感知文体常识建建议信信 建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议或者忠告的信件建议信有可能写给个人,就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务提出建议或者忠告建议信通常简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服性牢记写作素材(一)增色词汇1.suggestionn.建议2.offersomeadvice提供建议3.make/givesomesuggestions提出建议4.havetroubleindoingsth做某事有困难5.beaddictedto沉溺于6.makeadifferencetosb对某人有用7.may/mightaswell不妨8.takesthintoconsideration考虑某事(二)精彩句型1.引入话题Iknowyouhavetroublein.afterreadingyourletter.Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/offeryousomeadvice.在读了你的信后,我知道你在上有困难我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告Youveaskedmeforadvicewithregardto/regarding.andIlltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.关于你向我征求建议,在此,我会尽力提出一些有用的建议。
Imverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon.Hereareafewsuggestions.我很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于下面是我的一些建议2.介绍详情、说明原因、提出建议Inmyopinion/Personally/AsfarasImconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould.我认为如果你能可能会更有利Ifyouwant.,.wouldbethebestchoice.如果你想,将是最好的选择Idliketosuggestthat./MayIsuggestthat.?/Inmyopinion./Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat.我建议3.希望建议被采纳Ihopemysuggestionscanmakeadifferencetoyou.我希望我的建议对你有用Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些提议/建议对你很实用/有用/有帮助。
Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.我相信你会考虑我的建议Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.如果你能考虑一下我的建议我将非常感激示例写作步骤【写作要求写作要求】假定你是李华,得知你的英国笔友Cindy经常不吃早餐,因而胃病发作住院治疗请根据下面的写作提示,用英语给她写一封邮件内容包括:1.陈述不吃早饭的危害;2.劝她培养健康的生活方式注意:1.词数80左右;2.请在相应位置作答审题谋篇审题谋篇】体裁建议信人称第一、二人称时态一般现在时话题健康的生活方式框架引入话题:就健康的生活方式提出建议介绍细节:不吃早餐的危害表达希望:【遣词造句遣词造句】1.词汇担心的有用的精力充沛的对有害由引起锻炼不吃早餐worriedusefulenergeticbeharmfultoresultfromtakeexerciseskipbreakfast2.句式(1)要点翻译得知你在住院,我很担心beworriedtodo)I_youareinhospital.你不吃早餐而引起了胃疼。
Youhaveastomachache_yourskippingbreakfast.(which引导的定语从句)你没有按时吃早餐的习惯,这对你的健康有害harmful)Youdonthavethehabitofhavingbreakfastontime,and_yourhealth.amworriedtoknowwhichresultsfromitisharmfulto每天进行足够的体育锻炼将帮助你保持精力充沛和免于疾病的困扰动词-ing形式作主语)_everydaywillhelpyoustayenergeticandfreefromdisease.(2)句式升级把句和升级为含有原因状语从句和动词-ing形式作状语的句子TakingenoughphysicalexerciseIamworriedtoknowyoureinhospitalbecauseyouhaveastomachacheresultingfromyourskippingbreakfast.把句升级为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句用Itiswise.和非限制性定语从句升级句Youdonthavethehabitofhavingbreakfastontime,whichisharmfultoyourhealth.Itiswisetotakeenoughphysicalexerciseeveryday,whichwillhelpyoustayenergeticandfreefromdisease.【妙笔成篇妙笔成篇】DearCindy,Imworriedtoknowyoureinhospitalbecauseyouhaveastomachacheresultingfromyourskippingbreakfast.Idliketoofferyousomeadvice.Asweallknow,itsimportanttohaveagoodbreakfastthatconsistsofgrain,fruitandvegetables.However,youdonthavethehabitofhavingbreakfastontime,whichisharmfultoyourhealth.Ithinkyoushoulddevelopahealthywayoflifefromnowon.Itswisetotakeenoughphysicalexerciseeveryday,whichwillhelpyoustayenergeticandfreefromdisease.Ihopeyouwillfindmyadviceuseful.Yours,LiHua针对训练假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike就读的学校要举办一年一度的“中华文化节”,他来信向你征求活动意见,请你写封回信,内容包括:1.写作目的;2.活动建议;3.表示祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.请在相应位置作答DearMike,Sodelightedtolearnthatyourschoolisgoingtoholdtheannual“ChineseCultureFestival”,Imonlytoowillingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Firstly,itwouldbeagoodideatoholdacompetitionaboutChinesepoetryrecitation,throughwhichstudentscanhaveabetterunderstandingofthelanguage.Inaddition,givingaspeechconcerningtraditionalChinesefestivalsisalsoabetterchoice,ascustomsandtraditionswillundoubtedlyattractmanystudents.Imfullyconvincedthatyourfestivalwillbeajoyfulandfruitfulactivity,whichwillspreadbrilliantChineseculturetoalargerextent.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua。