Unit 1单元话题满分范文必背(名校最新真题)1．假如你叫李华，新学期开学两个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受交流内容要求包括以下要点：1、校园环境和教学设施；2、师生给你的印象；3、给学校的两点建议注意：1、词数 100 词左右；2、信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数；3、内容可适当发挥，要注意行文连贯Hello, everyone,I’m honored to stand here to tell you something about my school life in the past two months………….【答案】One possible version:Hello, everyone,I’m honored to stand here to tell you something about my school life in the past two months.Our school is very beautiful with a woody garden, where we can take a walk, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery. The advanced equipment in the classroom is just brilliant and it helps our teachers make their classes lively and interesting. My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them. Fortunately, my teachers and classmates are all friendly and enthusiastic. I have already made several new friends here. However, the food in the cafeteria is very poor and I hope it can get improved. Besides, we are extremely busy doing homework every day. How I wish we could have more time for physical exercise! Thank you!【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。
详解】第一步：审题审题的目的是获取重要信息通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息第一，假如你叫李华，新学期开学两个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受交流内容要求包括以下要点：1、校园环境和教学设施；2、师生给你的印象；3、给学校的两点建议第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称第三，时态为一般现在时第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量这篇写作段落数量为三段第一段，校园环境和教学设施；第二段，师生给你的印象；给学校的两点建议第三段，表示感谢第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: a woody garden，take a walk，breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery，advanced equipment, keep up with, friendly and enthusiastic, get improved，physical exercise第四步：确定较为高级的句子: Our school is very beautiful with a woody garden, where we can take a walk, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery. My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Fortunately，However, Besides第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰使用了较为高级的句式:where引导的定语从句 Our school is very beautiful with a woody garden, where we can take a walk, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery. so…that 引导的结果状语从句My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力2．假设你是李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件1.学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；2.多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。
注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节提示词： adapt to 适应___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Susan，I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice. First, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours，Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。
给她回复邮件提出建议全文以一般现在时和二三人称为主详解】第1步：审题根据提示可知全文是一封电子邮件，给Susan回邮件提出适应新生活的具体建议全文以一般现在时和二三人称为主第2步：组织要点1.学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；2.多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词adapt to，take one’s advice，communicate with other，、make some friends，take an active part in all kinds of activities写作时注意邮件的格式和惯用语第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板使用了较多的高级词汇，如having trouble (in) doing sth、communicate with other、forget your loneliness等等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句……which will help to make life more interesting.同时文章的一些串联成分，如first of all、secondly、thirdly等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。
以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力3．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友John对刚进入的高中生活不太适应，请你写信告诉他你的想法，内容要点如下：1.鼓励其广交朋友；2.积极参加体育活动，强身健体；3.努力奋斗进入理想大学注意：1.可加入一些细节，使文章更加通顺合理；2.词数100左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数）Dear John,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours。