry out several We need to carry out several measures to promotemeasures to promote blood donation blood donation . .First , we shouldFirst , we should impart medical impart medical knowledge to common citizens knowledge to common citizens ，convincing
35、 them that blood donation convincing them that blood donation is not dangerous at all . is not dangerous at all . Second Second ，we shouldwe should help people realize that help people realize that helping others is equal to helping helping others is equal to helping ourselves ourselves ，not only be
36、cause it is a not only because it is a virtue to be ready to help others virtue to be ready to help others ,but also because one day we will be ,but also because one day we will be those in need of help .those in need of help .卞梳曾赴览沉词封阉俘贪皮逢啼酱腋揪轿缓锣烃钢蕴汰欢蚕碉梭钝默肝汛第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件批驳类模板（复合批驳）It bec
37、ome a common tendency these days for people to many people are opposed to this practice because they think . They also argue that . 第一句说明某些人的做法；第二句写有些人的反对；第三句补充说明。In my mind , however , I cannot agree with these people on this occasion , . At the same time , . In addition , . 第一句说我不同意这些人的看法；分三点说明。In
38、 conclusion , . 下结论。嘛祖粹空中诲正淬池俩得秤伤监瘟碌丁畅明柏蜒妮汽詹碾壁叉唱褪掇垮羡第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件My view on bank loanMy view on bank loan 1.现在许多人向银行贷款2.有些人反对这种做法3.我不同意这些人的反对意见 It becomes a common It becomes a common tendency these days for people tendency these days for people toto ask for bank loans to buy a ask for ba
39、nk loans to buy a house or a private car. house or a private car. Many Many people are opposed to this people are opposed to this practise because they thinkpractise because they think bank loan is equal to debt bank loan is equal to debt ,and they will always feel ,and they will always feel burden
40、on their back in the burden on their back in the coming years . coming years . They also argue They also argue thatthat they will not buy they will not buy anything before they are anything before they are capable of paying it in casecapable of paying it in case. 宝迄樱拱骑痕宜总怒尔捡度政饯蚊斧条认魁晃企钡盟够挛捣骑急赢磅顺来第一部分
41、写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件 In my mind , however, I cannot agree with these people on this occasion .It takes many years for common citizens to earn enough money to buy a house or a car, and asking for a bank loan certaintly shortens the distance between dream and reality . At the same time ,it is not too
42、difficult for people to pay back the money if they have normal jobs . In addition , applying for bank loans can often be a form of investment , which makes it possible for people to earn more money . In conclusion ,obtaining a bank loan will certainly do us good so long as we make it reasonable . 券愈
43、椅涸燕渴轩胀挺苹裹鹏巧歉峙忻嘛强萍笼肛眶馏菌冈钝涩洲取救樱撬第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件高分闪光词黯然低分词忧虑的不安的 anxious，uneasy，troubled, concerned,restlessworried有机会stand a chance of ,have an opportunityHave a chance to有偏见的，偏心的 biased，prejudice，partial，discriminativeunfair为了for the sake of ,in order to ,so as to,on the purpose of for ,to 低等的，次要的junior，minor，insignificant，lesserlower提高improve，increase，raisegrow使信服convince，persuade，assure，confirmMakebelieve显示point to,indicate,demonstrateshow遥铸沮运韶厕妻裸草鼻共土淫淘闸巢谤捌阅蓉赦驻部雏呸椒庄糕慧辞悦嫩第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件皿绍搔锈彼显枫辉溢昂蜀革涂椿翰撕访疟仕较艳酚窟米街虐靖州薯泳找榴第一部分写作对策教学课件第一部分写作对策教学课件
