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1、（2004作文答案）Today my classmates and I went to the Old Peoples Home on foot at 3 oclock in the afternoon. As soon as we got there, we began to clean the rooms and wash clothes for the old people. Some of us talked with them. After that we gave them some performances. The old people enjoyed themselves v
2、ery much. We stayed there for two hours. At about 5 oclock we walked home. I felt very happy ( for what I had done) although I was tired. I think everyone should look after and respect old people. (2005作文答案）Dear Wang Fei,Im glad you are interested in the English Corner. Id like to tell you something
3、 about it. Last month we had the English Corner on Friday afternoons in the library of our school. Not only a few students but also two teachers took part in it. Some of us read English books and newspapers. Some of us practiced spoken English. The teachers also taught us English songs. Since I took
4、 part in the English Corner, my spoken English has improved. Now Im able to speak English in front of the class. And I find it not so difficult to learn English as before.Li Lei（2005）书面表达评分标准一、内容要点1时间地点 2参加人员 3活动内容 4感受二、评分细则先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。第五档（1513分） 完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词
5、汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。第四档（1210分） 符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档（97分） 符合题目要求，表达思想不够清楚，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇错误很多，语言欠通顺。第二档（64分）部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，所写内容难以理解第一档（30分） 与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。（2006参考答案）One possible versionJune 8,2006
6、,Thursday FineThis afternoon our school held an English singing competition on the playground.Each class sang two songs.About twenty students in every class took part in the competition.Our performance was successful.We sang the song We are the world. It was the mostpopular song in the competition.
7、So our class won the first prize. All of us felt proud of it. I find it is interesting to learn English songs.I hope I can take part in more activities like this to improve my spoken English.（2007参考答案）（2008参考答案）Dear Jim,I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and took an
8、 active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and dont listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you cant hand in your homework on time.Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but
9、 if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may do harm to your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and neck.I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored? As your frien
10、d, Ill be glad to share your happiness and sadness.Best wishesLi Hua（2009作文参考答案）Dear David, Last week we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for
11、the school library or something else for the school. Other students think that its not necessary to spend money. We can study hard and make our school feel proud of us. In my opinion, we dont have to spend money. We can do something meaningful without money. For example, we can do some voluntary wor
12、k to beautify the schools environment or try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will be proud of us. (In my opinion, we can collect our pocket money to buy some books for our school library. We can buy some detective stories and English novels. They dont cost much but they
13、are useful. The younger students will like them. I hope every student in our school can do so. ) Id like to know your idea. Could you give me some advice? Best wishes! Li Ming 书面表达评分标准 一、内容要点 1. 陈述同学们的想法: 一些同学建议大家筹钱，为校图书馆买些书或其他东西；另外一些 同学建议无需花钱；努力学习，让学校以我们为荣。 2. 陈述自己的想法及理由。 二.评分细则先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然
14、后在该档次内评出分数。第五档(1513分) 完全符合题目要求，表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯，字数达标，基本或完全 没有语言错误。第四档(1210分) 符合题目要求，表达基本清楚，信息较完整，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语 言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档(97分) 基本符合题目要求，表达不够清楚，信息不够完整，语言欠通顺，有部分语言错误，影响 整体理解。第二档(64分) 部分内容符合题目要求，内容不完整，表达不清楚，信息不完整，有较多语言错误，所写 内容难以理解。第一档(3一0分)与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语。 （2010）书面表达参考答案L
15、adies and gentlemen! Its my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small.But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts. More different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round. I think its lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the
