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1、see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, a
2、nd headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green p
3、ine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out i
4、n front of my horse. Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark.,答案 写作提示 根据续写第一段所给的段首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.可知,本段 应该主要描写突然出现一只小兔子之后的故事。按照常理,突然出现的兔子一般会让马受 惊。故本段应该描写马受惊后发生的事。 从第二段的段首句We had no idea where we were and it got dark.可以看出,作者和父亲迷路 了。那么本段的故事主要
5、根据迷路之后的情况展开。本段的主要内容应该是从迷路到回家 的故事。 写作时一定要注意以下两点: 第一,从本故事的发展来看,第一段是马受惊后发生的事,而第二段是迷路之后的故事,因此要 注意人物心理和情感的描写。 第二,注意两段的逻辑关系。要注意第一段的内容,尤其是段尾的内容和第二段段首句之间的 衔接要合理,即第一段的最后一定要有迷路的情节设计。,One possible version: Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frighte
6、ned my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seei
7、ng I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost. Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didnt know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in,such a dark situation. Just
8、 as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul,” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride! 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 in vain 白费力气 previous adj. 之前的 at the point of desperation 将要绝望之际 a
9、 faint voice 微弱的声音 2.出彩结构 Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off.(部分倒装) What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.(what引导主语从句),Writing 2(2017浙江11月) 阅读下面短文. 根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 A Vacation with My Mother I had an interesting childho
10、od. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few wee
11、ks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitc
12、ases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and trav-,elers checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was dri
13、ving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left beh
14、ind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent th
15、ere? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the
16、next town.,注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后. 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.,答案 Paragraph 1： The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surpassingly beautifulthe warm sunshine,
