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1、针对低层次学校学生读后续写解题指导案例针对低层次学校学生读后续写解题指导案例 读后续写真题读后续写真题（浙江卷浙江卷）12345三大原则试题文本写作过程得分技巧 评分标准目录CONTENTS1三大原则三大原则O N E 三大原则 1 原文一致原则内容要前后衔接，上下连贯2 正能量原则故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法等等。3 曲折性原则凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。2试题文本试题文本
2、T W O阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked
3、inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks like youve got a problem,”Arthur said.“Im afraid so.Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and the
4、n said,“Thanks.If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all.Id be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur pi
5、cked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped an
6、d the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other,“What happened?”But everyone had a different answer.Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was
7、 surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase！She thinks Im the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened,and without another thought,he started to run.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。As he was running,Arthur heard the young man s
8、houting behind,“Stop,stop!”_The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur._3写作过程写作过程T H R E EI.准确理解材料，理清人物事件。Task 1.浅层信息理解 首先要审题：文体：_ 人称：_ 时态：_ 5Ws：who _，_，_when _where _，_,_what _why _记叙文第三人称一般过去时the young manpeopleArthur on the way to work one dayPark Avenuethe bankcarrying the suitca
9、setaxibank robberyTask 2.深层信息理解理清故事的发展线索（How）paragraph（段落）Behaviors（行为）Topic（段意）Para 1heard the sound，couldnt get the car moving，looked inside at，stopped and askedArthur went to a young man with his car in trouble.Task 2.深层信息理解理清故事的发展线索（How）paragraph（段落）Behaviors（行为）Topic（段意）Para 2，3，4，5&6cant start
10、，help me get these suitcases into，glad to help，took，placing，get the other one，picked up the first suitcase，heard an alarmThe alarm went off as Arthur helped to carry the suitcase.Task 2.深层信息理解理清故事的发展线索（How）paragraph（段落）Behaviors（行为）Topic（段意）Para 7was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts
11、 of people，joined the crowd，asked，had a different answerAfter the alarm sounded,the crowd were in chaos.Para 8，9&10looked at，was surprised，thinksArthur realized that he was thought to be a robber.(1).文章的基调：funny 人物情感和性格：helpful，brave，honest and impulsive(易冲动的)文中感悟：the policemen thanked him (2).梳理故事情
12、节 Arthur上班途中在银行附近助人为乐；帮忙提箱子过程中银行警报响起,混乱中一位女士用奇怪的眼神看他，他意识到自己被认为是抢劫犯，Arthur 跑了起来。the main charactersthe problem the young man facedthe help Arthur offeredthe disturbance on Park VenueThe look of a young woman in front of Arthurthe reaction of Arthur:Arthur and a young man.He couldnt start his car.He p
13、icked up the suitcase.There might be a bank robbery.She looked at Arthur as if he was the robber He ran away without a second thought(3).提炼信息要点Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”1.OpeningArthur encountered a young man who couldnt start his car and asked him to help get the suitca
14、ses into a taxi.Taking one of the suitcases in hand,Arthur heard a loud alarm.The passers-by on the street thought there might be a bank robbery.A young woman Arthur ran into mistook Arthur as the bank thief.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur 2.Build-up3.Conflict4.Resolution5
15、.Ending(4).完成故事山 II.研究所给首句，定逻辑与情节Task1：思考以下问题 Paragraph 1：As he was running,Arthur heard the young man,shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”请思考 Q1:Did Arthur stop?Q2:What was Arthur thinking?Q3:What did Arthur do?Q4:How can we write something to connect with“Taxi”and“Police Station”mentioned in the next Para
16、.?Paragraph 2：The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur请思考：Q1:How can we complete the first sentence in Para.2?Q2:What might happen in the Police Station?Q3:What might Arthur say to the policeman?Q4:What was the truth of the story?How might Arthur and/or other characters react to the truth?Task2 定细节ParaWho would be in the paragraph?What would they do?How would they feel?Para1 Para2 Arthur;the young Arthur;the young man man Arthur;the Arthur;the policeman;the policeman;the young
