考研英语作文评分标准评分标准__五档第五档：A 节（9—10 分）；B 节（17-20 分）很好地完成了试题规定的任务包含所有内容要点；使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰；格式与语域恰当贴切对目标读者（即语言接受对象）完全产生了预期的效果第四档：A 节（7—8 分）；B 节（13-16 分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务包含所有内容要点，允许漏掉1、2个次重点；使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言基本准确，只有在试图使用复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误;采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰，组织较严密；格式和语域较恰当对目标读者产生了预期的效果第三档：A 节（5—6 分）；B 节（9-12 分）基本完成了试题规定的任务虽漏掉一些内容，但包含多数内容要点；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求；有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解；采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰；格式和语域基本合理对目标群体基本产生了预期的效果第二档：A节（3—分）；B节（5-8分）未能按要求完成试题规定的任务漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点，写了一些无关内容；语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；未采用恰当的衔接手法，内容缺少连贯性；格式和语域不恰当。
未能清楚地传达信息给读者第一档: A 节（1—2 分）；B 节（1-4 分） 未完成试题规定的任务 明显遗漏主要内容，且有许多不相关的内容； 语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复； 语言错误多，有碍读者对内容的理解，语言运用能力差； 未使用任何衔接手法，内容不连贯，缺少组织、分段； 无格式与语域概念未能传达信息给读者零档：所传达的信息或使用语言太少，无法评价；内容与要求无关或无法辨认范文分析——2009年应用文（9分）Directions:Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. "White pollution,, is still going on.Write a letter to the editor（s） of your local newspaper to1） give your opinions briefly, and2） make two or three suggestions.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming?, instead.Do not write the address. （10 points）Dear Editor,I'm a sincere reader of your newspaper and I like your discussion of the social problems. Now I would like to give some opinions of myself about the "White Pollution”.As we know, regulation was made to solve the problem in June 1st of 2008. The use of plastic bags was restricted in the supermarket and many other shops freely. At the beginning, it was carried on well, but now I found plastic bags were used in some small shops for free or with no pay.I am writing to tell you that we should solve this problem soon with the help of your newspaper. You could make some investigators about it and write some reports of it, so as to appeal to all the people's attentions of our society.Sincerely,Li Ming很好地完成了试题规定的任务 包含所有内容要点； 使用丰富的语法结构和词汇； 语言自然流畅，语法错误极少； 有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰； 格式与语域恰当贴切。
对目标读者（即语言接受对象）完全产生了预期的效果第一、包含所有的内容要点1、 说明写这封信的意图2、 具体说明“白色污染”问题3、 阐明自己的观点、看法，给出两到三条建议第二、使用丰富的语法结构和词汇首段首句：主系表结构二句：介词短语做后置定语精彩词汇:sincere reader第二段：被动语态；it做形式主语*青彩i司）匚：regulation was made, be restricted, for free第三段：宾语从句和介词短语作状语、不定式做目的状语*青彩i司）匚：inform, appeal to, attention 等第三、语言自然流畅，语法错误极少二段第二句The use of plastic bags for free was restricted in the supermarket and many other shops. 二段第三句Found-findWere-are二段第三句Investigators-investigation第四、有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰衔接手段:now, as we know, at the beginning, but, now, so as to第五、格式与语域恰当贴切范文分析——2009年应用文（6分）To whom it may concern:As a student of a university, I want to take this opportunity to express some points about “White Pollution,^.There is no denying that plastic is destroy our environment is we use it excessively. So the government take some means to deal with it. Restrict to use the plastic bags in whole country. But it didn't get successful as we predict. The "White Pollution" is still around our environment in some regions.Takes measures is needed. I want to take some recommends. First and formost, more strength restriction is needed by pollution education. Second, media should spread more information concern. Only in this way can we curb the statement. I'm looking forward your reply.Sincerely yoursLi Ming基本完成了试题规定的任务虽漏掉一些内容，但包含多数内容要点；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求；有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解；采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰；格式和语域基本合理。
对目标群体基本产生了预期的效果There is no denying that plastic is destroy our environment is we use it excessively. So the government take some means to deal with it. Restrict to use the plastic bags in whole country. But it didn't get successful as we predict. The "White Pollution,, is still around our environment in some regions.应该改成：There is no denying that plastic will destroy our environment if we use it excessively. So the government has taken some measures to deal with it: restricting the use of plastic bags in the whole country. But it didn't get successful as we expected. In some regions, "White Pollution,, is still around us.四、 用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰衔接手段：so, but, first and foremost, second五、 格式和语域基本合理To whom it may concern; sincerely yours范文分析——2009年应用文（3分）I am very sorry to trouble with you. But this is a problem annoying with me. It is White Pollution. With the economic growth widely, white pollution become more and more serious. It is harmonious between the men and nature. White pollution destroy some special. More and more similar issue can be read today in newspaper as well as in magazine.The problem can be solved in some ways. First, attitude is everything. We must make people aware of this issue. Second, we must change with ourself. It's essential that we address our problem before looking to others change. Finally, the acts of pollution must be punishment.I'm looking forward to yo。