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1、专题十六 短文改错Correction 1(2015课标)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.
2、Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The ai
3、rs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.答案第二句:thinkthought第三句:countryside前加the第四句:orand第五句:onwith第六句:去掉been第六句:seriouslyserious第七句:airsair第八句:MuchMany第九句:foundf
4、ind第九句:yourour/theCorrection 1(2015课标)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was v
5、ery crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five
6、 minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.答案第一句:parentparents第三句:onin第四句:去掉very第五句:lookslooking第五句:wherethat或去掉where第六句:begunbegan第七句:tellingtold第七句:第二个athe第八句:在saw后加his第九句:terribleterrib
7、lyCorrection 1(2015浙江)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如:It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you.Luckily I was completely free then,so Ill to say
8、“yes”.Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m.in Friday evening.My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class,I could easy see the football field.In th
9、e mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was al
10、ways interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.答案第一句:sidesides第一句:fromof第二句:sitsitting第三句:easyeasily第五句:iswas第六句:themit第七句:删掉could后的n
11、ot第九句:在第一个in后加a第十句:feltfeel第十一句:IfAlthough/ThoughCorrection 1(2015陕西)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。My soccer coach retired in last week.I wa
12、nted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped s
13、ome on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party,my coach,with a biscuit in his mouth,asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy l
14、aughter!答案第一段第一句:去掉in第一段第二句:anythingsomething第一段第三句:betterbest第一段第三句:decidedecided第一段第四句:stepsteps第一段第六句:wellgood第一段第七句:afterwhen/while第二段:第一个athe第二段:just后面加上to第三段:enjoyenjoyingCorrection 1(2015四川)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改
15、后的词。注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hi,Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and a
16、fter school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I dont like to go anymore,so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.H
