1).属于记叙文体裁2).基本类型:记人,叙事,写景3).常见高考书面表达题:介绍同学,朋友,老师,父母,名人等等4).记叙方法:顺叙,倒叙,插叙5).注意事项:选材代表性;精炼,感人,不拖泥带水;注意5W1H;人称时态6).常见段落结构:主题句发展句结论句 一、人物简介的写作步骤:1Birthdayandbirthplace2Familybackground3Educationbackground4Bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5Evaluation 二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子:1.Birthdayandbirthplace:was/wereborninoneg.ShewasborninPolandonNov.7,1867. 2.Familybackgroundwas/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamilyhis/herfamilywassopoorthathis/herfatherwasverystrictwithhimthesonofapoorfamilywhenhewasasmallboy/youngasachild/asaboyof15duringhis/herchildhoodspendhischildhoodinliveahappy/hardlifeeg.AbrahamLincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.Bornofapoorclerksfamily,CharlesDickenshadlittleschooling.3. Education background beadmittedtocollegegraduatefromdepartmentofuniversitywhenatcollege,hemajoredinreceiveadoctorsdegreegoabroadforfurtherstudies4.Bigeventsinoneslife beinterestedin/befondofworkhardatserveasdevotehislifetime/himselftoconcentratehimselftodoresearchabout/intomakeuponesmindtodosth.dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverancebestrictinsth.haveawayofdoingsthtryonesbesttodosth.encouragesbtodofightfor,giveuponeslifeforsb/sthwinaprize/thefirstprizeincompetitionreceive/obtain/wintheNobelPrizeforbegoodatdowellinbecrazyaboutenjoy makerapidprogressinsetanewworldrecordofequaltheworldrecordwin(won)agold/silver/bronzemedalbeselectedto/becomeamemberofstudyhardtrainhardgothroughhardshipovercomemanydifficultieshaveagift/talentforlanguage,etconeofthebest/mostimportantsetagoodexampleforamodelteacher/workerberespectedbyeveryonespeak/thinkhighlyofbehonoredas(anexcellentathlete)hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccessheistheprideofChina.Hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecity5.Evaluation5.EvaluationmakegreatcontributionstoConsistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionatChampionshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedLeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleadermakegreatcontributionstoConsistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionatChampionshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedLeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleader5.Evaluation 6. 描写人物外貌和性格特征good-lookingfunny-lookingugly-lookingordinary-lookingwhite-hairedwarm-heartedkind-heartedabsent-mindedbad-temperednear-sightedfar-sightedastrongwilltallshortprettynaughtysmartwisebrightdiligentlazyhealthyhumorouscharmingattractivetalkativeconfidenceindependentpatience【基础写作实例剖析:】 你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作。
对方要求你用英语写一篇短文(只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容),介绍自己的基本情况短文应包括下表所列全部内容 姓名李华华出生年月1977年2月出生地辽辽宁大连连学历历19841990 光明小学19901996 大连连市第六中学所学主要课课程 语语文、数学、英语语、物理、化学、电脑电脑特长长英语语、电脑电脑 (去年在全校电脑竞赛电脑竞赛 中获获第一名)业业余爱爱好游泳、滑冰、集邮邮、流行音乐乐【实例剖析:】【写作分析】通过认真审题,根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点: 文体:记叙文 人称: 根据内容可确定本文人称为第一人称要点:李华的出生年月及地点;学历;所学主要课程;特长;获奖情况;业余爱好实例剖析:】 短语及句型:be born in, after that, be good at/ do well in, graduate, the main subjects, win first prize, enjoy doing【One possible version:】 My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven and I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990, after that I went to No. 6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer, in which English and computer are my favourite, furthermore, last year I won first prize in the school computer competition. When I am free, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps, and my favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter. 范例:请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章。
出 生1923年5月,香港个人经经历历1、7岁丧岁丧 父,家境贫贫困;2、1955年后,经营经营 建筑、航运、石油等,成为为国内外知名人士;3、改革开放 (the reform and open policy) 以来,先后捐资资支持教育、文化、体育、和福利事业业款项项达100多亿亿港元影 响成为为“感动动中国”的人物写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容要点分析: 1.名人介绍,2.采用第三人称将提供的信息整合3.以一般过去时态为主 Onepossibleversion:InMay1923,DrHuoYingdongwasbornfromapoorfamilyinHongKong. Attheageoften,hisfatherdied. After1955,hewasengagedinarchitecture,shipping,petroleumandbecameafamouspersonathomeandabroad.Sincethebeginningofthereformandopenpolicy,hehaddonatedover10billiondollarstosponsoreducation,culture,sports,andpublicwelfareinMainland.Hehasmadegreatcontributionstoconstructingandbenefitingourcountry,whichmakeshimaMovingChinahero.2006年高考英语书面表达试题北京卷国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动,要求报名者提交英文个人简历。
假设你是王姗,请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历Onepossibleversion:ImWangShan,agirlofsixteen,presentlyattendingBeijingYangguangMiddle.Ilikemusic,especiallyclassicalmusicandImalsointerestedinphotographybecauseitallowsmetorecordthebeautifulmomentsinmylifeandthankstomyhobbies,Ivemademanyfriends.Infact,IlikemeetingnewpeopleandenjoytalkingwiththembecauseIbelieveweallneedhelpfromeachother,Iappreciatefriends”help,andIamwilingtohelpanyoneinneed.Ilovelife;IloveMotherNature,alsoIlovepeace,onthecontrary,Ihateanyformofviolence.IwouldliketojointhePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampsincetherewouldbeagreatopportunitytomakefriendswithyoungpeoplefromdifferentcountriesandlearnabouttheircultures.假定你是李华, 亚洲冬季运动会将在你居。