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1、高三英语写作训练高三英语写作训练福州金桥高级中学福州金桥高级中学 张滢张滢Waving FlagoWhenIgetolderoIwillbestrongeroTheyllcallmefreedomoJustlikeawavingflagoAndthenitgoesback(x3)oOhoBorntoathroneoStrongerthanRomeoButviolentproneoPoorpeoplezoneoButitsmyhomeoAllIhaveknownoWhereIgotgrownoStreetswewouldroamoOutofthedarknessoIcamethefarthest
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6、awavingflago(andthenitgoesback(3x)oaohaohaohoWhenIgetolderoWhenIgetolderoIwillbestrongerojustlikeawavingflag(3x)oflag(x2)ojustlikeawavingflagoDoyoulikethissong?oWhydoyoulikethissong?oBecauseitmakesmecheerful令人愉快的/pleasant快乐的/rhythmic有节奏的/wonderful美妙的/musical有音乐感的Brainteasero1.whydoesKittyrunasfastas
7、abus?o2.Peterhasadogbutthisdogneverbarks.Why?oo3.Whydoesthedogsitunderthebigtree?BecauseKittyisinthebus.Becauseitisatoydog.Becauseitdoesntwanttobecomeahotdog.Writing tips:oDecidetensesandpersonalpronouns.oDrawanoutline.oThinkaboutphrases/sentencespatterns/proverbs/conjunctionsjustlearned.Para 1: Beg
8、inning说出文中的要点，核心问题。说出文中的要点，核心问题。说出文中的要点，核心问题。说出文中的要点，核心问题。Para 2: Body围绕主题，展开叙述、讨论。围绕主题，展开叙述、讨论。围绕主题，展开叙述、讨论。围绕主题，展开叙述、讨论。Para 3: Ending对全文的总结和概括对全文的总结和概括对全文的总结和概括对全文的总结和概括。提示作文提示作文o每个人都有自己的梦想，那么你的梦想是什么呢？请以每个人都有自己的梦想，那么你的梦想是什么呢？请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。为题，写一篇短文。o要求：要求：1）内容切合题意，适当发挥，表达清楚，书写规范。）内容切合题意，适当发
9、挥，表达清楚，书写规范。o 2）不少于）不少于80词，已给出的句子不计入总词数。词，已给出的句子不计入总词数。oEveryone has his dream. 主要主要内容内容 What is your dream? What is your reason? How do you make your dream come true?My Dream Everyone has his dream. So do I. Somebody want to be a nurse, somebody want to be a teacher. They all have their dreams. And
10、 I want to be a doctor. Maybe you will ask why. I can tell you . Because I want to save everybody life in the world. Maybe you will think it is impossible. But I think it will come true if I work hard. Now, my main duty is to study hard so that I can become a doctor some day. Work hard , my dream wi
11、ll come true!What do you think about this short passage?Do you have any ways to change them to make it more fluent?wantswantsthereasoneverybodysWorkinghard范文范文 My Dream(一)Everyone has his dream. MydreamistobeadancerwhenIgrowup.IwanttobeadancerbecauseIlikedancingverymuch.Ithinkdancingcanmakemehappy.I
12、tsnoteasytobecomeadancer,sofromnowonImuststudyhardandtrytolearnmoreaboutdancing.AndIalsohavetodolotsofpracticeeveryday.IthinkifIputmyheartintoit,nothingisimpossible.AndIamsureIcanbeafamousdanceroneday.(二)Everyone has his dream.MydreamistobeanastronautwhenIgrowup.IwanttobeanastronautbecauseIaminteres
13、tedinscience.IfIbecomeanastronaut,Icantravelaroundthespaceanddiscoverthesecretsinspace.Sofromnowon,Imuststudyhardandtrytolearnmoreaboutscience.AndIneedtoexercisemoretomakemefitforhisjob.IthinkifIputmyheartintoit,nothingisimpossible.Mydreammustcometrue.Conjunctionso表示罗列增加表示罗列增加 first, second, third,
14、first, then/next, after that/ next, finallyo表示并列关系表示并列关系 or, and, also, too, not only. but also, both. and, either .or, neither.noro表示让步关系表示让步关系 though, although, even though, however o表示因果关系表示因果关系 because, because of, since, as, thanks to., so that, such thato表示举例表示举例 for example, for instance, suc
15、h as. 请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文,陈述反对拟在你校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由.短文须包括以下内容:1.大部分同学都大部分同学都反对反对兴建兴建.2.尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少, 但弊大于利但弊大于利.3.可能造成噪声污染和空气污染可能造成噪声污染和空气污染.4.侵占学校部分操场侵占学校部分操场.注意注意:可以补充若干理由可以补充若干理由,不要仅不要仅 仅翻译以上各点仅翻译以上各点.词数:100-120.写作的步骤写作的步骤 1.根据文章提示在头脑中搜索你想用的根据文章提示在头脑中搜索你想用的 单词单词: : 1.大部分同学大部分同学都都反对反对兴建兴建. 2.尽
16、管该厂可能为本市尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少赚钱不少, 但但弊大于利弊大于利. 3.可能造成噪声可能造成噪声污染污染和空气和空气污染污染.4.侵占侵占学校部分学校部分操场操场.be against 反对Most students of our school我们学校大部分同学大部分同学make a lot of money赚赚钱不少钱不少oo弊大于利弊大于利do more harm than good.Pollute vt.污染take up 侵占Playground n.操场还有一些关键性短语补充：o采取措施oo阻止不受oo对造成伤害oo做运动take measurestake measures
17、prevent fromprevent fromdo harm todo harm tohavesports2.想好开头句想好开头句.提出观点。提出观点。 including me, the construction ofa chemical factory near our school . Most students of our school,are against3.写好其它句子来支持你自己的写好其它句子来支持你自己的 观点观点: Although the factory will for our city , , we do think it willus more than goo
18、d. . The air will be badly and we cant the noise entering our classrooms. make a lot of moneymake a lot of moneydoharmpollutedpreventfrom , the building of it will a part of our small playground. We cant have enough place to play games and after class.takeupBesideshavesportsOf course, they have prom
19、ised to to do it well, however, it is far from enough. ,We will never be able to breathe fresh air.4.适当加上一些评论适当加上一些评论:takemeasuresOntheotherhandOntheotherhand5.写出结尾句。写出结尾句。Where would we go if it were taken up ?6.补充，完善，加上过渡词。补充，完善，加上过渡词。 So we dont agree to build the factory here.HomeworkoRecitethewordsandthephrasesoReviewthetipsofwritingoFinishthewriting
