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1、passage 1When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I thinkI would be happy there. Now I am living in a city，but I miss my homein countryside.There the airisclean or the mountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentof industrialization， the environment has been polluted. Lots of studieshave
2、 been shown thatglobalwarming has alreadybecome a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is gettingdirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, welllive to regret it.passage 2One day，1ittle Tony went to a shopping
3、center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.Afterlooks at the toy forsometime ，he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun tocry. A woman saw him crying and telling
4、 him to wait outside ashop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Momsaid ，“ Hownice to see you again. Dad and I were terrible worried. Tony promised her that this would never happen again.passage 337 / 37 下载文档可编辑My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his re
5、tirement party. My mummakes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her forhelp. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted ondoing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits werereallywell.Myonly mistake was thatI dropped someon the floor after I was packing them up.At a
6、 party，my coach， with a biscuit in his mouth， askedsurprisinglywho madethem and joked ，“ I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.Myfavoritepictureat the partyisof my coach and meenjoy the biscuits with happy laughter.passage 4My old classroom was interesting becau
7、se three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. Onthe left-handside of the class ，I couldeasy see the football field.In the mornings ， itwas fullof studentsexercising.The view fromthe back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the
8、 school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance ，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in themorning. The position of the classroom with its view made mefe
9、lt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.passage 5Hi, Janice,It s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some ofthe problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time， I made three new friend
10、here. We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It s been three Saturdays now and itreallycostsme many. And I startedto seethis as a time-wasting activity. In fact,I don t like to go anymore，so I m afraid Illlose their friendship. How do
11、 you think I should do. If you are me, would you talk to him.Please help with me and give me some advice.Gracepassage 6Nearlyfiveyears before,and withthe help by our father,mysisterand I plantedsomecherrytomatoes 圣女果 inour back garden. Since thenfor all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to se
12、lf-seedwhere they please.As result,the plantsare growing somewhere. The fruitsare smallin size ， but Juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Althoughwe allowtomato plantsto grow inthe same place year after year， but we have never had any disease or insectattack
13、problems.Weare growing wonderfullytomatoes atno cost.passage 7My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are threelessonsin the morning and two in the afternoon. Wedidn t need to do so manyhomework. Therefore,we have more timewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample ， we can do readi
14、ng for one and a half hour and play sports for one hourevery day.Mydream school look likea big garden.There are allkinds of the flowersand treesaround the classroom buildings.Wecan lieon the grass fora rest,or sat by the lake listeningmusic. The teachershere are kind and helpfully.They are not only
15、our teachers but also our friends.passage 8My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach meabout animals ，insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.Oneevening at sunset ，we sat by the fire，have our barbecue. Just then a birdwas flyingover us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot theirarrows on the bird.Neitherof the arrows hitthe target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky they were looked like
