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1、Ways to Diversify Sentences一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外，词汇的运用和句子的处理，也起着决定性作用可根据情况，使句子多样化，使文章灵活多姿。Example:下列五个句子的基本概念一样，但是句式不同，内容重点也有些差别：(1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(并列分句)(2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(现在分语短语+简单句)(3)In
2、thefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副词短语+并列分句)(4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.(简单句+形容语短语)(5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副词从句+主句)(1)和(5)的句式最常见；如果加上其他三种互相交替，句子不是更多样化吗？Exercise:H
3、ow to diversify the following sentences by combing them together?(1)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.(2)Hefeltveryuneasy. -(a) Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.（简单句）(b) Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.（简单句）(c)Theyoungpilotsfirstoverseastrainin
4、gmadehimfeelveryuneasy.（简单句）(c) Extremeuneasinessseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.（简单句）(d) Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.（简单句）(e) Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltvery uneasy.（简单句）(g)Beingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryunea
5、sy.（简单句）(h)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryuneasy.（并列句）(i)Theyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryuneasy.（复杂句）(j)Whentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryuneasy.（复杂句）(k)Astheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.（复杂句）(l)Theyoun
6、gpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltveryuneasy.（复杂句）增强英语语句表现力的有效方法一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.Revision:Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(转换为前置定语)Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.(转换为并列结构作后置定语
7、)2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：1)Weak:Theteammembersaregoodplayers.Revision:Theteammembersplaywell.2)Weak:Oneworkersplanistheeliminationoftardiness.Revision:Oneworkersplaneliminatestardiness.3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：1)Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.Revision:Noopportunityfor
8、promotionexists.2)Weak:Herearethebooksyouordered.Revision:Thebooksyouorderedhavearrived.二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：1、Poor:Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk. Better:Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.Better:Shecomparespricesandquality.ChapterOne文章开头句型1-1对立法:先引出其他人的不同看法,然
9、后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.例如(e.g)1.Whenaskedabout.,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityofpeoplesaythat.ButIthink/view a bitdifferently.2.Whenitcomesto.,somepeoplebelievethat.Othersargue/claimthattheopposite/reverseistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguments/statements,but(Itendtotheformer/latter.)3.No
10、w,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledgedthat.Theyclaim/believe/arguethat.ButIwonder/doubtwhether.1-2现象法:引出要剖析的现象或者问题,然后评论.e.g1.Recentlytheriseinproblemof/(phenomenoonof).hascause/arousedpublic/popular/wide/worldwideconcern.2.Recentlytheissueoftheproblemof/thephenomenonof.hasbeenbrou
11、ghtintofocus.(hasbeenbroughttopublicattention)3.Inflation/Corruption/Socialinequality.isyetanotherofthenewandbittertruthwe havetolearntofacenow/constantly.1-3观点法:开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.e.g:1.Neverhistoryhasthechangeof.beenasevidentas.Nowhereintheworld/Chinahastheissue/ideaof.beenmorevisible/popula
12、rthan.2.Nowpeopleingrowing/significantnumbersarebeginning/comingtorealize/accept/(beaware)that. 3.Nowthereisagrowingawareness/recognitionofthenecessityto.Nowpeoplebecomeincreasinglyaware/consciousoftheimportanceof. 4.Perhapsitistimetohaveafreshlookattheattitude/ideathat.1-4引用法:先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法,来引出文章
13、要展开论述的观点!e.g:1.Knowledgeispower.suchistheremarkmadebyBacon.Thisremarkhasbeensharedbymoreandmorepeople.Educationisnotcompletewithgraduation.SuchistheopinionofagreatAmericanphilosopher.Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharehisopinion.2.Howoftenwehearsuchstatements/wordslikethose/this. Inourowndaysweareusedtohearingsuchtraditionalcomplainsasthis.1-5比较法:通过对过去,现在
