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1、 托福综合写作满分范文6700字 一：网络故事书（webstorybook service）reading网络故事书的好处1.可以教小朋友读书2.经济实惠，家长不需要为孩子买书了3.可以代替父母陪伴孩子，为家长节省时间lecture反驳1.使用时不能和小朋友互动（ask question and get feedback）2.网络上的故事都是过时的，要想读新故事还是要买书（不足）3.父母与孩子一起读书可以增进感情例文： The speaker rebuts the readings argument by pointing outthe inadequacy of the web-storyb
2、ook services interaction with children, the incompleteness of the data pool, and by undermining the assumption that saving parents reading time is a benefit.saved and pronunciation utilities laid out in the reading, the web services canmany books that the web services do not provide.parents time to
3、read stories to children. The reading argues that saving the essential way of communicating and building relationship between parents and children.1二：药品广告（drug advertisement）提出命题：药品广告所提供的信息都是客观全面的，且病人对药物了解得越多越好1.病人可以更多了解处方药的相关信息（information）2.医生开药时，病人可以与广告上进行比较，有利于选药3.通过广告，病人可以了解到新药的发展，提醒医生挑战命题：病人不需
4、要对药物了解太多，因为有时候了解得太多会对非专业的病人产生困扰，而且广告所提供的信息也不完整全面1.广告通常只有宣传好处，对副作用（side effects）一笔带过，病人很难判断2.病人对药物的准确用法用量不了解，可能会用错3.广告只宣传新药，对旧药没有宣传，但是针对不同的病情，也许旧药更为合适The speaker raises serious counterarguments against the reading paragraphs by providing drastically different evidences regardingthe effects of the adv
5、ertisement, the impact of self-selecting medication, and the impact of trends in the pharmaceutical industry. only on the positive sides of a certain medicine while ignoring the serious side effects. doctors less liable for potential risks and undesirable consequences.Lastly, as for the new trends b
6、enefits to the patients, the speaker does not will count for most of the ads may not necessarily be the best medicine, even though the patients can inform their doctors about the new products.三：网络问卷（web based survey）reading网络问卷相对传统问卷的优势21.调查范围更广，所以调查结果就更为准确（逻辑错误：参加人多并不代表范围广，也不能保证效果好）2.发放，填写和收集问卷更加方便
7、简单3.成本低lecture反驳网络问卷的优势1.所取得的调查结果不全面（biased），因为不是所有人都会上网，中老年人上网会比较少，而年轻人上网比较多2.成本并不会低，因为一个好的网络问卷需要一个团队的大量工作（提出新的证据：网络问卷也需要成本和人力资源）3.大多数人对网络问卷都不严肃，会得到不正确的信息，容易混淆视听。例文： The speaker questions the effectiveness of web based surveys by providing evidences contradictory to the reading.Firstly, he identifi
8、ed the readings logical flaw in assuming that an increase in the scope and quantity of the survey will automatically translate to greater young generation. Thus the results cannot be extended to demonstrate the views of the whole population.Secondly, although the web-based surveys will lower paper c
9、ost, they will inevitably incur new costs in web designing, flashy features, and other elements, readings argument that web surveys will certainly reduce the cost of the survey.In the end, many web designers tend to overdo in the webpage and add fancy and flashy features. As a result, many people pe
10、rceive the web-based physical surveys that draw attention effectively, many web based surveys are 3simply ignored or even deleted.四：打分偏高（inflation of marks）reading老师给学生打的分数越来越高1.分数打得低会减低学生的学习意志2.会影响教师自己的测评结果3.因为别的老师给的成绩高，如果不跟着给高分，学生出去找工作会吃亏lecture解决方案1.应从小灌输正确的学习观念，不应因一次小失利而丧失信心2.教师的评测可以改在学期结束前进行，这样
11、学生的成绩就不会影响到评测结果3.企业在选拔人才时可以看学生在班级中的排名而不是单纯的成绩例文：The speaker challenges the reasoning that supports the current inflation in college grading system, provides very specific alternatives to teacherevaluation timing and employer methodology in judging a student.reading, low grades will discourage studen
12、ts. The speaker rebuts this point and argues that the true meaning of education is not just to satisfy students.Letting the students make progress is the purpose and inflated grades will not help students in this way. evaluation, the speaker offers a solution. By finishing the teachers evaluation be
13、fore the end of the semester, we can sever the connections between the students grades and teachers evaluations.Lastly, the speaker argues that the school does not have to follow the trend of inflated grades invariably. The reading argues that if the school does not follow the trend, their students
14、will be discriminated, the lecture says that this problem can be solved by providing a weighted relative score. This score will pinpoint a students percentile in the whole student body and show the other students 4scores, thus allowing employers to clearly position the student among the entire stude
15、nt body.五：加氟自来水（adding fluoride in public water）reading在自来水中加氟的好处1.防止蛀牙2.杀死细菌3.对骨骼有好处（decrease bone diseases）lecture反驳1.自来水并不会留在口中，对防止蛀牙没有帮助2.氟会与输水管（water pipe）中的化学物质反应，产生有毒物质，其危害大于细菌3.过量的氟会使骨骼变脆例文：The speaker refutes the readings argument about the benefits of adding fluoride to pipe water by provi
16、ding contradictory evidence aboutpipe waters fluorides effectiveness in preventing cavities in teeth, killing bacteria, and decreasing bone diseases.water will pass the mouth and teeth quickly and go directly to the stomach.reactions with heavy metals in the pipe, such as lead. This will create toxic
