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1、continuation writingcontinuation writingHow to build the structureHow to build the structure01To review the definition of continuation writing02To enable the students to understand what the given passage is about.03To help students to grasp the first step-how to build the structure for continuation
2、writing04To arouse students awareness on the relationship between human and animalsLearning objectivesLearning objectives南极简介ReviewReviewWhat is continuation writing?高考英语读后续写：350+_词，通过续写将其发展成一篇与_材料有_衔接、情节和结构_的短文。150给定定逻辑完整完整连贯合理合理准确准确阅卷增分点：1上下文的_性；2内容的_性；3词汇的_性和_性。丰富丰富A.skyB.polar regionC.forestD.de
3、sert1Step1:Lead-inGiveGive it it a proper a proper home!home!试题再现试题再现阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchil
4、l in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.Th
5、is was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed
6、at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with h
7、is massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punis
8、hment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意：1.1.所所续续写写短短文文的的词词数数应应为为150150左左右右；2.2.
9、至至少少使使用用5 5个个短短文文中中标标有有下下划划线线的的关关键键词词语语；3.3.续续写写部部分分分分为为两两段段，每每段段的的开开头头语已为你写好；语已为你写好；4.4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp._Paragraph 2：At the very moment,the helicopter arrived._ 南极风景HowHow to build the structureto build t
10、he structureStep 1Step 2Step 3Read for elements（要素）要素）Read for plots（情（情节）Make predictions（预测）Step 1.Read for elements(要素要素)One fallto photograph polar bearsto photograph polar bearsa polar bear camea research camp outside a research camp outside the town of Churchill in the town of Churchill in Man
11、itoba,CanadaManitoba,CanadaElli and I,a polar bearWhoWhenWhat WhyWhereStep 2.Read for plot(情节情节)1.Opening2.Build-up3.Climax4.Resolution5.EndingRead again and try to finish the story mountain Para.1 One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research
12、camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.This is the of the story OPENINGThe couple went to a town in Canada to _ of polar bears.take photosPara.2 Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be
13、 photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.Para.3 As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed
14、,and smelled our garlic bread.Para.4 The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.This is the of the story BUILD-UPA _ came unexpectedly while the couple was _.young m
15、ale polar bearcooking dinnerPara.5 Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fen
16、ce with his massive paws(爪子).Para.6 I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.Para.7 Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed
