记叙文写作技巧 [大学生英文记叙文写作] 记叙文篇1 A Witness of a Theft Incident Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Witness of a Theft Incident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)描述你在公共场所目睹的一次扒窃事务 2)责问这种不文明的现象并提出解决建议 【思路点拨】 此题属于提纲式文字命题提纲第1点要求描述一次事务的经过,提纲第2点要求对事务进展评论,由此可判定本文应为记叙文 依据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:交待事务背景;描述扒窃事务的经过和最终结果;责问这种不文明的现象,提出解决建议。
【参考范文】 A Witness of a Theft Incident Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home. The thief was so rampant that it left me a deep impression It happened during the rush hour, when many people were buying tickets at the subway station. After a woman bought her ticket, she put her purse back into her bag and ready to leave, when a middle-aged man brushed past her muttering Excuse me. She didnt feel anything unusual and went into the station. Indeed, her purse had been stolen by that man. To our surprise, the thief seemed not to be nervous at all and even began to look others up and down. Maybe he was searching for the next target. At that time some passers-by, including me, witnessed the process. But unfortunately, no one dared to warn that woman。
This incident makes me feel ashamed and leaves me in deep thought. The pickpockets have posed a great threat to residents property. Undoubtedly, it is urgent to take actions to prevent such social evils. However, it cannot only depend on the police only. Instead, it needs our common efforts. We shouldnt keep silent any more. We should be aware that our forces are far beyond those thieves 记叙文篇2 A Food Poisoning Accident Last month, I witnessed a food poisoning accident happening to my classmates. At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent. Though finally they got out of danger, this accident is still vivid in my mind. It was one of my classmates Julies birthday that day. In order to celebrate it, her roommates bought a big birthday cake for her from a supermarket nearby. They shared the cake happily. However, after a while, all of them felt abdominal pain, nausea and dizziness. Two of them even cannot stand up because of great pain. We rushed to send them to the hospital. It turned out that the cake they ate had expired its guarantee period. Fortunately, due to timely treatment, they all recovered very soon. However, this accident leaves me pondering. I think it is very urgent to take effective measures to improve food safety. Firstly, the government should strengthen supervision and administration on food safety. More importantly, to those immoral businessmen, more strict punishment should be given. [4]Besides, we consumers should be more careful in buying food.Only in this way can we make sure that no such accident happens again. 记叙文篇3 One Hundred and Six Pens While I was reading, the telephone rang. Hello, this is He Yu, When do you plan to see your students with me? The other side of the phone asked. Well, let us make it at Friday if its ok for you! Ok, see you that day. Having hanged up the phone, I began to recall my days of five months internship. Two years ago, I took the position of the grade four practice English teacher in The Quan Nan Third Primary School. The moment I left, I promised to the dejectedly crying students to come back to see them. Now the day came. What should I bring to them? I considered this question r with a pen twirled around my fingers. Pen? A scene rose before my eyes that those children hold already-short pencils scratching on their papers . Pens were exactly what they needed. It was the best choice. So I went to a shop to choose 106 pens for my 106 students. I began the trip with a heavy bag of pens. Upon my arrival at school, dozens of students swarmed forward and I was soon crowded around by the bouncing boys and girls. Miss Xiao, you finally come, we have been looking forward to your coming all the time! said Li Yan, a well-performed girl. Nice to meet you again! I greeted to them. Nice to meet you, too! A voice came from the corner of the class. It was Miao Chen, a boy whose uncontrollable behaviors had always driven me crazy. I was surprised at his reaction for my appearance. Oh, your English is much better than before! He has been learning to learn English since you left! A boy called out. He once said he missed you! Another boy shouted. The crowded exploded with laughter. Miao Chen turned aside to hide his blushes. I came to him and put my hand on his shoulder, I believe you are a good boy. He raised his head and smiled brightly. This Time I bring some presents for you. On hearing the news, the children could not help clapping hands and bouncing around. There were 10。