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1、BEC中级作文模板、例题超全解析题型:1商务书信类;2商务条子私函类;3商务信件类;4.商务报告类商务书信类这一题型要求考生依据所供给的短文,如书信、传真、私函、留言条(电话留言条)等,草拟一封书信,字数要求达到120140词左右。题目构造:Input:1situationdescription2task3targetreaderReading:textsinnote,letter,fax,memo+contentpoints(handwrittennotes;secondletter)Write:businessletter(120-140words)【例题】Youhaveorganised
2、aproductionconferenceforyourcompanywhichwillbeheldon10October2005.ThefollowingistheletterofconfirmationyoureceivedfromtheConferenceCentre.Readtheletterandfaxbelow,whichgivesdetailsoftheconference.Then,usingallinformationfromthefax,writeyourlettertoJohnSmithattheNuffieldConferenceCentre,explainingthe
3、changestothearrangements.Donotincludepostaladdresses.Write120-140wordsonseparatesheet.DearConferenceOrganiser,Iamwritingtoconfirmthearrangementsfortheconference.DATEANDTIME:10thOctober-10a.m.to5p.m.NUMBEROFGUESTS:50ROOMSRESERVED10a.m.to12:30p.m.CONFERENCEHALL32p.m.to5p.m.SEMINARROOMS1,2,and3CATERING
4、:Coffee-11a.m.to11:30a.m.Lunch-12:30p.m.to2p.m.ConferenceCentreRestaurantTea-4p.m.WelookforwardtowelcomingyourcompanytotheNuffieldConferenceCentre.Yoursfaithfully,JohnSmithTodayyourProductionManagerhassentyouthefaxbelowwithchangeshewouldliketomaketotheconferencearrangementsFAXImafraidwehavetomakesom
5、elast-minutechangestothearrangementsforourproductionconference.1. Tenmoreguestshaveaccepted.2. ThePresidentwantsonlyonehourforlunch,andjustasimplebuffet-notseatedintherestaurant.TheConferenceSpeaker(TomMoors)cantcomeuntil2pm.Sohewillgivehispresentationintheafternoon.Canwemovetheseminarstothemorning?
6、Sorryaboutthis!Sam2.商务私函与条子审题:MrSmith,yourboss,toldyoutoaskMsLiutoattendasalespresentationonanewproduct.WriteanotetoMsLiu:*sayingwhowantshertoattendthesalespresentation;*informingherwhenandwherethesalespresentationwillbeheld(一)商务私函一般公司公司常常都印有依据自己公司风格的商业私函,请看以下例子:MemoTo:(收信人)From:(发信人)Date:(日期)Subjec
7、t:(事由)Message:(正文)商务私函一般由以下几个部分构成:1 、Memo:Memo是Memorandum缩写,所以也能够用Memorandum备忘录2 、To:这一标题后边应写收信人的姓名与职衔,姓名前能够用尊称或不用,如:To:Mr.JohnSmith,SalesManager3 、From:这一标题后应写发信人的姓名与职衔:职衔可依据需要决定写或不写,但姓名前不要用尊称。4 、Date:日期的写法同书信里日期写法的要求完好同样,不要用数字来表示月份。5 、Subject:这一标题后是写事由的,即用一个或几个词汇简单归纳私函的内容,以便查阅。事由一定简短了然,不要用完好的句子,如:
8、ChangesinTravelAdvanceFormPromotionofStaffVacationScheduleParticipationinTrainingProgrammes(二)商务条子商务条子一般有四个构成部分:日期、称号、正文、署名。一些公司有印好的条子笺。如:MessageTo:Date:MessageTelephoneMessageFor:From:Tel.:Message:Actionrequired:PleasecallbackCallerwillcallbacklaterNoactionrequiredMessagetakenby:DateTime例:让秘书通知推延约会
9、9a.m.MissWang,Ivegotanurgentmeetingtoday.Pleasecontacttheapplicantstopostponetheinterviewstillfurthernotice.DS分类:1见告信息inform2部署安排arrange3征采建议request4咨询信息enquire5求援申请apply6介绍建议suggest1 见告信息类例题:YouareamanageratanauditorscalledGolding&Co.YourcompanyhasjustmergedwithacompetitortobecomeMasonGolding.Youha
10、vebeenaskedtoinformstaffofthechangeofname.Writeamemoof40-50words:* informingstaffofthenewname* tellingthemwhentostartusingthenewname* askingstafftouseonlythenewnameafterthattime.收买与吞并mergerandaquisition范文:AsaresultofourmergerwithMason&Co.,thenameofourcompanywillbechangedMasonGolding.Pleasestarttouse
11、thenewnameon1March2006.Youareremindedthatonlythenewnamecanbeusedfromthenon.例题Youarethetrainingmanagerofacompanywhichhaswonalargeexportorder.Youhavebeenaskedtoorganiseforeignlanguagetrainingforsomeofyourstaff.Writeamemotostaff:explainingwhythecoursesarenecessarysayingwhichmembersofstaffshouldattendan
12、nouncingwhenthecourseswillstartWrite40-50wordsonaseparatesheet.范文To:AllstaffFrom:theTrainingManagerDate:1March2005Subject:AForeignLanguageTrainingCourseIwasaskedtoorganiseaforeignlanguagetrainingrecently.Itwillstarton15Marchandwilllastthiscourse.2 部署安排类coursebecauseofthelargeexportorderwereceived2we
13、eks.ThosewhowilldealwithordersshouldattendYouareHeadofResearchforaninternationalcarmanufacturer.YouhavetomakeanurgenttriptomorrowtovisitPierreBlanco,acolleaguewhoworksforasubsidiary.Writeamemoof40-50wordstoyoursecretary:tellingherwhoyouaregoingtoseeandwhenaskinghertobookflightticketsandaccommodation
14、tellingherwhatworkyouwouldlikehertodoinyourabsence.WriteonyourAnswerSheet.subsidiary,parentcompany,holdingcompany,affiliate,branch,headquarters,representativeoffice范文:IneedtohaveanurgentmeetingwithPierreBlancoofourParisofficetomorrow.PleasebookareturntickettoParisandahotelroomformeassoonaspossible.Duringmyabsence,pleasekeepmeinformedoftheprogressoftheproject.Ifthereisanythingurgent,givemeaphonecall.例文Youarethemanagerofasmallexportcompany