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1、1、长短句交叉;2、使用插入语;3、用词是否多样、准确、形象尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项 1.适当用被动替换主动这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾的例子It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the s
2、ervice industry like that. By doing soits competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语比如说把副词、连接词等作为插入语放在中间一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间一般放在动词、助动词后两边分别加上逗号。举例如下 Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3.一定要学会换词换形象具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般
3、不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people,opinion 等等)比如第一条的例子中applicable替换proper; approaches替换ways; implement替换carry out; sharpen ones competitive edge替换enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。 下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法精彩替换和句型都用上了作文有了很大的提高。 I never forget the exceedingly thr
4、illing day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world be
5、longed to me. exceedingly 替换 very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩) thrilling 替换 exciting; sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth;google 替换 search; an army of 替换 a lot of。 The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advan
6、cement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more
7、and more popular; Coincident with 非常地道的句型表达“与一致”的意思替换 With ; Advancement 替换 development; Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into; Current ( currently )替换 now; Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.;Growing individuals 替换 more and more people; It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型 说某事是毫不夸张
8、的。(it goes wthout exaggeration that更好) For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering
9、 email. For a start 替换 To begin with; We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法; our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动; Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides; Deliver 替换 send。 There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of
10、 human beings, in a way,especially the growing violence ,porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处首先There is no denying that这个句型;其次however
11、作为插入语;再次function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to。 Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ); Net citizen 网民属于精彩用词。(直接用 netizen更好) As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impa
12、cts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides;Computers do play 使用do 表示强调; Positive 替换 important / good 等; A slice of 替换 a part of; Unfavorable 替换 bad; Impacts 替换 effects / influences; We should, therefore, ta
13、ke advantage of 使用插入语; Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象 merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) ; Facet 替换 aspect。 以下是45个最经典的替换词各位同学可以参考一下: 31. next to / virtually impossible替换nearly / almost impossible. 32.regarding/concerning 替换about. 33.crucial/paramount 替换important.35. assiduous替换hard-w
14、orking 36. arduous替换difficult 37.underdeveloped/financially-challenged 替换poor(因为poor通常含有贬义) 38. demonstrate /manifest 替换show 39. invariably 替换always 40. perilous/hazardous替换dangerous(写社会类作文时常用说什么社会现象是不好的有害的) 41. formidable 替换difficult 42. quintessential 替换typical(举例时常用例如a quintessential example shou
15、ld be cited that=for example; for instance) 43. distinguished 替换famous 44. feasible替换possible 45. consequently, accordingly替换so 作文同义替换词以及最新的2013年考研信息希望对各位考生有所帮助。 动词(词组) 1. absorb-assimilate 吸收 agree partly-agree with reserve 有保留地赞同 arouse-ignite/stimulate/spur/motivate 引起;鼓励 devote to-dedicate to 把奉献于;专注于 emphasize-accentuate 强调 expect-anticipate 期望;预期 get into chaos-with chaos ensuing 陷入混乱 hand in-render 提出 limit-stress/hinder/hamper 限制;阻
