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1、Module3journeytospace模块主题写作模块主题写作一、话题分析本模块主题是“太空旅行”。我们应学会描述人类已做过的太空任务,简单描述有关宇宙、天体的情况。二、写作方法“三步法”写“太空旅行”类作文第一步:开门见山,点出去太空旅行的人物、时间;第二步:详细介绍在太空的活动;第三步:总结全文,谈旅行的感受和希望。三、素材积累(一)“太空旅行”类作文常用词汇:organise a journey to Mars far away by spaceship visit discover have a good time study hard grow up(二)“太空旅行”类作文常用句
2、型:开头句开头句1.Our school organised a journey to Mars.2.Mars is far from the earth.3.Mars is one of the planets of the sun.中间句中间句The journey took a long time.The environment on Mars was great.结尾句结尾句1.We enjoyed ourselves on Mars.2.I will never forget the journey to Mars.3.I hope to travel again.名言警句名言警句1
3、.Surprise is the seed of science.惊奇就是科学的种子。2.Science is endless,and it is an eternal mystery.科学是永无止境的,它是一个永恒之谜。句子升格(条件状语从句)句子升格(条件状语从句)I work hard and my dream will come true.My dream will come true if I work hard.四、写作任务假设现在是2050年,你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观,举行聚会,与外星人(alien)通电话总之,你们玩得很愉快。请根据这些内容,用第一人
4、称写一篇题目是“Journey to Mars”的英语短文描述一下你们的火星之旅。80词左右。【写作模板】【高分作文】JourneytoMarsJourneytoMarsOur school organised a journey to Mars a few daysago.It is far away from the earth.We went to Mars byspaceship.The journeytook severaldays.We lookedaroundonMarsanddiscoveredalotofthings.Theenvironmenttherewasverybea
5、utiful.Wealsohadaparty.Manystudentstookan active part in the party,and their songs were verynice.Finally,we made a telephone call to aliens.TheywelcomedustoMars.Weallhadagoodtime.Our school organised a journey to Mars a few daysago.It is far away from the earth.We went to Mars byspaceship.The journe
6、ytook severaldays.We lookedaroundonMarsanddiscoveredalotofthings.Theenvironmenttherewasverybeautiful.Wealsohadaparty.Manystudentstookan active part in the party,and their songs were verynice.Finally,we made a telephone call to aliens.TheywelcomedustoMars.Weallhadagoodtime.ThejourneywasveryinterestingandIllneverforgetit.IhopetotraveltoMarsagain.名师点评:本文采用了“三步法”写“火星旅行”:第一步:开门见山,点出去火星旅行的时间(第一段第1句)。第二步:详细介绍在火星上的有关活动(第一段第510句)。第三步:谈作者的感想与希望(第二段)。添彩点:运用动词的过去式描述过去的活动,多个动词的运用使旅程内容显得更加丰富、形象。篇尾谈了自己的感受和希望,使篇章结构更完整。ThejourneywasveryinterestingandIllneverforgetit.IhopetotraveltoMarsagain.