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1、写作规范练(二)(限时：35分钟)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。2019湖南长郡中学适应性考试It is one of most exciting experienc
2、es in my life. My relationship with the motorcycles begin when I was a child. The feelings are difficultly to explain. There is an important difference among cars and motorcycles. Cars forgive mistakes, but motorcycles dont. There are two important period in my life relating to the motorcycles: the
3、beginning and today. My father bought we a little motorcycle. My sisters and brother already knew how to ride motorcycles. I was at five years old, and I remember perfectly the first day which my father taught me to ride it. I was not afraid but I drove all afternoon on the tennis court.答案与解析：It is
4、one of most exciting experiences in my life. My relationship with the motorcycles when I was a child. The feelings are to explain. There is an important difference cars and motorcycles. Cars forgive mistakes, but motorcycles dont. There are two important in my life to the motorcycles: the beginning
5、and today. My father bought a little motorcycle. My sisters and brother already knew how to ride motorcycles. I was at five years old, and I remember perfectly the first day my father taught me to ride it. I was not afraid I drove all afternoon on the tennis court.在one of后加the“one of the形容词的最高级名词复数”
6、为固定搭配，意为“最的之一”，故在one of后加the。begin改为began根据后面的when I was a child可知，此处叙述发生在过去的事情，应用一般过去时，故将begin改为began。difficultly改为difficult此处应用形容词作表语，表示主语的状态或特征，故将difficultly改为difficult。among改为betweenamong表示三者及以上的“在中间”；between表示在两者之间，一般与and搭配使用。此处介绍的是汽车和摩托车的区别，故将among改为between。period改为periodsperiod为可数名词，此处前有two修饰
7、，应用复数形式，故将period改为periods。relating改为related句中已有谓语are，且与此处无连词连接，故应用非谓语形式。又因relate与其逻辑主语之间为被动关系，应用过去分词表示被动，故将relating改为related。we改为us此处作动词bought的宾语，应用宾格形式，故将we改为us。删除at本句为主系表结构，直接用表示年龄的短语“数词year(s) old”作表语，不需要介词，故删除at。在which前加on或which改为when此处是定语从句，从句中缺少状语，而先行词day表示时间。which在从句中代指先行词day，作介词on的宾语，与介词on构成
8、从句的状语，或者用副词when，故在which前加on或将which改为when。but改为and本句中的“我不害怕”和“我在网球场骑了一下午摩托车”之间为并列关系，并非转折关系，故将but改为and。第二节书面表达(满分25分)2019桂林、贺州市调研假定你是高三学生李华，你在校园网上看到一则招募暑假英语夏令营志愿者的广告，请你写一封信申请参加。内容包括：1自身的英语情况；2相关经验。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：英语夏令营English Summer CampDear Sir/Madam，My name is Li
9、 Hua and Im a student in a high school. _Yours truly，Li Hua参考范文：Dear Sir/Madam，My name is Li Hua and Im a student in a high school. Id like to apply to be a volunteer of the English Summer Camp.First of all, Im very fond of English, and I often take an active part in all kinds of activities related
10、to English. Having a good knowledge of English grammar and going to the English corner every Sunday afternoon do a lot of good to my spoken English. Second, Ive taken part in plenty of voluntary work since Senior 1, through which I have gained much valuable experience. I find it meaningful to help p
11、eople and consider it a pleasure. Last but not least, Ive got a great deal of experience in organizing English activities. All in all, Id be honored if you can choose me. Ill make every effort to do my job and you wont regret it.Yours truly，Li Hua一句多译：My spoken English is excellent due to the fact that I have a good knowledge of English grammar and go to the English corner every Sunday afternoon.Secondly, Ive taken part in plenty of voluntary work since Senior 1, which helped me gain lots of valuable experience.- 1 -
