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1、 叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体：这一类的书面表达动词现率最高，且富于变化，用得最多的是动词的过去时态，各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点:1.头绪分明，脉络清楚写好书面表达，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个W和一个H来展开，分别是wh
2、y, what, when, where, who及how。2.突出中心，详略得当在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。3.用活语言，准确生动记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。1.Among various kinds of thi
3、ngs/persons in my mind,.is the most unforgettable one2.On a sunny/rainy morning，while I was.First of all. Then.After that. In the end.3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/experienced,I will remember him/in forever加分句子：1. Sth. impre
4、ssed me greatly.2. What impressed me most is that.经典句型：1.LastSunday（Saturday.）, itwassunny（rainy,windy,foggy）2.Igotupveryearly（late）.AfterbreakfastIwenttowithmyfriendsbybike,bus.3.Weenjoyedourselves.4.Weforgotthetime.Wedidntcomebackuntil5oclock.5.Weallfeltverytired,butwewerehappy.6.IthoughtIwouldnev
5、erforgetthistrip.7.Lastsummer,myparentsandIwenttoBeijingforourholidays.8.Wevisitedalotofplacesofinterest.9.Wehadagoodtimethere.10.Weboughtalotofthings.Theclothesherearegoodandcheap.l 人物类书面表达主要通过刻画人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，表现主题，模版如下：I will never forget my English teacherShe is a beautiful womanIt wasoclock, I
6、 didinI realize that开门见山，引出要介绍的人物 正文（时间、地点、人物）感想l 叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。l 写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总分总的结构或总分的结构，模版如下：介绍景观 is one of the most beautiful scenery spots. 介绍旅行经历I volunteered a guide to introduce 总结旅行感受 It was a busy and tired day but I was very happy典例一（2019河南）假如你有机会和任何一个名人共
7、进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。1.要点：1)这个名人是谁;2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;3)你想和他或她谈论什么。2.要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2)词数80左右。 【参考范文】Id like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his l
8、eadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, Ill ask for his advice for us teenagers today.Im expecting this lunch already.名师点评 文章符合写作提示要求，思路清晰，开门见山地引出介绍的对象。作者运用
9、了很多巧妙的语句，使短文文采丰富，读后余味无穷，是一篇值得品味的佳作。亮点回放1.Mr. Ren is considered as a great man .我们认为任先生是一个伟大的人。2. under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide。在他的领导下，华为已经成为了一个世界性的高科技巨人。 3. If time permits, Ill ask for his advice for us teenagers today. 如果时间允许，我会请他给我们今天的青少年一些建议。典例二（2019天津）假如你是晨
10、光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记.请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法.(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢.(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵.(3)你认为.参考词汇：开始呕吐 begin to vomit挤向座位 push towards the seat争吵 have a quarrel要求：(1)词数：80100个.(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥WednesdayWhen I took the underground back home
11、 from school，I noticed .【参考范文】WednesdayWhen I took the underground back home from school， I noticed two things around meThe first thing I met is about a boyThe boy didnt feel wellHe began to vomitA beautiful girl saw the boyShe helped him clean the floorThen the boy thanked her for helpingThe second
12、 thing is about the underground. When the underground got to the station, a lot of people pushed towards the seat. So some people couldnt get off the undergroundSome had a quarreel because of thisIn my opinion，The girl did a good thing and we appreciated her action in this societyAs for the undergro
13、undIt shows your quality thereIf you wait in a line，others will get off the underground easilyIf all of us can do in this way，our world will be more beautiful.亮点回放 1. 全文巧用the first thing ，the second thing 等连接词，把地铁上所见所闻写的非常清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。2. 全文采用了定语从句、状语从句、并列句等多种长难句，为文采分增色不少。 A 【2019 甘肃省天水市】“你养我长大，我陪你变老
14、”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业，是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。要点：(l)给我生命，一直照顾我成长；(2)努力工作，为我提供良好 生活和教育条件；(3)拥有爱心，教我学会；(4)今天，我要为你们（自主发挥一至少两点）a注意事项：(l)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. _
