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1、（英语）九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编提高训练一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达“文明是一面镜子，折射出一座城市的品质”。西安作为一座古老的城市在创建国际化大都市的过程中，离不开精神文明建设。在你身边有哪些不文明现象？作为中学生，我们应该从哪些方面做起，为文明城市的建设出一份力？请根据提示词，以“Lets help Xian be better”为题，号召全体中学生共创美好西安。提示词：spit 吐痰； respect; traffic rules; volunteer; collect the trash; plant trees; clean the streets
2、; an environmental project.要求：1. 不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；3. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。Lets help Xian be betterOur city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we find_【答案】Lets help Xian be betterOur city is making its effort to become an international city. B
3、ut in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students dont follow the traffic rules. Also, some students dont respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to
4、make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Lets work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们阐述身边的不文明现象，并阐述我们应该如何做，为文明城市的建设出一份力。题目中只给出了话题和一些提示词，具
5、体的写作内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力，进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。需要注意题目中给出的提示词在文章中必须要用上，可以根据表达需要调整顺序。写作时，学生们可以根据提示词，或联想自己的实际生活，列举身边的不文明现象，然后对创建文化城市提出自己的看法。审题可知，短文应以一般现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，并注意使用适当的句型去表达，变化单词的正确形式。为提升文章档次，在文章中应穿插几个并列句或复合句的结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题
6、目提示，介绍了自己身边的不文明现象，并对中学生如何创建文明城市贡献自己的力量提出了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息，且叙述完整，内容充实。文章内容分成两个部分：第一部分列举了一些不文明现象；第二部分介绍了为创建文明城市，中学生应该怎么做。层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，叙述清楚、简洁。短文中的一些好的句型和短语有Also, some students dont respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a c
7、ivilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。2（重庆中考模拟）书面表达。职业生涯规划（career planning）一词源于1908年的美国，指的是对职业生涯乃至人生进行持续的系统的计划的过程。作为即将毕业的初中学生，我们也是时候
8、该思考我们的职业生涯规划了。请以此为主题写一篇短文。写作要求:1.词数：80120词；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考要点：1. 职业选择及原因；2. 现阶段的准备（学习、兴趣发展等）；3. My Career Planning_【答案】My Career PlanningEverybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.When I
9、 was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. Whats more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting bu
10、t challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】这是一篇话题作文，以My Career Planning为话题，介绍我的职业规划。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的
11、应用，比如：Everybody has，my ideal career is，When I was，So I must等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的理想职业是当一名教师，接下来介绍我选择当老师的原因以及我现阶段的准备，最后表示只要我有机会，我将会选择做一名老师。此处a variety of, whats more, bothand，get on well with, choose to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3（湖北初三） 童年是人生最美好的时光。小时候你一定接收了
12、许多心爱的礼物，你最喜欢的礼物是什么？你拥有它多长时间了？它是谁送给你的？它有什么特别的意思？它给你带来了怎样的回忆？请你以“My favorite gift”为题写一篇80至100词的英语短文。要求：行文连贯、条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写規范；依据提示可适度发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名。My favorite giftMy favorite gift from childhood is _【答案】My favorite giftMy favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years. My m
13、other gave it to me on my fifth birthday. I like it very much because it is so cute. Its special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends.The toy bear has left me so many memories. I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I dont want to give it up, but to be honest, I have to. Because Im getting older!【解析】【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你的心爱礼物。主要从：你最喜欢的礼物是什么？你拥有它多长时间了？它是谁送给你的？它有什么特别的意思？它给你带来了怎样的回忆？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作
