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1、HowtoWriteaComposition? 作文作文: 1.: 1.记叙文记叙文 2.2.说明文说明文 3.3.议论文议论文 英语写作多数为指导性写作或称: 半命题写作，也就是说，是先给一定的材料，然后让学生依据所给的材料按要求作文。方法：组写、缩写、扩写、 改写、 或看图作文等。如何写好英语作文呢?一.写好句子 1 1、句子要正确。、句子要正确。 2 2、句子要平行。、句子要平行。 3 3、句子要连贯。、句子要连贯。 4 4、句子要有逻辑性。、句子要有逻辑性。 5 5、句子要避免过多重复。、句子要避免过多重复。 6 6、句子要避免头重脚轻。、句子要避免头重脚轻。 7 7、句子要避免汉式英
2、语。、句子要避免汉式英语。二二. .写好段落写好段落三三. .用好过渡词用好过渡词四四. .写好开头和结尾写好开头和结尾 一.写好句子 1.句子要正确：句子要正确：1).Do you know where is the Peoples Park ?2). There are many visitors enjoy the dish.Many visitors enjoy the dish. There are many visitors who enjoy the dish.Do you know where the Peoples Park is?2.2.句子要平行句子要平行 3 3. .句
3、子要句子要连贯 Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right.After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right.In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps.In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music an
4、d collecting stamps.5.句子要避免过多重复句子要避免过多重复. You will continue to walk. Youll see a hill. You will go around the hill. Youll get to a lake.After walking for a while, youll come to a hill.Walk round to the other side of the hill and youll see a lake.4.句子要有逻辑性句子要有逻辑性 Im very interested in computer and wo
5、n first prize last year.I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year.6.句子要避免头重脚轻句子要避免头重脚轻Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects.The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.7.句子要避免汉式英语句子要避免汉式英语My spare lover
6、s are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to popular music.In my spare time, Im fond of swimming,In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skatingIn my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating 某英语杂志社某英语杂志社 “家长之友家长之友”栏目要举办一栏目要举办一次征文比赛次征文比赛,要求围绕要求围绕 “You can lead a horse to water, but you
7、 cant make it drink.”这一主题发表意见这一主题发表意见. 请根据下列提示请根据下列提示写一篇文章写一篇文章.内容提示内容提示: 许多家长望子成龙许多家长望子成龙,不惜重金送孩子上私不惜重金送孩子上私立学校立学校,到国外留学到国外留学,请家教请家教,给他们买大量的给他们买大量的资料资料,电脑等电脑等,但往往这些都但往往这些都注意事项注意事项: 投稿人应提示内容投稿人应提示内容,表明自己的观点表明自己的观点: Nowadays, knowledge is becoming more and more important with the development of socie
8、ty, so many parents expect the children to be useful or successful. They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy allkinds of learning
9、 materials, computers and so on. But no matter what their parents do for the children, what becomes of the children ? Some of them really make it, but most of them want to enjoy and relax themselves and at last they are really disappointing. This proves the meaning of the saying “You can lead a hors
10、e to water, but you cant make it drink.” That is to say, you can give someone all the opportunities for success, but you cant make every person successful. 二.写好段落 二二. .写好段落写好段落 段落本身又是一篇小短文段落本身又是一篇小短文, ,包括包括主题句、支持句和结尾句。主题句、支持句和结尾句。高考题参考范文高考题参考范文: :主题句往往在段落的第一句主题句往往在段落的第一句: :Sun Shuwei, a world champi
11、on in diving, is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. 结尾句即最后一句结尾句即最后一句: :A year later in 1990,he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year. 假设你是李晓平，是假设你是李晓平，是“江苏中学江苏中学”的学生。请的学生。请你围绕你围绕“建设和谐社会建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，
12、用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。 提示提示 1.1.人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心 2.2.人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助 3.3.人与自然：能源、环境、动植物、爱惜保人与自然：能源、环境、动植物、爱惜保 护护 4.4.你的态度：（内容由考生自己决定）你的态度：（内容由考生自己决定）。注意：注意：1、词数：、词数：120左右；左右； 2、内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。、内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。 As high school students, what shouldw
13、e do? First of all, we should love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our schools activities.Dear fellow students, Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”. I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achiev
14、e this goal. Finally, lets work together to save energy and protect our naturalenvironment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass. Secondly, lets fill the world with love.We should show our respect for old people,our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those i
15、n need. Most important of all, all of us must be faithful and honest .三三. .过渡词过渡词1. and, in addition, first, second, third 2. before, after, when, later, immediately3. beyond, beside, behind, below, inside4. but, still, however, even, though5. because, so, therefore, thus, otherwise6. so that, indee
