《中考作文总复习3.15精讲》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《中考作文总复习3.15精讲（27页珍藏版）》请在金锄头文库上搜索。
1、,Writing （中考作文总复习）,Xinchang Chengguan Middle School,Alice Yuan,patient,kind,A good teacher,friendly,humorous,strict,hard-working,knowledgeable,caring,（2015年绍兴市中考作文）你校英语社团正在开展主题为“What should a good teacher be like?”的讨论，为此采访了一些学生和家长，请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并阐述你的观点。,注意:（）文章必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； （）你的观点至少两条；
2、 （）词数：； （）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。,Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like., 1 审(Analyze) 仔细审题，圈出要求。,体裁： 时态：,话题式作文,一般现在时,（2015年绍兴市作文）你校英语社团正在开展主题为“What should a good teacher be like?”的讨论，为此采访了一些学生和家长，请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并阐述你的观点。,Students and parents have dif
3、ferent opinions about what a good teacher should be like., 2 列 (List) 列出提纲，定好框架。,Ending 结尾,Beginning 开头,Body 正文,1) Students opinions 2) Parents opinions,3) My opinions,作文框架, 3 .连(Connect) 找出要点，连词成句。,get on well with,lively and interesting,knowledge/ knowledgeable,be strict with students, good teache
4、r should get on well with students.,His class should be lively and interesting., good teacher should be knowledgeable.,He should be strict with his students., good teacher should be patient and care about students.,patient,care about,Students and parents have different opinions about what a good tea
5、cher should be like.,耐心,关心学生,Students think,Parents think,I think,Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like. Students think a good teacher should get on well with his students. His class should be lively and interesting. Parents think a good teacher should
6、 be knowledgeable. He should be strict with the students. I think a good teacher should be patient and care about his students.,hat should a good teacher be like?,3.词汇项目有限,4. 词数不符要求,1.句式单一,2.行文不够连贯,Not bad!,连句成文,三、高级 句型,二、 丰富的词汇和语言,被动语态,复合句,一、合理的连接词/过渡语,固定结构,Students and parents have different opini
7、ons about what a good teacher should be like. Students think a good teacher should get on well with his students. _, his class should be lively and interesting. _, parents_. they think a good teacher should be knowledgeable. _, He should be strict with the students. I think a good teacher should be
8、patient and take good care of his students.,hat should a good teacher be like?,However,Besides,think differently.,dont think so.,dont really agree.,学生观点到家长观点的过渡句：,两个观点之间的连接词：,Also,Whats more,Tip 1 合理运用连接词或过渡语连句成篇使衔接自然，行文连贯。,A little better !,表并列：and, both and; as well as 表转折：but, yet, however 表因果：be
9、cause, so, as a result 表递进：not onlybut also; whats more 表结果：so that ; such that ; 表先后：First, Second, Third, Next, Finally 表时间：when, while, after, before, as soon as ,ore linking words (连接词),a. A good teacher is supposed to get on well with his students.,b. Its important for a good teacher to get on
10、well with his students.,Tip 2 使用丰富并高级的词汇和句型使文章增色。,A good teacher should get on well with his students. （原句）,c. A teacher who gets on well with his students is certainly welcomed.,定语从句，被动语态,be supposed to,its+adj.+for sb.+to do,固定句型：,语法结构：,A good teacher should be knowledgeable. His class should be l
11、ively and interesting. A good teacher should be strict with his students.,Discussion,和同伴一起讨论，用更优美的句子来表达。（至少两句）,What should a good teacher be like?,Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like. Students think that a good teacher should get on well with them. A
12、lso, he must be able to make the class lively and interesting so that students will have fun learning. However, Parents dont really agree with their kids. They think a good teacher is supposed to be knowledgeable. Besides, its important for a teacher to be strict with the students to help them behav
13、e well. In my opinion, a patient teacher is certainly regarded as a good one by both parents and students. Whats more, he is expected to believe in his students all the time and encourage them to face the difficulties.,. 合理使用连接词/句。,. 使用不同方式表达,. 更丰富高级的词汇和语法。,拼写、时态、标点、主谓一致等,.检,Great !,中考评分标准,第五档（1820分
14、） 包含所有要点，完全完成了试题规定的任务； 有清晰的文本框架，较多的语法和词汇； 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚； 语言基本无误。,第四档（1417分） 基本包含所有要点，遗漏少量次要点，较全面地完成了试题规定的任务； 有较清晰的文本框架，比较多样的语法结构和词汇； 行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚； 语言有少量错误。,第三档（1013分） 包含大多数要点，基本完成了试题规定的任务； 少许语句不通顺，语言错误较多，但不影响整体理解。,第二档（69分） 只包含少数要点，未恰当完成试题规定的任务； 多数语句不完整； 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，语言有较多错误，影响理解
15、。,第一档（05分） 只包含个别要点，未完成试题规定的任务。 多数语句不完整或意思不明，内容不连贯，错误很多。 0分 未能传达给读者任何信息； 写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。,Enjoy being a judge我来做评委,在限定的分钟内，最先给出分数的三位同学中，谁的最接近教师评分？,中考作文选篇（一）得分：_ （二）得分：_,中考作文选篇（一）,教师评分: _,14,.书写不够漂亮； .有少量错误； .缺少丰富的词汇和多样化的语法结构； .表达不够地道，较为Chinglish 。,中考作文选篇（一）,教师评分: _,14,20,教师评分: _,中考作文选篇（二）,（2014年新昌卷作文）你班同学非常喜欢看湖南卫视明星亲子真人秀节目爸爸去哪儿，并关于“什么样的爸爸才是好爸爸”展开了讨论，请你根据下面的表格提示，用英语简要的介绍并表明你自己的观点。 要求：1. 语句通顺、连贯，时态正确。 2. 要写出你的观点，至少2点。 3. 参考词汇： 批评criticize, 为树立榜样set a good example for。 4. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给，不计入字数。,The other day, we had a discussion about what kind of father is a good father. _
