十一、 高考图画类写作高分技巧,【技巧点拨】 . 图画类写作的命题特点 图画类作文包括图画和图表两类, 也是高考作文 常考的热门题型之一图画类书面表达主要以图画为 载体、附带少量文字提示或说明, 要求考生从观察入手,通过对画面意思的理解, 发挥想象力, 按照一定的要求把图画内容准确、生动地加工成书面语言这种形式有利于培养和提高学生的观察能力、推理能力和语言组织能力图画类书面表达提供的情景有单幅图画、双幅图画或连环图画, 多配有简洁的文字以说明图画或图片的主题或说明试题的写作要求具有以下命题特点: (1)考查形式为看图叙事和看图说理两种2)图画表达的重点突出、细节清楚, 考生很容易形成连贯的思维, 便于展开写作3)所选材料充满时代气息, 内容贴近中学生的生活实际4)所选话题突出中国优秀传统文化, 反映主流价值观, 彰显正能量 图画类写作的解题步骤 1. 议论文漫画 看图说理要求考生叙述图画所包含的信息, 然后加以评论; 有时候要通过几幅相关图画来说明某个问题或者得出某个结论看图说理要对图画的寓意进行阐述, 揭示图画的主题 写作时可遵循以下步骤:,(1)阅读图画要读懂图画, 联想其背景, 并了解其深层的含义。
(2)描述图画简要描述图画的内容, 为下文做好铺垫3)说理议论要联系现实, 说清道理针对图画进行联想, 挖掘图中隐含的有教育意义的内容, 联系现实生活进行说理, 对人能够起到激励作用此部分是文章的重点, 切忌轻描淡写4)升华结尾结尾要言简意赅, 画龙点睛, 起到升华的作用 (5)锤炼语言使用高级词汇和句式, 恰当运用连接词语与过渡句, 增加文章的得分点2. 说明类图表 (1)开门见山点明图表所反映的主题 常用的词汇有: table, chart, figure, graph, describe, tell, show等2)分析数据间的主要差距及趋势, 然后描写 在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时, 可采用分类式对比以表明主题, 并阐述必要的理由, 要注意层次表述清楚 (3)归纳总结或谈谈自己的看法有时这一步也可以不要, 看具体情况而定3. 记叙文漫画 看图叙事作文要求考生根据所提供的一幅或几幅图的信息写一篇短文, 体裁一般为记叙文要求考生仔细观察图画, 弄清故事的背景和过程, 抓住记叙文的六要素: who, when, where, what, why, how考生要仔细分析人物与空间的关系, 画面与画面之间的关系, 并作适当补充, 增加一些必要的过渡词句, 使故事的叙述合理。
具体做法如下:,(1)读懂图画把图画展示的时间、地点、人物、事件等有机地组合起来, 使之成为内容连贯完整的故事或事件 (2)提炼要点每一幅图都有一个要点和若干细节, 写作时, 考生可先列出各图的要点, 然后将所列要点用完整、地道的英语句子表达出来之后, 将要点和细节融为一体3)连句成文在理清句子之间的关系后, 选用恰当的过渡词, 把句子连接成文要注意上下段之间的逻辑关系, 恰当运用段落首尾衔接语句, 使文段衔接自然, 行文流畅 (4)丰富语言恰当运用并列句、复合句、非谓语动词、强调句、倒装句等, 长短句交错使用, 给读者以层次感, 避免行文单调考题】 仔细观察图画, 根据所看到的图 画, 描述其所表达的内容, 并发表你 的感想 注意: 词数100个左右审题谋篇】,【遣词造句】 1. 这幅图画描述了水被污染的严重性 一般表达: The picture shows the water is polluted seriously. 高级表达: (祈使句+and+陈述句; 感叹句) _, and youll understand _ _.,how,Look at the picture,seriously the water is polluted,2. 我们都知道水很重要。
一般表达: We all know water is very important. 高级表达: (定语从句; 固定短语) _, water _ _our lives.,As is known to all,plays a very important part,in,【连句成篇】 Look at the picture, and youll understand how seriously the water is polluted. The two fish have to drink mineral water and pure water to keep alive. Seeing this, we cant help asking such a question: What will happen if theres no drinking water available for us?,As is known to all, water plays a very important part in our lives. We cant live without water. Therefore, we must pay much attention to environmental protection, especially water protection in order to live in harmony with nature. Otherwise, well regret for what weve done sooner or later. After all, our water resources are very limited.,【高考预测】世纪金榜导学号79060272 请阅读右面图画, 按要求用英语 写一篇词数为100左右的短文。
内容要求: 1. 描述画面; 2. 谈 谈个人感想 参考词汇: 烟斗 tobacco pipe,_ _ _ _ _ _,【参考范文】 Uncle Wang, a heavy smoker, has been smoking for over 30 years. Recently, he has been suffering from serious lung diseases. He was warned by the doctor of the harm of smoking to his health. He realized that it was high time that he quitted smoking. One day, he had just lit his tobacco pipe when he suddenly thought,of his promise to himself and threw his tobacco pipe out of the window of the second floor. But before everyone could realize what had happened, he rushed out, dashing down the stairs and catching his tobacco pipe successfully, feeling really relieved. Actions speak louder than words. Only by putting thoughts into practice can one achieve his goal.,。