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1、读后续写：寻找Abdel阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。This particular day began at seven in the morning in Casablanca (卡萨布兰卡). My Friend Mike and I were going to visit Abdel, a young man wed worked with on a Volunteer project in Kenitra, an industrial city on the Morccan (摩洛哥) coast. Hed been expecting
2、us to arrive in Casablanca for a few days now, and since he had no telephone, hed written down his address and name and told us to just show up-his mother and Sisters were always at home.Apparently the address he had written down was hard for foreigners like us to understand. When we got into the ne
3、ighborhood, our taxi driver started asking directions. Eventually, with the help of a policeman, we were led to a house down a winding road. Our driver went to the door and inquired. He came back saying Abdels sister was in this house visiting friends and would come along to show us where they lived
4、.Soon a girl of about sixteen emerged from the house. Surprisingly, she didnt look like Abdel at all. Still, Id seen other families where children didnt look alike, so I didnt give it too much thought. She then brought us to a yard. We waited in the yard while the sister went in and returned accompa
5、nied by her mother, sisters and brother-in-law, all of whom greeted us with cautious warmth. We were shown into the living room. The mother told us in broken French that Abdel was out, but would be home soon. We sat on low, cushioned seats, drinking sweet mint tea and eating sugar cookies, while the
6、 family members sat with us and made shy, polite conversation that frequently fell into uncomfortable silence.An hour passed, more family members emerged from inner rooms. I was again struck by the fact that none of them looked a thing like our fiend.After another two hours had passed with no sign o
7、f Abdel, the family insisted on serving us a meal in their kitchen next door. “Soon was the only response I got when I inquired as s to what time Abdel might come back.注意: 续写词数应为150左右Finally we heard the words we had been waiting for from the mother. Pleases Abelis back in the living room _I took ou
8、t the piece of paper Abdel had given me in Kenitra and showed it to the newAbdel. 审题：仔细阅读素材，提取关键信息，第3段，“surprisingly, she didnt look like Abdel at all”,第4段，“I was struck by the fact that none of them looked a thing like our friend”。加上第二段信息句中the new Abdel，我们可以推测出，“我和Mike”应该是找错了人，此Abdel非Abdel。根据以上分析，第
9、一段是我们和Abdel碰面，发现找错人了，从而过渡到第二段，把字条的信息给Abdel看；第二段，则是这个Abdel恍然大悟，然后带我们找到了要找的那个Abdel。那么主旨如何确定呢？从上文的素材中，有着蛛丝马迹-第3段“all of whom greeted us with cautious warmth”，第5段，“thefamily insisted on serving us a meal”。为什么会给出这个信息呢？面对陌生人，有温暖，有耐心，执意留我们吃饭，表达出热情，善良和真诚，所以可以把主旨确定为warmth和kindness。范文:Finally we heard the wor
10、ds we had been waiting for from the mother, “Please, Abdel is back in the living room.”l Anxious and expectant, we strode to the living room. 焦虑而期待，我们大步走到客厅。l Standing in it was a man in his thirties, obviously not our friend.“Hello. ImAbdel. Have we met somewhere before?” He asked in a surprised vo
11、ice, face etched with confusion.站在里面的是一个三十多岁的人，显然不是我们的朋友。“你们好，我是阿卜杜勒。我们以前在哪见过吗？他用惊讶的声音问道，脸上满是困惑。l Now, we were sure we found the wrong guy, and toliftus out of the awkward situation, I stammered, “So-sorry, it seemed that we made a mistake.” 现在我们确信自己找错人了，为了摆脱尴尬的处境，我结结巴巴地说：“抱歉，似乎我们搞错了。”l Then Abdel e
12、xclaimed heartily, “It doesnt matter at all.” After hearing our story, he asked us to show them the address.然后阿卜杜勒大声说道：“没关系。”听到我们的故事后，他让我们把地址给他们看。（衔接下文）stride (strode) vi.大步走etch v.铭刻I took out the piece of paper Abdel had given me back in Kenitra and showed it to the new Abdel.l “Aha! Its him!”Abde
13、lexclaimed in delight.“The man youre looking for lives in the neighboring village. Let me be your guide.” “啊哈！”是他！阿卜杜勒喊道。“你们要找的人住在附近的村庄里，让我做你们的向导。”l We later got united with the veryAbdel, and our relationship got strengthened because of theroundaboutjourney. 后来我们和要找的阿卜杜勒碰头了，因为这次曲折的行程，我们的关系也变得更紧密。l
14、But more importantly, we established anewandmeaningful contact with newAbdelthanks tothe coincidence. Looking back, I feelmuchblessed,andwarmth together withkindness stillmakemy mind ripple.但更重要的是，多亏了这个巧合，我们同后来这位阿卜杜勒建立了全新有意义的联系。回首过去，我感到很幸福，这些温暖和善良依然在我的心中泛起涟漪。exclaim v.大声呼喊roundabout a.曲折的ripple v.泛起
15、涟漪n.涟漪官方范文：Finally we heard the words we had been waiting for from the mother, “Please, Abdel is back in the living room.” We entered the lovely living room and a young man came forward with an uncertain expression on his face. “Hello, I am Abdel.” he said cautiously. Immediately I realized there was a mistake. “I Im sorry, Im afraid you are not the Abdel we are looking for,” I giggled
