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1、2020 届高考英语一轮复习循序写作每周一卷, 步步登高第十八周图画作文新人教版1 / 5 第十八周图画作文 学审题谋篇 (2020 辽宁省葫芦岛市一模) 此刻跟着智好手机和电子设施的普及，“低头族”现象盛行。人们沉迷于手机等电子设施，因此忽视了自己和别人的交流交流，甚至在家庭聚会上也只顾玩手机不睦尊长聊天，使老人感觉失意万分。请依据图画写一篇英语短文。内容重点以下：1描绘图画内容；2对图中现象加以剖析；3针对这个现象提出建议。注意：1词数 100 左右；2可适合发挥，以使行文连接。1审题图画作文要审清题意，看懂图画所表达的意思，紧扣主题。审题时应做到三定：定体裁；定人称；准时态。如本文为夹叙
2、夹议文；在表达时和就图画谈论时主要用第三人称，表述自己看法时用第一人称；时态主要用一般此刻时。2谋篇图画类作文以图画形式给出信息，因此需要抓住图画所传达的信息，将图画信息转变为文字重点。如本文能够从三个方面进行描绘：第一表达图画内容；而后介绍图画所反应的2020 届高考英语一轮复习循序写作每周一卷, 步步登高第十八周图画作文新人教版2 / 5 社会现象；最后陈说应当如何去做。 学增分亮点 满分范文 As can be seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner. But when they sit
3、 down to table, the young justbury themselves in playing with their cellphones, totally ignoring theirparents, who feel very lonely and sad. There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative effect on our lives. Heavy use of cellphones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders,
4、 leaving the elders more lonely.Worse still, addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers poor performance at school,which adds to the elders worries.As far as Im concerned, its necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones.And I think it important to communicate with our family memb
5、ers face to face, which helps builda harmonious family atmosphere. 满分缘故 1构造布局本文可分为两段：第一段：介绍图画内容，全家人正在会餐，但年青人却在玩手机，完整不管父母的感觉；第二段：陈说“低头族”这类社会现象，并就此现象提出了自己的见解。2亮点词汇bury oneself in, have an effect on, widen, add to, as far as .concerned, face to face, harmonious 3亮点句式第句包含 as 指引的非限制性定语从句；第句包含 when 指引的时间状
6、语从句、此刻分词作状语和who 指引的非限制性2020 届高考英语一轮复习循序写作每周一卷, 步步登高第十八周图画作文新人教版3 / 5 定语从句；第句包含 which 指引的非限制性定语从句；第句包含 it作形式宾语和which 指引的非限制性定语从句。 句式改写 1用名词性从句改写句What_can_be_seen_from_the_picture_is_that_a_big_family_gets_together _to_have_a_big_dinner. 2用动名词作主语和此刻分词作结果状语改写Worse_still,_being_addicted_to_cellphones_mi
7、ght_also_lead_to_teenage rs _poor_performance_at_school,_thus_adding_to_the_elders_worries. 3用被动语态改写句As_far_as_I m_concerned,_it s_necessary_that_the_time_we_spend_using_cellphones_should_be_limited. 写满分作文 (2020 龙岩市质检 ) 如何权衡一个人真实的质量，不一样的人有不一样的见解。请仔细阅读下边的引语，联合图片所提示的信息，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“The measure of a ma
8、n s real character is what he would do if he knew he would never be found out.”Thomas Macaulay 内容要求：1你对该引语的理解；2. 举例说明； 3. 适合的结尾。注意：1内容起码包含一幅图片的信息；2020 届高考英语一轮复习循序写作每周一卷, 步步登高第十八周图画作文新人教版4 / 5 2文中不得出现考生的详细信息；3词数 100 左右；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。参照词汇：self-discipline n 自律self-disciplined adj. 自律的要求 请用重申句型、状语从句、宾
9、语从句、省略、it 作形式主语、倒装、动名词作主语、 not only .but (also) .和定语从句达成作文。This quotation from Thomas Macaulay tells us that 参照范文：This quotation from ThomasMacaulay tells us that it is self-discipline that reflects a man s real character. Therefore, we should be self-disciplined anytime even if we know that our beh
10、avior will never be found out. For example, when taking exams, we should be self-di sciplined enough and not cheat. For another, it is essential for us to learn to control ourselves well on the Internet. We can t be addicted to computer games or bad information, nor can we use the Internet to attack
11、 others immorally and illegally. In addi tion, through self-discipline we should avoid and resist different kinds of temptations, which is of great help to prevent corruptions. 2020 届高考英语一轮复习循序写作每周一卷, 步步登高第十八周图画作文新人教版5 / 5 In conclusion, being self-disciplined not only helps us improve ourselves, but (also) contributes to building up a harmonious and civilized society. As the saying goes, the day has eyes and the night has ears. Weshould make a reasonable choice about what to do wherever and whenever we are.
