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1、第四编缺乏衔接过渡的文章,就好比一串断了线的珍珠,每个词句虽光彩夺目,拿出来却七零八落,不堪受用。要想成就一篇美文,光靠一个个华丽词句的堆砌不行,还需要穿珠之线,这个线就是衔接过渡。 增分技法(一)过渡自然的对比用语比较和对照法是英语作文的基本写作方法之一。在这类作文的表达中,要使作文连贯、流畅,有条理,灵活运用对比类过渡连接词至关重要,过渡词也是信息词,能较好地表明作者想比较或对照的意图。对比用语大致分为两类:(一)相似的比较。常用的有for one thing .for another (一方面另一方面),in the same way (以相同的方式,同样地),just as (正如),
2、similarly (相似地,类似地),equally (同样地)。如:I think it is a kind of winwin activity.For one thing, I can help take care of the children.For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.我认为这是一种双赢的活动。一方面,我可以帮助照顾孩子。另外一方面,我可以提高我的英语水平,结交更多的朋友,并丰富我的暑假生活
3、。应用体验1翻译句子我想尽力做得最好,但同时我也得考虑费用。I_am_trying_to_do_what_is_best,_but_equally_Ive_got_to_consider_the_cost.正如单个单词可以改变一句话的意思,单个句子也可以改变一段话的意思。Just_as_a_single_word_can_change_the_meaning_of_a_sentence,_a_single_sentence_can_change_the_meaning_of_a_paragraph.那么我们如何解决这个问题呢?就我个人而言,骑自行车是一个好的解决方式。一方面,自行车不需要任何汽
4、油,它们是节能的。另一方面,自行车是环保的,因为它们不会排放废气。另外,骑自行车是我们锻炼的好方式并且它有益于我们的健康。How_can_we_solve_the_problem_then?_As_far_as_Im_concerned,_riding_bicycles_is_a_good_solution._For_one_thing,_bicycles_dont_need_any_petrol_and_they_are_energysaving._For_another,_bicycles_are_environmentally_friendly_because_they_wont_giv
5、e_off_waste_gas._Whats_more,_riding_bicycles_is_a_good_way_for_us_to_exercise_and_it_is_beneficial_to_our_health.(二)还有一种对比是表示相反的意思:如:on the other hand (另外一方面),on the contrary (相反),compared with/to (与比较),in comparison with (与比较),in contrast (to)(和对比),instead (代替),while (而;然而),unlike (不像),however (然而;
6、仍然),whereas (然而;反之),yet (然而)。As a citizen, we mustnt do anything to harm our city.On the contrary, we should obey the city rules and protect the city environment.作为一个公民,我们不能做损害我们的城市的事。相反,我们应该遵守城市规则,保护城市环境。However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a
7、 history of 100 years, and is wellknown at home and abroad.然而,其他学生反对这一观点,认为建于1906年的北京动物园有着100年的历史,并且享誉国内外。应用体验2翻译句子我可不像你,我不太会跳舞。Unlike_you,_I_am_not_a_great_dancer.与此相反,其他人主张广泛阅读。In_contrast,_others_insist_on_reading_extensively.他们的批评并没有使我感到气馁,相反,我比以前更加努力了。Their_criticism_did_not_discourage_me.On_th
8、e_contrary,_I_worked_even_harder.有些学生认为中学生应该做社会实践。然而,其他人的想法不同,认为他们太年轻,不能融入这个世界。Some_students_hold_the_view_that_middle_school_students_should_do_social_practice.However,_others_think_differently,_believing_that_they_are_too_young_to_fit_in_with_the_world.专题过关训练翻译句子1她学习英语有困难,然而她学习努力,进步很快。She_has_diff
9、iculty_in_learning_English._However,_she_works_hard_and_is_making_rapid_progress.2我们的生活也是如此,一个人不和他人合作,仅靠自己是不可能轻易地完成一项富有挑战性的任务的。Similarly_in_our_life,_an_individual_person_cannot_easily_carry_out_a_challenging_task_on_his_own_without_joining_hands_with_others.3首先,和传统的购物相比,它很方便。To begin with, compared
10、 with traditional shopping, its very convenient.4令人惊讶的是,萨莉不像以前的老师一样被驱逐出去;相反,她赢得了学生的尊重。Surprisingly,_Sally_was_not_driven_out_like_the_former_teachers;_instead,_she_won_respect_from_the_students.5一方面,我可以了解一周发生的重要事情;另一方面,世界知名人士的成功故事也深深地吸引了我,这让我明白一个道理:人人贡献一份力量,世界会变得更美好。For_one_thing,_I_can_learn_all_im
11、portant_things_that_have_happened_during_the_week.For_another,_equally_attractive_are_the_success_stories_of_worldfamous_people,_which_help_me_understand_how_a_person_can_work_hard_to_make_the_world_a_better_place.增分技法(二)条理分明的时序用语阅卷老师看文章一般要通过一些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚、自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面的时序用语加入到你的几个要点前就OK
12、了。常见的时序用语有:1表示“现在”的有:nowadays/now (现在), at present (目前), recently (最近)。Nowadays its acceptable for women to be ambitious.如今,女性胸怀大志也能被接受。2表示“首先,第一”的有:first/firstly (第一), to begin/start with (首先), in the first place/first of all (首先)。(2017天津高考书面表达)Firstly, I am expected to know about the polite langua
13、ge related to my service.首先,我必须知道有关服务的礼貌用语。To begin with, your brother is qualified for that kind of demanding job.首先,你的弟弟足够胜任这样高强度的工作。3表示“后来,不久,然后”的有:after (在之后), afterwards/later on (后来), after that (后来), after a while (一会儿之后), before long (不久), shortly after (之后;立即), since (自从)。Several years afte
14、r theyd split up, they met again by chance in Paris.他们分手几年以后在巴黎又偶然相遇。应用体验1完成片段首先,我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好,然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘,之后我扫地、拖地。Firstly,_I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After_that,_
15、I swept and mopped the floors.4表示“在此期间,同时”的有:meanwhile/meantime (在此期间), in the meantime (在此期间), at the same time (与此同时), while (当的时候)。At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.就在这时,我的父母回来了,他们非常惊讶地看到所有房间都很整洁,地板闪闪发亮。They will be here soon.In the meantime, lets have coffee.他们很快就会回来。在此期间,我们喝杯咖啡吧。5表示“最后”的有:finally/lastly(最后), in the end/eventually/at last (终于)。We were thinking about going to Switzerland, but in the end we went to Austria.我们一直打算去瑞士,可最后却去了奥地利。应用体验2翻译句子最近,我们班热烈讨论了北京动物园是否应该搬出城市。Recently,_our_class_have_had_a_