精品2018 年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（八）天气与环境一、相关话题天气（ Weather ） 、自然（ Nature ） 、世界与环境（ The world and the environment ）二、与专题相关的知识准备：1. 相关单元：（天气）七年级上 Unit 4 Seasons ；（自然、环境）七年级上 Unit 3 The Earth ；七年级下 Unit 4 Save the trees ； Unit 5 Water ；八年级下 Unit 5 Save the endangered animals2. 相关词汇：高频词：（关于天气） seasons, weather, plant, spring, summer, autumn, winter, sunny, rainy, snowy, foggy, grow, rain, swim,（关于自然、环境） the Earth, the moon, forest, river, mountain, field, environment, pollute, pollution, protect, destroy, dirty, clean, burn, waste, gas, area, pour, nearby, serious, public, improve, ； endangered, save;高频短语：（关于天气） get warm, turn green, heavy snow, go to the beach, fall from the trees, goon a picnic, take a trip, play in the snow,（关于自然环境） pollute the water, throw …awayput waste/ rubbish into rivers and seas, take in harmful gases, fight against pollution, cut down, stop doing sth. , planttrees, dig holes, water the plants, as a result, turn the tap off, have a bath, take a shower, in the wild, lose one ' s home, kill …for..., millions of, thoUsandgef,stop …from, turn off;拓展词及词语: shower, muddy, the importance of …in our lives, decrease, valuable, drinkable, the World Wild Fund for Nature, a nature reserve, live in harmony with nature, atmosphere, environmental problem.3. 经典句型：（关于天气）I like …（season） best. / My favourite season isThe wind blows gently / strongly.The sun shines brightly.It ’ s exciting to take a trip in spring.It ’ s nice/exciting to do sth.（关于自然环境） The Earth provides us with air, water and food.The Earth is our home.Trees are important in our daily lives.Trees are home to birds and animals.There is a lot of pollution.We burn things to make energy. This pollutes the air.What can we do to protect the Earth?We mus t stop We must do our best to We mustn ’ t throw rubbish into the river. The fish will die if the river is polluted.We should write to factories and ask them to stop polluting the river.We can take our own shopping bags to the supermarket.Remember not to waste or pollute water.The problem is very serious. People oftenWe can ' t live without They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.We should use the both sides of paper \ collect waste paper.\ Don't buy caps or boxes which people can use only once.Turn off the lights when you are not using them.You'd better ride a bike instead of driving a car.You'd better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a bus or a taxi if you're traveling a short distance.Something must be done to stop the pollution.Panda are strong enough to protect themselves.It ’ s important for us to protect the endangered animals.It is cruel of people to kill animals.（ 2010 年广州市中考题）你校准备举行“节约用水， 从现在做起”的英语征文比赛， 你打算投稿。
请根据以下表格内容- 可编辑 -精品必要性没有水人类就无法生存不良现象不关水龙头（tap）；洗澡时间很长；没 喝完水就把瓶子扔掉建议（你的2-3个建议）汪忠：1 .词数80左右（计划的开头已给出，不计入词数）；2 .不能透露个人的任何信息（例如：具体的学校和姓名等），否则不予评分Act now to save waterWater is important to us …解题思路：1 .审题：a.本文共有6个要点b.时态主要采用一般现在时c.人称是第一人称2 .可能用到的短语和句型a.主要连接词 but , so , in my opinion, b.主要短语句型 some …..,some …..others …can ' t live without , turn off, throw away3 .成文：Act now to save waterAs everyone knows, water is important in our daily life. One can live without food for a week, but one can no longer exist without water in three days. Now in the world, water is fewer and fewer. We should not waste even a drop of water. There are many examples of wasting water , such as not turn off the tap after using it, have a too long shower and throw bottle with water.In my opinion, people should start out small to save water. Try to use the water againand again. For example, after washing clothes, you can use the water to mop. So please don't wait .Act now to save water. We will have a brighter future.点评：1）、从内容上须写2~3个建议，学生只写了一个。
2）、本文出现一些可以避免的语法错误，如水是不可数的，不能用 fewer and fewer 等3）、 还有些中式的英语， have a too long shower.4）、最后一段人称比较乱，有I, you, people和we,改为用第一人称更好，5）、整篇文章描述比较流畅，用到较好的句子如 One can live without food for a week, but one can no longer exist without water in three days.所以整篇文章得分：5+4.5+2.5=124 .检查思路：完成作文自查表：1.如果没有问题的，请在项目后打，2.如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改项目第一次自查第二次自查布局与内容要点人称时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句5.分项分档评分表项目要素给分表内容6分切合题意，体现要点6 5. 554.54.54-3.53-2.521.510有所发挥准确性6分语法6 5.554.54-3.543-2.521.510词汇机械性：大 小写，拼写和格式等错 误流畅性3分结构3 2.52-1.5210.50000自评总分：6.参考例文：Water is very important to us. Without water, people cannot live. But in our daily life, -可编辑-精品we can see many people waste water. Some people do not turn off the tap after usingit. Some take long showers and others throw away plastic bottles when there is stillwater inside. To save water, we should always turn off the tap when we are not usingit. We can wash our cl。