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1、Section Writing原句 1I wonder if its because I havent been able to be outdoors forso long that Ive grown so crazy about everything to do with nature.我不知道这是不是因为我长期无法出门的缘故，我变得对一切与大自然有关的事物都无比狂热。点评这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成：I wonder.I havent been able to be outdoors for so long.Ive grown so crazy about everything to
2、 do with nature.合并之第一步 ： 由于句和句之间有“因为 所以”的逻辑因果关系，可以用 because 将它们合并：Ivegrown so crazy about everything to do with nature because Ihavent been able to be outdoors for so long.为了强调原因状语从句，可以采用强调句结构“It is.that.”。合并之第二步：句和句合并后的复合句作句中谓语动词 wonder 的宾语，故可以用宾语从句将它们合并，且 wonder后接宾语从句时一般用 if 引导。仿写我想知道是不是因为明天要考试，你才
3、变得如此紧张。(提示：紧张的 nervous)_我想知道是不是因为天气突变才导致大量的鱼死亡。_I wonder if it is because there will be a test tomorrow that youfeel so nervous.I wonder if it is because the weather changed suddenly that many fish died.原句 2She found it difficult to settle and calm down in the hidingplace, because she was concerned
4、about whether they would bediscovered.她发现很难在躲藏处安顿和平静下来，因为她担心他们是否会被发现。点评这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成：She found it difficult to settle and calm down in the hidingplace.She was concerned about something.Whether they would be discovered.合并之第一步：句是说明句中 something 的具体内容，故可用宾语从句将句和句合并起来。合并之第二步：句和句合并后与句构成“因为所以”的逻辑因果关系，可用连
5、词 because 引导原因状语从句，将它们合并起来。仿写我发现在这么冷的天开车有点不安全，因为路上已经结冰了。(提示：结冰 freeze)_她认为她的老板很难相处，因为他总是看起来很严肃。_I find it dangerous to drive on such a cold day, because it is frozen on the road.She thinks it hard to get along with her boss, because he alwayslooks serious.如何交友本单元出现的相关词汇：friendship (n.友谊), friend (n.
6、朋友), calm (.) down (使平静下来；使镇定下来), be concerned about (关心；挂念), go through(经历；经受), on purpose (故意), face to face (面对面地), partner(n.伙伴；合作者；合伙人), get/be tired of (对厌烦), get alongwith (与相处；进展), disagree (vi.不同意), grateful (adj.感激的；表示谢意的), dislike (n.& vt.不喜欢；厌恶), join in (参加；加入), communicate with ( 与沟通),
7、 have trouble with sb.( 与某人有矛盾), help each other (互相帮助), end the friendship (结束友谊)本单元出现的相关句式：1I wonder if it is because.that.我想知道是不是因为所以2.so she made.her best friend.所以她把当作她最好的朋友。3We have become really good friends.我们已经成为了真正的好朋友。4Although I try to talk to., I still find it hard to make goodfriends w
8、ith.尽管我尽力去和交谈，我仍发现和成为好朋友很难。5Here are some tips to help you.这里有一些帮助你的小建议。在基础写作中，有关如何交友的写作常以建议信的形式出现。这类建议信通常是写信人针对收信人在交友过程中遇到的问题提出建议或忠告，是书信的一种，属于应用文体。Dear Xiaodong，Some people like talking with others, but some people are shy. If you fall into the second group, it can be hard to makefriends.But you ca
9、n change the situation.What are you interested in ？ If you like basketball, forexample, you could talk with some of your classmates who likebasketball.The easiest way to start talking is to find somethingyou have in common.If you are standing beside a group of your classmates, joinin their discussio
10、n if you know something about the subject theyare discussing.But if you dont, you shouldnt feel afraid to say,for example, “That sounds interesting.What is it about ？ ”Once you start talking to one person, it will get easier to talkto others.Find one person you have something in common with, andonce
11、 you become friends with him, his friends will start talkingto you too.Good luck!Editor,结构分析：第一段用两句话引出话题，并陈述了自己的观点。第二、三、四段从三个方面分别提出自己的交友建议。第五段表达自己的希望。亮点点评：1使用了大量高级词汇，如：make friends, be interested in,join in, have something in common 等。2使用了大量条件状语从句，如句。3使用了不定式结构，如句。4使用了句型“It getsadj.to do sth.”，如句。在写有
12、关如何交友的建议信时，应具体点明写信的目的、建议的内容、提出建议的理由和根据，理由要合情合理，语气一定要礼貌。建议信的正文通常采取“三段式结构”：首段(Topic sentenceyour point of view)：一般指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自己的立场作一些解释。中段(Bodyyour advice)：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学委婉地提出有针对性的建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况，选择得体用语。切忌用语生硬强制，泛泛而谈。尾段(Conclusionyour wishes)：提出对对方的美好希望。必背词汇friendly (adj.友好的), precious (adj.珍贵的), v
13、aluable (adj.有价值的), get to know sb.(认识某人), know sb. really well (熟知某人), make friends with sb. (和某人交朋友), a close friend (一个亲密的朋友), trust each other (互相信任), share.with sb. (和某人分享), keep in touch with sb. (和某人保持联系)Illustration (阐述)I think., I believe., I suggest., in myopinion.Addition (递进)secondly, an
14、d then, besides, in addition.Contrast (转折)but, however, on the other hand.Summary (总结)in short, in a word, therefore, so.常用结构词常用句式1Here are my suggestions on how to.这些是我关于的建议。2Suggestions on.can be listed as follows.关于的建议列举如下。3 The ways for you to.can be suggested as follows. 对 你做的方法建议如下。4In my opin
15、ion, you should.在我看来，你应该5My advice is.我的建议是6I think/believe.我认为/相信7Im afraid that.恐怕8I advise you to.我建议你9I dont think.我不认为10Dont worry that.不要担心11I agree/I dont agree.我同意/不同意。12I think so./I dont think so.我也这样认为/我不这样认为。【小试牛刀】假设你是吴华，你的表弟小东今年刚上高一。他来信向你倾诉他在新的环境中没有什么朋友，也不知该如何结交新的朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，给他提一些建议。写作内容1对他的现状表示关心；2提出几点交友建议(至少三点)；3表示你的希望。写作要求1只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容；2信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总句数。同学们来学校和回家的路上要注意安全同学们来学校和回家的路上要注意安全
