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1、1 写作专练 (四) 写作(共两节，满分 35分) 第一节短文改错 (共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分) (20172018 郑州一中上期高三入学测试) The incident had happened on my way to a bookstore on the rainy Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green light when a girl about ten was knocked down by a passing car， that drove off quickly.A man immediately rus
2、hed to the girl to give him first aid.I joined in without any hesitate.A young woman called 110 and the polices soon arrived at the scene.Fortunate she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.Comparing with the escaped driver，I am proud of that I did. 【答案】 The incident hadhappe
3、ned on my way to a bookstore on the a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green light when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，that which drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him her first aid.I joined in without any hesitate hesitation .A young w
4、oman called 110 and the polices police soon arrived at the scene.Fortunate Fortunately she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.Comparing Compared with the escaped driver ，I am proud of that what I did. 第一处：删除 had。考查动词时态。此处是在叙述发生在过去的事情，故用一般过去时。 第二处： the改为 a。考查冠词。此处应用不定冠词a，泛指
5、某一个下雨的周日下午。 第三处： about前加 of。考查介词。此处表示 “ 一个大约十岁的女孩 ” ，故在 about前加 of。 第四处： that 改为 which。考查定语从句。 which 引导非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语， 先行词为 “ a passing car ” 。 第五处： him 改为 her。考查代词。根据语境可知，此处是指上文提到的被车撞倒的小姑娘， 故用代词 her。 第六处： hesitate改为 hesitation。考查名词。根据空前的any 可知，此处应用名词作宾语，故 将 hesitate改为 hesitation。 第七处： polices改为 p
6、olice。考查名词。 the police 表示“ 警察” ，是表示复数意义的集体名词。 第八处：Fortunate改为 Fortunately。考查副词。副词修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。故 用副词 Fortunately修饰整个句子。 第九处：Comparing 改为 Compared 。考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，compare和句子主 语“ I” 构成逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词作状语。 第十处： that 改为 what。考查宾语从句。 what 引导宾语从句，在从句中作宾语，表示物的概 念；that在宾语从句中不作成分，故将that改为 what。 第二节书面表达 (
7、满分 25 分) (2018 山西名校联考 ) 假定你是李华， 你的加拿大笔友Dave想了解中国的传统节日 “ 春节” ，请你回复他的电子邮件， 介绍“ 春节” 及这个节日里的主要活动。 1它是中国的传统节日之一； 2 2家人团聚； 3吃饺子、放焰火、走亲访友等其他活动。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：春节 the Spring Festival放焰火 set off fireworks Dear Dave， In your last letter，you asked me about the Sprin
8、g Festival._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours sincerely ， Li Hua 【范文赏读】 Dear_Dave ， In_your_last_letter,_you_asked_me_about_the_Spring_Festival. As is known to all，it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually，no matter how far away or how busy we are，we will try to come home for the ce
9、lebration.On the eve of the Spring Festival ， all the family members get together, making dumplings and having a feast.Children have great fun in setting off fireworks.Parents take their kids to pay a visit to relatives or friends.In addition to these traditional activities，people have found new ways to celebrate it such as traveling and sending best wishes through WeChat. Hopefully，you will come to China to experience it.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours_sincerely ， Li_Hua
