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1、初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导,brainstorm,Teenagers colorful life,We study .,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often play Sports.,We go to KFC .,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,Teenagers healthy life,We study all day.,We like listening to mus
2、ic.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often play Sports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,colorful,healthy,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家
3、进行假日休闲。,审,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your
4、 vacation.,列,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a
5、nice body,加,加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,3 2 1 4 6 5,Second , we should keep quiet in the library. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in
6、 our daily life. Whats more, we ought to return books on time. Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them. Third , we must do lots of homework.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at ho
7、me. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示
8、转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, l
9、ater, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,关联词,Lets play the game.,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like do
10、ing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit frie
11、nds or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . T
12、hen some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,Skill One
13、 Make your sentences correct,Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,Skill Two Express in different ways,Our parents really wish us to work h
14、ard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study. The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shouldnt eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn E
15、nglish grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,中考作文评分标准,第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,书面表达,以 “I have a d
16、ream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true,I have a dream Have you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider. I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think its dangerous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed
