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1、 2015年南宁市二模写作各档次例文 2015/3/29 第一档：3分Dear Sir / Madam,Im Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term.English in the life very help. It can help go to word, I like English, study English Film Appreciation be interesting, I think speak English is great thing,
2、so I like English Film, hope welcome join in term, Thank you. Sincerely yours Li Hua给分理由：1） 未完成试题规定的任务。2）明显遗漏主要内容。3）词汇项目有限。4）信息未能传达给读者。第二档次：8分Dear Sir / Madam,Im Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term.As we know, English is more important day by day,
3、but it also is very different. Now there are a course which not only can learn English but also watch film, and if you attend the course English Film Appreciation, it will be important your English. I like the course very much. Sincerely yours Li Hua给分理由：1） 未恰当完成试题规定任务，遗漏或未描述清楚一些主要内容。2） 语法项目有限，表达内容有
4、限。第三档：13分Dear Sir / Madam,Im Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term.I very like this class. I like see the English films, I attend the course feel very happy. First, the English Film Appreciation class can help me learn about many English words and le
5、t me interesting in English more. Second，It can approve me English speaking skills and approve me English writing skills. Third, It can help me relex study Ya Li.I have some advise to the class. Firstly, I hope it can hold more times at one week. Secondly, I hope it can play more different kinds fil
6、ms to our studtents. Sincerely yours Li Hua给分理由：1） 基本完成了试题规定任务。2）漏掉一些内容，但三大要点都有提到，分段明显。3）有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。4）虽然卷面不够工整，但不影响正常交际。5）能运用衔接句和过渡词。第四档：18分Dear Sir / Madam,Im Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term.My favoure classes is English Film Appre
7、ciation. I love it because it is very interesting and colorful. If you choose this class, On the one hand, we will find it is fun of us; on the other hand, we can improve our spoken English in the same time. And It can make us English marks get better. I have some advice, first, we can watch differe
8、nt film in the class. The film could from everyone. Besides, we should say our think after the lost flim. It is important that can make more friends Let our class get more friendly.I hope the English teachers can accept my advice.Let our English marks get better!Let our friends get better and better
9、. Sincerely yours Li Hua给分理由：1） 内容要点齐全，补充得当。运用了适当的过渡词，达到了预期的写作目的。2） 语法结构和词汇方面有些许错误。3）作文书写不太规范。第五档：23分Dear Sir / Madam,Im Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term.I cant help sharing my deep love for it. And if you ask me whats my favourite course, my an
10、swers will always be it.In the class, we watch wonderful movies once a week. We can share our feelings to others and write them down later. Sometimes we may discuss favourite directors and film stars, which broaden our horizons.To make the course better, I will share two suggestions. First, there co
11、uld be more Chinese movies. We can learn more by comparing films of different cultures. Second, we can discuss the music in films, which also helps us understand the theme better.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. Please write me soon. Sincerely yours Li Hua给分理由：1）
12、完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有的内容要点，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，卷面好。2）语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。满分作文： （一）Dear Sir / Madam,Im Li Hua, one of the students who attended the course English Film Appreciation last term.Im writing to express my feelings about it and give some advice. The course English Film Appr
13、eciation is one of my favourite courses, from which I have learned a lot about English film. Above all, taught with the English language, students can improve their English effectically. Besides, in class, every character will be introduced carefully. As a result, students can have a better knowledg
14、e of the film. Its really a good course! However, there are still a few problems which need to be solved. First of all, it will be more than good if some films about love can be added into the course, instead of just adventure film. Meanwhile. It is of great importance that a few minutes should be left for students to discuss with each others.I will appreciate it if yo
