2019 年江西省中考英语满分作文 本卷完形填空A 文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题 文章 的最后指出 We need to judge people by what they do not what they look like 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗 对此观点你有何看法 请根据下 面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法 阐述理由 并举例说明 写作要点 I Your opinion agree disagree 2 Reasons looks personality 品性 ability 3 An example yourself a person around you a famous person 要求 1 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点 条理清楚 行文连贯 可适当发 挥 2 如举自己或身边的人作为例子 不能出现真实的人名和地名 3 词数不少于80 满分作文 1 分析 高分句型一 Thanks to the kind and hard working people our society is becoming better and better 多亏了善良和勤劳的人民 我们的社会变得越来越好 thanks to 多亏了 better and better 越来越好 比较级 and 比较级表示越来越 高分句型二 He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him 他为我们的社会做了那么多 我们都钦佩他 so that 如此 以至于 解答 I agree with the opinion 我的观点 Compared with looks personality and ability are more important Because we can t change our looks easily but we can decide and control what we do Thanks to the kind and hard working people our society is becoming better and better 高分句型一 原因 For example Ma Yun a well known businessman doesn t look handsome but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him 高分句型二 Because of his contibution to our society we even think he looks so cool 例子 So let s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attention to our looks 总结全文 点评 能够根据提示进行书面表达 能够围绕主题准确使 用一定的语法 词汇 短语和句型等 清楚连贯地表达自己 的思想 进而完成写作任务 满分作文 2 I agree with the opinion Compared with looks personality and ability are more important Because we can t change our looks easily but we can decide and control what we do Thnaks to the kind and hard working people our society is becoming better and better For example Ma Yun a well known businessman doesn t look handsome but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him Because of his contribution to our society we even think he looks so cool So let s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks 满分作文 3 In my opinion I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like A person s personality and ability are very important but for some jobs looks are also important such as an actor or an actress a waiter or a waitress or even a teacher Because it s enjoyable to see a good looking person For example my teachers in my class all teach very well and they are kind and helpful All of us like them But the most popular teacher is my English teacher because she looks really beautiful She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face So let s try our best to improve our ability personality and looks 。