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1、改错“1. The bar chart illustrates that the trend of call types in the united kingdom for 8 years from 1995 to 2002.2. The bar chart compares the figures in terms of minutes spent on telephone calls, splitted into three types.3. The bar chart gives information about telephone calls. It is in three type
2、s Local, National & International and Mobile call minutes from year 1995 to 2002 in UK.4. The graph compares the total using time of 3 call types in the UK over a 7-year period from 1995.5. The bar chart presents the amount of phone calls in billion of minutes make in the UK over a period of seven y
3、ears into the categories of local, national/international and mobile phone calls.ANSWERS FROM SIMON:The main problem seems to be that people are making the sentence too difficult. If you read my introduction (at the bottom of the lesson), its easier and clearer than the students sentences. Just keep
4、 your introduction as simple as possible!Here are the problems:1. The main problem is the use of the word that. Just write The bar chart illustrates the amount of time / the trend etc.2. The main mistake is the word splitted. The past and past participle are split and split.3. The main problem is th
5、e phrase It is in three types Local. I dont know what the word it refers to.4. The phrase the total using time of 3 call types isnt right.5. Problems with make and into the categories.Posted by: Simon |Friday, February 19, 2016 at 11:27FROM SIMON (continued):Here are my suggestions:1) The bar chart
6、illustrates trends in different types of phone call in the United Kingdom over 8 years from 1995 to 2002.2) The bar chart compares figures for UK phone calls in terms of minutes spent on three types of call (between1995 and 2002).3) The bar chart gives information about three types of telephone call
7、, namely local, national/international and mobile calls, in the UK between 1995 and 2002.4) The chart compares the total number of minutes of three types of phone call made in the UK over a 7-year period from 1995.5) The bar chart shows the amount of time spent on three types of phone call, in billi
8、ons of minutes, in the UK over a period of seven years.有关电话的短语： amount of time the time spent on in terms of throughout the period the period shown a dramatic increase in increased steadily reached a peak the figure for the rise inCollocations related to the phone calls topic: local calls national c
9、alls international calls fixed line / landline calls mobile calls overall usage user minutes填空：Use these words:at, in, on, to, for, by1. the amount of time spent _ people in the UK _ three different types of phone call2. calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, _ terms of overal
10、l usage3. the figures _ all three types of phone call increased4. the amount of time spent _ local calls using landlines had reached a peak _ 90 billion minutes5. the rise _ the other two types of phone call continued6. the figure _ mobiles rose _ around 45 billion minutesby, on2. in3. for4. on, at5
11、. in6. for, to练习题The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.Heres my suggested outline for a 4-paragraph report:1. Introduction:rewrite the question statement in your own words.2. Overview:point out whic
12、h category was highest in each year, which was lowest, and which saw the biggest changes.3. Details:compare the 3 categories in 1995, then say what happened up until 1999.4. Details:notice what happened to local calls from 1999 onwards, and contrast this with the other 2 categories. Finish with a co
13、mparison of the figures in 2002.开头段：The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002.It is clear that calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown.
14、The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes.Heres my full answer for the phone calls bar chart inthis lesson:The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call betw
15、een 1995 and 2002.It is clear that calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes.In 1995, people in the UK used fixed lines for a total of just over 70 billion minutes for local calls, and about half of that amount of time for national or international calls. By contrast, mobile phones were only used for around 4 billion minutes. Over the following four years, the fi