16、d, above all, for example7. finally, in other words, in brief四四.开头和结尾开头和结尾开头方法开头方法:开门见山、解释和描述主开门见山、解释和描述主 题、小故事引路、提出问题、倒叙、题、小故事引路、提出问题、倒叙、 悬念、名言、描写等等悬念、名言、描写等等.结尾方法结尾方法:总结主要观点、重复开头或总结主要观点、重复开头或 题目、提出结论、提出问题题目、提出结论、提出问题 暗示答案、引言、故事等等暗示答案、引言、故事等等. 请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文,陈述反对拟在你校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由.短文须包括以下内容:1.大部分同学都反
17、对兴建大部分同学都反对兴建.2.尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少, 但弊大于利但弊大于利.3.可能造成噪声污染和空气污染可能造成噪声污染和空气污染.4.侵占学校部分操场侵占学校部分操场.注意注意:可以补充若干理由可以补充若干理由,不要仅不要仅 仅翻译以上各点仅翻译以上各点.词数:120以上.写作的步骤写作的步骤 1.在头脑中搜索你想用的在头脑中搜索你想用的 单词单词: :be against ; construction;chemical factory; make a lot of money; pollute;prevent; take up; harm ;playgr
18、ound, have sports,take measures.2.想好开头句想好开头句. Most students of our school, including me, are against the construction of a chemical factory near our school .3.写好其它句子来支持你自己的写好其它句子来支持你自己的 观点观点: Although the factory will make a lot of money for our city, we do think it will do us more harm than good. T
19、he air will be badly polluted and we cant prevent the noise from entering our classrooms. Besides, the building of it will take up a part of our small playground. We cant have enough place to play games and have sports after class.Of course, they have promised to take measures to do it well, however
20、, it is far from enough.On the other hand ,We will never be able to breathe fresh air.4.适当加上一些评论适当加上一些评论:5.写出结尾句。写出结尾句。Where would we go if it were taken up ?6.补充，完善，加上过渡词。补充，完善，加上过渡词。 So we dont agree to build the factory here. Most students of our school, including me, are against the construction
21、 of a chemical factory near our school. Although the factory will make a lot of Although the factory will make a lot of money for our city, we do think it will do us more money for our city, we do think it will do us more harm than good. The air will be badly polluted and harm than good. The air wil
22、l be badly polluted and we cant prevent the noise from entering our we cant prevent the noise from entering our classrooms. Besides, the building of it will take up a classrooms. Besides, the building of it will take up a part of our small playground. We cant have enough part of our small playground
23、. We cant have enough place to play games and have sports after class.place to play games and have sports after class. Of course, they have promised to take measures Of course, they have promised to take measuresto do it well, however, it is far from enough. On the to do it well, however, it is far
24、from enough. On the other hand ,We will never be able to breathe fresh other hand ,We will never be able to breathe fresh air. Where would we go if it were taken up ?air. Where would we go if it were taken up ? So we dont agree to build the factory here. So we dont agree to build the factory here.假期
25、即假期即将将到到来来，你你（李（李华）打算做一次）打算做一次为期三周的旅行，希望找期三周的旅行，希望找个个外外国国朋友作朋友作为游游伴（伴（Travel-mateTravel-mate）。）。拟一一个个寻游伴的游伴的启启示，示，交代交代清清楚日程安排、楚日程安排、费用分担情用分担情况况、对对方的要求，方的要求，说明明对方和方和你你一起出游的好一起出游的好处。 Travel-mate Wanted Im a 19-year-old female sophomore named Fu Ping. I hereby earnestly invite a foreign young ladycolle
26、ge student preferredto make a three week touring trip with me. My plan is to set off next weekend, when the summer vacation officially begins. The first stop is Kunming, the world-renowned city for its beauty and mild temperature. Well get there by train and stay there for 2 days, and then well head
27、 for Jinggangshan, a former revolutionary base as well as a natural beauty spot. After a 3-day visit there , we will take a long-distance coach to a nearby port city by the Changjiang River and board a downstream ship to Shanghai, so that we can enjoy the great scenery alongside the third longest ri
28、ver in the world. As everybody knows, Shanghai is the busiest and fastest developing city in China. Id like to have a look at its prosperity, so the stay there will be about half a week. And a famous Chinese saying goes, ”Just as there is Paradise in heaven, there are Suzhou and Hangzhou on Earth ”,
29、 so a 4-day visit to these two cities near Shanghai is must. All together, our trip will last about three weeks. I only expect that my travel-mate could split the expenses with me and talk with me in beautiful English, and I would be an excellent guide for her since I major in tourist guiding. Those interested please contact me either through email () or phone call (52222221) . Thank you! Good-bye !
