单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Basic writing skills,Ways of writing,good sentences,2008,年广东省高考 英语基础写作,写作,(,共两节，满分,40,分,),第一节 基础写作,(,共,1,小题，满分,15,分,),你很荣幸地成为,2008,北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍写作内容,请根据以下中文提纲，编写,射击,项目的英语介绍：,背景：射击最初只是生存工具，,19,世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动1896,：第一次成为奥运项目,1904,：中断,1928,：中断,1932,：重回奥运会,1968,：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 现状：稳步发展，,1896,奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有,17,项写作要求,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部内容,评分标准,句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯Shooting,originated,as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,The sport,which,first appeared in 1896,was ever,suspended,during the 1904 and 1928 Games.,It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympics.,However,not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the,Olympic shooting.,With the sport becoming more and more popular,it has grown,steadily,from just 3 shooting,events,at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,广东08高考基础写作范文：,句子表达有何亮点？,Shooting,originated,as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,The sport,which,first appeared in 1896,was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.,It was,only four years before the sport returned to the Olympics.,However,not until,1968,were women first allowed,to compete in the,Olympic shooting.,With the sport becoming,more and more popular,it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,广东08高考基础写作范文：,句子表达有何亮点？,How can you make your sentences better and more beautiful or complex?,1),借助,一句多译方法,2),借助,非谓语动词,做,定语或状语,或,with,结构,3),借助丰富句型：,用好复合从句,(,定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、强调句、倒装句）,方法一,.,一句多译（,students handout,）,这本书花了我,300,元。
I spent 300,yuan,on the book.,I paid 300,yuan,for the book.,It cost me 300,yuan,to buy the book.,The book cost me 300,yuan,.,Practice,一句多译,昨天下午他才来He came here yesterday afternoon,.,It,_,that,he came here.,He _come here _ yesterday afternoon.,It was,not until yesterday afternoon,that,he came here.,_ yesterday afternoon,did he come,here,.,was yesterday afternoon,didnt,until,Not until,Rewrite the sentences,方法二,.,用非谓语动词 使句子简洁高档,（,1,）,Most of the artists,who had been invited,to the party were from South Africa.,Most of the artists,_to the party,were from South Africa,.,（,2,）,Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park,in order that they could keep healthy.,Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park _ _healthy.,invited,to keep,方法二,.,使用非谓语动词,Complete the sentences with,non-predicate,(,非谓语动词,),听到这个消息,他们变的很激动,.,_the news,they,got excited.,2.,尽管,被告知,许多遍,他仍然重复这个错,.,_many times,he,still repeated the mistake.,3.,除非,被邀请,发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默,.,Unless _to speak,you,should keep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,Practice,方法三,.,丰富的句式,Sentence patterns Are Always Useful,The dog jumped into the river,and,pulled the girl to the bank.,It,was the dog,that,jumped into the river and pulled the girl to safety.,The square,is near,the Great Wall Hotel.,Near,the Great Wall Hotel,is the square,.,You will have to work hard for years to speak good English.,It will take years of hard work to,speak good English.,强调句,倒装句,It,作形式主语 句型,1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.,（使用名词性从句）,2.,If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.,（用并列句）,3.He,did not,know what had happened,until,he had read the news in the newspaper,.(,使用强调句型,),_,is that,the little girl knows so many things.,Practice,怎样使用较丰富的句式,It was,_,that,he knew what had happened,.,Study hard,_,youll make rapid progress.,What,surprises him,and,not until he had read the news in the newspaper,Use different ways to describe one sentence.,Make sentences by using non-predicate.,3.Sentence patterns are always useful,Summaries:,背景：,草原上狼群和羊群之间的故事,主要角色喜羊羊,:,聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢，是羊族的小英雄,主要角色灰太狼：,总是带有补丁的黄帽子，它无论怎样总抓不住羊,评价：,童趣但不幼稚，益智却不枯燥,成绩：,至今推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品；获得很多奖项,写作要求,1.,使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。
2.,句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯大试身手：,写作内容：介绍动画片,Lets make preparations.,.,First step:,步骤一：使句子内容完整性将所给信息整合成,5,个句子,这个动画片以羊群和狼群生活的草原作为背景喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊故事童趣但不幼稚，益智却不枯燥由于取得巨大成功，至今,卡通公司,获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏,等,相关产品尝试整合信息,步骤二：找出句子所需的词汇，短语并翻译,Second step:,Useful words and expressions:,以,为背景,草原,羊家族,乐观,有趣,益智,至今,推出,奖项,相关的,be set in/on,grasslands,goat family,optimistic/,hold a positive attitude toward life,funny/interesting,inspiring,up to now,put forward,award,relevant,Lets translate the simple sentences!,.,.,Translate the following sentences:,这个动画片以羊群和狼群生活的草原作为背景。
喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊故事童趣但不幼稚，益智却不枯燥由于取得巨大成功，至今卡通公司获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品尝试整合信息,这个动画片,(cartoon series),以羊群和狼群生活的草原作为背景,(,is set on,),1.,This cartoon series,is set on,the grasslands,where,the goats and wolves live.,故事童趣但不幼稚,(childish),，启智却不枯燥,arebut not,）,2.,The stories,are funny but not,childish,inspiring,but not boring.,（使用,定语从句,）,喜羊羊,(,Pleasant Goat,),是羊族的小英雄Pleasant Goat is,a little hero in the goat family,.,喜羊羊,(,Pleasant Goat,),聪明伶俐，勇敢乐观Pleasant Goat is clever,brave and,holds a positive attitude toward his life.,合并上面两个句子。