首尾呼应式结尾首尾呼应式结尾出彩结尾出彩结尾PART 01Warm-upRead the following examples and think:what kind of ending is this?Read and thinkWhat kind of ending is this?【开头案例1】It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.首尾呼应结尾首尾呼应结尾【续写结尾1】Never had I had such a thrilling,yet dangerous,vacation before.That special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.我从来没有经历过这么刺激又危险的假期那次去西部的特别旅行,深深地印在我的脑海里开头案例2】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.首尾呼应结尾首尾呼应结尾【续写结尾2】What a funny day it had been.Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he thought back to this hilarious experience.多么有趣的一天啊,每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历,他就忍不住笑个不停。
What kind of ending is this?Think and shareHow?How should we design a reasonable foreshadowing story ending?PART 02Read and thinkA Run to Remember Thirteen can be a challenging age.Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body,I also had to deal with my parents bitter divorce,a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburb.When we moved,my beloved pony(小马)had to be sold.Feeling helpless and alone,I couldnt eat or sleep.Finally,my father purchased an old red horse for me.My horse,Cowboy,was the ugliest horse in the world.He was pigeon-toed and knock-kneed.But I loved him beyond all reasons.Read the following passage and get details I joined a riding club and realized that my only chance to compete would be barrel racing(绕桶赛),an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time.One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events.She always won the blue ribbons.The bitter memory of Beckys smirks(得意的笑)made me determined to beat her.For the whole next month,I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena(运动场地).We practiced for hours in the hot sun.Read the following passage and get detailsRead the following passage and get details All of our hard work didnt make me feel confident by the time the show came.I sat at the gate and watched Becky and her horse finish the course with ease.Read the following passage and get details My turn finally came.I mounted up,slipped my boots into my stirrups,and gripped the reins tightly.As we headed for the start line,Cowboy stumbled and everyone cackled with delight,especially Becky.The laughter inspired me to fight.I took a deep breath and whispered in my partners ear,“Cowboy,give them a lesson with your splayfoot.”At the signal,we dashed toward the first barrel and took a sharp turn.We had practiced this route thousands of times.Onetwothe last one!Gritting my teeth,I raced to cross the finish line.Think:how to design a reasonable ending No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.The audience was shocked in stunned silence.No one could believe that a nobody and a pigeon-toed ugly horse had beaten Becky and her fancy horse.But I knew I deserved the victory because of all my effort.When I accepted the blue ribbon,I found that I no longer worried about Beckys reaction or peoples judgments about Cowboys appearance,even the annoying changes about my family._PART 03Analyse and designQ1:What did I learn from“the run”?Q2:What did the story mainly tell the readers?Para 2:No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.Step 1:根据所给段首句关键根据所给段首句关键词和原文故事价值提问词和原文故事价值提问Raise questions according to the 2nd given sentenceQ1:What did I learn from“the run”?Q2:What did the story mainly tell the readers?I realized that we should take the chance to challenge ourselves,no matter how hard it might be.We should bravely face difficulties and try to change them.Step 2:回应回应原文故事细节原文故事细节总结提炼回答问题总结提炼回答问题Think about the answers accoring to the given text分分析析:本文讲述了“我”带老马参加绕桶赛,克服压力,最终获胜的故事。
在故事的开头讲述了“我”的生活遭遇了一系列变化,这些变化让“我”感到烦恼而面对竞争对手Becky的嘲笑和轻视,“我”下定决心要打败她,并刻苦练习在续写第一段描述了比赛时的紧张场景,第二段则描述“我”获得了比赛的冠军在安排结尾的时候,可以讲述“我”通过努力练习参加比赛这件事,对之前发生的变化、对生活产生了新的感悟,从而获得了成长Design reasonable story endingsPossible ending version 1:At the age of thirteen,I realized that our destiny offers not the cup of despair but the chalice of opportunity.I would always seize it not in fear but in gladness.点点评评:该结尾中,主人公领悟到在面对生活带来的挑战时,应抓住其中的机会,战胜恐惧,照应了前文提到的生活中的变化在该结尾中,“我”学会了如何在生活的挑战中抓住机遇,提升自己Design reasonable story endings从主人公视角回应原文细节提炼定结尾从主人公视角回应原文细节提炼定结尾Possible ending version 2:My life is like this barrel racing,which is challenging but there is still something we can do to adapt to it or even change it.Regardless of the outcome,at least we should give it a try.点点评评:该结尾将生活比作绕桶赛,尽管有挑战,但仍应不计结果,尽力尝试,照应了前文提到的因变化带来的烦恼。
在该结尾中,“我”学会了如何以积极的心态应对烦恼Design reasonable story endings从原文故事细节回应总结提炼定结尾从原文故事细节回应总结提炼定结尾PART 04Exercise Read and designRead the following text and practice writing reasonable story endings according to what we have just learnt.Walking along the narrow brick sidewalk,Aram couldnt believe his luck.All his friends were working boring summer jobs,but he was about to start as an actual bakers assistant,doing 。